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Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Loved it more soon please!



Author's Response:

Thenk you, love!

Reviewer: maidance (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

i love this! well... not the fact shes a stripper, but... YOU MADE MIKE THE BAD GUY! THANK YOU!!!!! *h*



Author's Response:

hahaha!!! you are most welcome!!! Thank you for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: Rat_girl610 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

i would beat the fuck out of him!!  sorry about the language.  i HATE men like that!!  i would just run his ass over with a car or stab him or something.  STuoid Fucker....sorry lol ranting.  :)  Well love the story hope you update ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

lol i dont mind your language! lol i feel the same way!!!! thank you so much!!! <3<3<3

Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Ouch!

And waiting for the next update :-)



Author's Response:

yay! i'm so glad!!!! <3<3<3 thank you!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

poor bella! everything will get better!



Author's Response:

what's that saying "it must get worse before it gets better?" *giggles* thanks!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Great chapter!!

Author's Response:

thank you!!!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Awesome work!

Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! finalizing my outline as we speak!

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Enjoy This, Cullen

wow poor bella is in deep

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

oh man, i just found this story... and i love it... you have to update quickly... bella has to get away from mike!!! please please update soon!



Author's Response:

YAY!! I love new readers!!! <3<3<3 I'm so glad that you love it and i'll update as soon as possible!!!

Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Great chapter!!! Glad to have you back!!!! :)



Author's Response:

awww thank you so much!!!! <3 <3

Reviewer: rach018 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

PLease update soon!



Author's Response:

Doin my best! <3 thank you!

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

In the next chapter could we maybe have Mike's nuts "accidently" get caught in a blender?  I'm just sayin' I wouldn't object. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! and this wins the award for the best "how mikes ass can be kicked" award. thank you for that i nearly choked laughing so hard! <3<3 don't worry Mike will get his comeuppance!!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

THis time seems to have been worse than any others, Bella, Pete or Kris could think of. Almost a week, in and out of conscience. Bella will try and blame seeing them at the club. They were present in her dreams, yes, but it was all Mike. Sadly she won't accept or face it. She has been damaged pretty badly by several people. 

Now what? Starting a fight in a hospital is never a good idea, neither injuring a patient. So maybe MIke will be taken away from Bella, at least for a while. The staff that had doubts about Bella's injuries got a clear picture of what's really going on. Hopefully something will be done, even if it, for now, is against Bella's wishes.

Glad to have you back, don't be a stranger for so long!!!



Author's Response:

thank you for the amazing in-depth review!!! it's reviews like these that really help me imagine the next chapters (even if i've already outlined them :) ) thank you thank you thank you!!!! <3<3<3<3 I'm glad to be back!

Reviewer: SewinthePast (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

It's painful but in a very needed way for this. Looking forward to the next update.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!!! <3 <3

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

my foots cold... hmm.

can mike be hit by a car?

repeatedly would be preferable.

i like the story, its very dramatic



Author's Response:

your foots cold? huh?

Yes, his ass will be kicked soon :)

Glad you llike it!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you, lovey!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

when in the hell are they going to be in the same room and talk!



Author's Response:

Bella and Eddie? *giggles* oh they'll be in the same room, but talking? *dies laughing*

 

oops, did i give something away? nahhh...

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Wow Mike is such a douche She needs to leave him Like now before he kills her.



Author's Response:

I know, and i want her too so badly... but she can't... it's psychological...  :(

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

im liking this story cant wait itll the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! I've lost my ch 6 outline so i'm trying to find it xD but i'll be writing it soon!!!

Reviewer: westernem (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

wow ok that was an insane chapter, edward or someone needs to get ride of mike asap and help bella out before she kills herself, seriously



Author's Response:

Insane good? or insane bad? lol Yeah don't worry, mike'll get his ass kicked soon..ish... *giggles*

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Wow, Mike is a real piece of work... I can't believe that Bella has fallen so far :(



Author's Response:

Yeah, i'd like to show Mike a thing or two about affection. thank you so much!

Reviewer: ghostgirl18 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

you have to update soon. this chapter took too long to come out and it was sooo good



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I'm workin hard, i'll make sure you dont wait that long again. I greatly apologize!!! <3<3<3

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Down the Rabbit Hole

Great update!!!  How long can Edward dtand back and witness how her life and gone down the tubes since he left.... will he step in?  I hope so!



Author's Response:

I'm asking him that myself. You know how stubborn he is. I might have to beat it out of him *cackles* with whips, floggers, clamps....*trails off* heh, did i go too far? *giggles*

 

Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: jendill (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:19 PM · On: The Runaway

just stumbled upon this and love it! So creative. Hope to see an update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you!!! Ch 5 is close to being posted! hopefully by tomorrow!

Reviewer: ju007 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 04:19 PM · On: The Runaway

Love this story!
can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!!! Ch 5 is close to being posted! hopefully by tomorrow!

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