looking forward to more 

Oh snap! Can hardly wait for the next chapter!

ooh, very good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I like the insight into Edward's head. His mind is on his mate, and anything else is either a threat or an obstacle. I hope he can see past that and allow Alice and Emmett to help him! Please update soon!

This is neat!  I'm very anxious to see how it goes when they come together.  Thanks for the update!

I've been reading breathlessly the whole afternoon. Great story, keep it up! (and coming ;) )

I really have to know what happens next and if Edward will become sane again. (he will, won't he??)

9/10 because sometimes the order of events is a bit confusing when told by different people...

Bella's ill.  Carlisle and Esme make a good team when it comes to out thinking their guards.  The Cullen siblings with the wolves are closing in to Oscar's underground hideout.  Edward is completely wild.  fighting with Jasper with the name of Bella the only thing that makes Edward stop with his fury.  Edward's only goal is getting to his mate.  Anything in his path had just better watch out.  He's not afraid to maim, destroy, or kill anyone or anything that blocks him from reaching his Bella.

I know I haven't reviewed before, but this story is one of my favorites. It keeps it within the rules of Meyer's world while stepping a bit outside to give it a unique twist. A truly enthralling story! Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Would you ever consider formatting this so that readers can download it for free? Maybe in ebook format?

Oh Boy! Thank you so much for the new chapter! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story and have been anxiously awaiting more of it. I look forward to more and more of it. It is such a heartbreaking, yet hopeful story. I just love it and cannot wait to see where you take us next. It is always fun and interesting to read.

This is in my Top 3 favorite Twilight fanfiction stories. It is so well written and has such an intricate plotline and has so much in it, so many details and scenarios, yet ties together so nicely. You are doing excellent work with this story!

I am already looking forward to the next chapter! Hope it will be soon! :)

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so guess he locked him in for his protection?!  is Bella turning like edward? thanks for updating! it seems like none of my other favorites are....

Riveting.   Eager to know what Edward would do next. Update soon.

Wow.  You're keeping the tension high, but we're getting somewhere!  Very interesting!  :)  Thanks for the update!

Enjoyed the twist on Eclipse. Having Edward taken away with promise to never hurt Bella.  Took a lot for Paul to see that Oscar was just a crazed sadist monster before he helped to release Edward three years later.  Now the Spanish influenza has been reentered into society. Edward being the carrier.  Bella trying to forget Edward and move on with new existence in Florida.  She wasn't doing such a great job.  With call from Alice that she had visions again of Edward, had Bella looking for Edward as well.  Once Edward located, Bella traveled across the country to Vancouver. Edward was restored to human again, but had lost majority of current memories.  Was only remembering his human memories.  Knew Bella in his dreams and nightmares of Oscar and his tortures. I have to say I hate Oscar.  He is one sick individual. As Bella and Edward renew their relationship and their love was beautiful. Now that Oscar has his little band of shifters, werewolves, and his sick obsession in defeating vampires and his experiments on them he's in for a downfall.  He was changed by werewolves.  Nothing to do with vampires at all. His hatred for what he did to his wife or his own change is against werewolves not vampires or tribal members changing into wolves due to vampires in the area. He wants to create his own little army of freaks to do his bidding.  Only thing he didn't plan on was messing with Edward.  He thought Edward would be complacent, but that was before he threatened his mate, Bella. When he decided to have Bella delivered to his compound to further experiments or research with her due to changes in her system he broke with the agreement to Edward.  Now Edward has already thrown apart 2 of his shifters, killed Sue in werewolf form, would have killed Jacob if he didn't shout his thoughts at him that Bella was in danger from Oscar. Will and Dr Young with their samples doing further testing.  Paul has come back to realize that the threat isn't the Cullens it's Oscar and his sick experiments and plans.  He informed Edward that Sue was the fourth hidden werewolf ready to take over Forks and the reservation.  Oscar has no respect for human life which is what Paul was raised with prior to his change. Now the idea of his mother being changed into a werewolf wasn't part of the deal either. So he's been imprisoned as well as Bella in the compound. At least the calvary is coming together the Cullens with the wolves are together.  Looking forward to Edward rage at Oscar and his pack of misfits especially when it's discovered Bella has been imprisoned below inside.  He's going to so lose it and start ripping apart bodies. I'm looking so forward to it.