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Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Instinct
So happy to get the email alert for the update (and happy that there's another on the way).
Love the chapter, love the story! Sue x
Author's Response: Thank you for being such an awesome reviewer. I know that I'm taking a whille to write these chapters. Hopefully, with this holiday I'll be able to get a couple of chapters ahead, so I don't leave you guys alone for such a long time.
Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Instinct
Bow chicka wow wow, Edward! That was a nice change from the norm. Loved the chapter and I'm glad there's a semblance of memory there. What's with the pain in his arm? Is whatever that vamp did to him starting to...wear off? If it does, will he get his memory back? All I can do is sit back and wait...and hope. Update soon, I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I thought it was about time that Bella and Edward had some fun. I'm working on the chapter now. So, I'm going to try really hard to have it ready for next week.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Instinct
Good chapter. Like that Edward's relationships are starting to form. Glad that he and Bella are getting close. I especially like that he and Jacob are friends.
Author's Response: I really like the relationship between Jake and Edward too. I always liked Jake and didn't like that people were an either or fan.
Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Instinct
Luv it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Instinct
Hmmmm Edward is talking :) YAY! progress and fluff and angst and a little progress. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Things should start to get clearer and fluffier from here on out.
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Instinct
I am so glad you updated this story. I was beginning to think you had abandoned it and I was feeling rather out of sorts with you. I LOVE you story and can't wait to see where you are taking us.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will not abandon the story. I have an ending, so I will finish it. I promise!
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Instinct
LOVE! Update soooooon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm so happy that people are loving it!
Reviewer: evelynvm29 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Instinct
it was a good chapter. I m glad that Edward decided to trust someone.
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought it would be interesting for Edward to trust Jacob and Jasper instead of just Alice.
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Family
love your story! but getting very distressed waiting for an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what is the hold up? Going to have to go back and re-read last few chapters to know whats going on.
Author's Response: I know. There is a chapter in the cue right now waiting to be posted. So, hopefully my Beta will think that it is a good enough quality and post it this week. I've been CRAZY busy doing my masters and teaching. I'm on holidays for a couple of weeks now, so I should be able to get a couple of chapters ahead. I hate that I'm leaving you guys hanging. I'm pretty excited about this chapter coming up though, so hopefully it will make you guys happy.
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Family
Love this one, but I'm getting a bit inpatient with Edward. I have this hope of him suddenly seeing something that makes him remember it all. I miss him!
Author's Response: Thanks. I have a chapter waiting in the cue, which I think you'll like. I hope that it gets posted soon because I'm excited about it.
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Family
Its a great chapter! I love what you are doing with the story!! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. My next chapter is with my beta, so whenever she gets the chance to edit it. I'll submit it to Twilighted. Thanks for sticking with me.
Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Family
Welcome back. I was so happy to get email telling me that you had updated because I love this story so much, it just grabbed me from the start and it is always worth the wait.
I love the way that you are slowly unravelling what happened to Edward, giving us little clues here and there while developing the relationships.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sue x
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I'm back after a harrying few weeks of papers and marking galore. I think things will be calm for a couple of weeks. I have a chapter into my beta now, so hopefully I'll be getting it to you soon.
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:46 PM · On: The Great Escape
That was a beautiful scene with Ed & Bella
Author's Response: Thank you. I was really happy with it.
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Fear, Guilt, and Illness
Haha! You got the Vancouver Sun right! ;o)
Author's Response: I looked it up on the internet :)
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:28 PM · On: And It All Came Crashing Down
Too short!
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:22 PM · On: The Fight
Wow! That's an interesting point to take this turn! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Family
I can't wait 2 see how this works......great story Youngmei
Author's Response: Thanks. I really love the feedback! :)
Reviewer: sagajunkie (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Family
I am so glad that you updated. I really like this story. I have so many questions but figure that they'll be answered soon enough - like - Who is the guy that 'experimented' on Edward? Is any part of Edward still a vamp or is he all human? Does his memory come back? and if so, Will he remember all the things the vamp Edward remembered or will he have to start all over again?
The list continuess but I'll just wait to see if any of my many questions are answered.
Until next update
Author's Response: I'm going to try to update more frequently now that I have a lulll in my graduate program. All these questions will be answered eventually. I try to unravel the mystery a little bit at a time.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Family
i love this story,i hope the next story is coming up soon!
Author's Response: I'm going to try to get another chapter up this weekend.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Healing
I'm sorry you don't have many reviews. It really is a good story, so don't let the lack of reviews make you question that. I think it's just that if a story isn't updated on a steady, regular, (read frequent) basis then readers lose interest and move onto other stories. At least that's what happens with me. I do go back and read your chapters when you eventually post them and I try to review everything I read, but I just think it's more happenstance when the chapters aren't updated as frequently. May be just my opinion, or why I don't review as much as I should, but I did want to say something... I do love your take on things and I find myself wondering if Edward will ever remember Bella fully and become a vampire again, if he isn't one now? I also wonder what the heck happened to him while he was gone, but perhaps we'll know in time.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I completely understand that when there aren't regular updates people lose interest. It happens to me too. Life stuff is slowing me down though,so I don't have as much time as before. But I'm not giving up and I'll keep posting. I have all of the chapters mapped out, so I won't be dropping the story. Thanks again and I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: AngelByEve (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Family
Hmm...I don't know what I think about this chapter, and thats not a negative notion. I just don't know...lol. I was happy, though, to see an update. The interaction between everyone during the roasting of the marshmellows was pleasant. I, however, hope that Edward doesn't totally retreat after getting a little um..surprised? by Emmett's playful water activities. :) I'm eager to see your next post. As always, I encourage you to keep moving forward with it!
-Kristin
Author's Response: He is not going to totally retreat. He is becoming more comfortable with them, but it is going to have highs and lows. They all just need a little time to bond together away from all the craziness that is happening in the world.
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Family
Great story so far!! Continue!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to get another chapter up soon.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Family
I am so addicted to this story. I get so excited to get the e-mail alert. Edward is so lost. I don't balme him for freaking out. He doesn't understand what has happened to him. He feels like he was ripped from his old life and he misses that. He is drawn to Bella, but he doesn't really KNOW how. He needs to be with her, but part of him blames her for what has happened to him as well. He is stuck in the middle of his own internal tug of war. He is weary to trust anybody. I love this. I can't wait to read more. This was an excellent chapter, as always!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hopefully, things will get easier for Edward in the next couple of chapters as he starts to become more comfortable around all of them.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Family
It was great to see the Cullens interact with Edward around the campfire and stir his interest in their life with Carlisle and Esme. I loved the sexual attraction that was there after Edward and Bella saw each other in their swimming suits for the first time and after they fell into the water. Too bad Edward was spooked and left. I really love how Alice explained to Bella how she needed to change her perspective and think of Edward's memory loss more like a sickness and try to remember that he is still acts like Edward.
I really love this story and wish you could update more often.
Author's Response: I'm really really really going to try to have a chapter up this weekend. I need to send a chapter to my beta tomorrow and after she edits it I'll post it to Twilighted.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Healing
Awwww, so a wolf was in on the stealing of Edward...that sucks. I feel so sorry for Bella. And Edward really too.
Author's Response: Yep. A wolf was involved....
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