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Reviews For A Brave New World
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 04:23 AM · On: The Monster Inside

loved the chapter 

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 09:07 PM · On: The Monster Inside

Oscar is making me almost as crazy as he is. Carlisle and Esme have to get away from him, and soon!. We also need to know who is going to wolf out and kill the whole Quileute tribe in two days.  What a damn mess! I feel so bad for Edward, he's going through hell and nothing seems to help him. Please find a way to fix him so he and Bella can be together, where thay belong!

Reviewer: DarkDiamonds (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 07:20 PM · On: The Fight

Interesting begining. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store. ^_^

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 01:25 PM · On: The Monster Inside

I'm glad we know more now about what went on while Edward was gone.  I hope he can keep these memories and they don't cycle in and out as he goes through the vamp/wolf changes.  But how did he end up in the hospital?  And how is Bella doing in her hospital?  I hope her fever is down because that last chapter was sick.

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 12:25 PM · On: The Monster Inside

Oh, wow.  Poor Edward.  Hopefully, Oscar has no idea as to what's going on with Bella- which I imagine could counteract his efforts by producing an antidote and/or a child that can stand up to what he's been doing...  and I imagine that Edward will turn out all the stronger for it as well.

Neat chapter!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 11:48 AM · On: The Monster Inside

Well it was a pleasant surprise to find an update to this story & even more exciting to find out what happened to Edward. Now, how is the family going to fix it.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 06:25 AM · On: The Monster Inside

Hi, I am very confused, not by this chapter but by the one before, that I re read to help my memory. It is the part in Italics (a dream of Bella or whatever). It seems to have to do with the characters of another story, not this onw. One where Bella, Edward and Charlie are humans and have to cope with an epidemic) What does it mean?

Author's Response:

It`s a dream which is caused by Bella trying to work out thngs in her head. In her dream, they are all human, but the flu is still killing people. She sees people who are infected like zombies (Embry`s comment in the previous chapter). In her dream, she seems immune to the disease and when she wakes up the doctor says that there is something strange about her blood, so it means that Bella and her doctor thinks that there is something different about her and Bella is beginning to think that it might mean that she is immune. 

I see that it is confusing now. I could have explained it better. But stick with me, things are going to be happening fast and furious from here on out. I hope this helps!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 04:41 AM · On: The Monster Inside

Finally Edward remembers!  But at such a cost.... He has suffered terribly.  There are so many layers to this story and there is so much still being uncovered.  Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Great story!!! I was caught up with work and just now getting back to it.  You are doing a fabulous job with this.


Cant wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: vamp1975 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

NOOO you can't do that to us I neeed to know

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Wow.  This chapter had me on the edge of my seat!  This story is so gripping!  I feel all fired up now.  I can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: nurseryteacher (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Well, this was worth waiting for, what a great chapter!

Reviewer: lizardbeth3 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:20 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

In love with this story!!! So many things that could happen.

Some thoughts; Edward will stay human but change into a vampire during full moons or provacation. Pregnant Bella - more of a hope because I love Dadward.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

so glad to hear your feeling close to normal. (whatever that is...)    this was a great chapter! surprises at every turn. i cant wait till next time to see were your taking us with this fabulous adventure.  

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: lizardbeth3 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 03:01 AM · On: Patient Zero

Wow, I so needed a story like this. I think Edward's emotions were always overlooked in the series, and how much it especially that scene hurt him.

I love that Edward is "human" at least for now, can't wait to see how this happened and what will happen next.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Memories and Nightmares

So she's a little delusional with the dreams huh?  Almost lost me there thinking she was having visions of the future after she kept seeing things that had actually happened in the past. 

Reviewer: Libby219 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

It was nice to get Jasper's POV of the events in the woods and the reason why he stopped Edward from getting to Bella. I wonder how much of his own thirst and anger was he projecting onto Edward. I am hoping Edward is okay enough to see Bella in the hospital. 

I am very interested in what is happening with Bella. I enjoyed the quotes from Edward as she slipped out of consciousness, though I am curious what information that we were supposed to get from her dream. I thought, at first, the first one was showing through Bella and Edward what happened with his parents, but there was no teenage child in their household. I think that the hospital scene was to show that she has the cure to the flu in her bloodstream. I look forward to the answer being revealed. 

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

You're scaring me, girl! That was an awful set of nightmares Bella was having! The only good part seems to be in the fact of her blood being different than everyone else's. Jasper fighting the werewolves was exciting and scary. Nearly as much as Edward's reaction to Bella's injuries! Are you, by any chance, getting close to wrapping up this story? I'm still hanging on by my fingertips! Hope you feel up to writing more soon!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Wow! What a nightmare! 

Reviewer: Black Poyzen (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

its ironic that u recapped for us and now im lost, but i totally loved the chapter thank you! keep it coming

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares


Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 03:32 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Very interesting chapter! looking forward to the rest of the story!

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Memories and Nightmares

Hmmm.  That's interesting.  What's up with her blood?  Which wolf on the reservation is helping Oscar?  Lots of questions.  Look forward to getting more answers.

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