Wow!!! Wow!!! Wow!!! Definitely adding this as a fav!!!! Hungrily waiting for more!!!!!!

Woh????? Edward a werewolf?????? Talk about a twist!!!! Very suspenseful & I love it!!!!!!

Amazing twist to the original!!! I absolutely love it!!!!!

looking forward to the next hcapter 

Can't wait to see who the 4 are and if they can be stopped without killing them.

Author's Response:

I wrote on the weekend, so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. You won't find out next chapter because it is Bella's chapter, but the one after will be a doozey!

Holy shit..... This deal just gets worse all the time!  I squeal in glee when I get the update then I always end up on the floor in anxiety over how it ends!  I am too emotionally invested in this!  I love it, though!  I am eager to read more!

Author's Response:

I know the chapter was intense! It was even stressful to me and I'm the one writing it! I love that you're emotionally invested in my story!

Interesting turn... :)

i am really glad you are back.this story deserves an ending.since i lost touch with it i read it all from the start,so my review would be for the story so far.once again i find my self not capable to forgive bella,truth is i want to smack her ,jacob ,oscar ,paul all off them.bella seems to repeat her mistakes all over and  though i hate jacob and i think his thick skull  was to blame for what happened to edward(when they are on camping he remembers how his thoughts tortured edward and he grins even if he knows that he was part to blame for what happened instad of crawiling to his hole) aidin did nothing wrong.he tried to help bella and she allowed one more person to be hurt with her inability to be true with her self.i really hope she will be less swallow as the story goes,i know she is been through a lot but she must pull her self together and for once to be someone edward deserves(if this is even possible).on the other hand your edward is a master piece. the way you describe his feelings ,his  thoughts ,the way he reacts to the world changing around him,it has me in awe.for me your story is an edward story.it analyses edward in the most amazing way,all of him human,vampire, lover, son and the list goes on.i really love your edward.i also loved the way you painted jasper.

p.s as much i love your story ,your health is more important so take your time and be well.sorry for my english writting skills, i don`t get to practice them a lot

Author's Response:

Thank you for such a wonderful review. I loved Edward in the books, but I always felt like there was so much to him that was never explored. Now that I've been writing Edward's story for a while, I'm loving him more and more. It's going to be hard to let this story go when it's done!

Well, we finally know what happened to Edward and why. Oscar is sick man and his monologuing shows that he does not value the lives that he has taken to try to find the cure for his wife. He has truly lost his humanity and compassion for his fellow man. Oscar reminds me of Iceman in the Batman series. He was scientist who did evil things to get what he needed to cure his wife.

I am glad that Carlisle now understands what Oscar is attempting to do. I hope he stands up to him and refuses to take his deal. 

I am glad that Edward regained his memory and was able to tell Jasper what happened to him. I feel really bad for what Edward had to go through and how Oscar starved him to the point that he drank from that man who had been drugged. I was surprised that Oscar had someone keep tabs on Bella to torture Edward further with that information. I can understand his decision in the end to take his life at that point when he saw no way out. I worry what will happen to Edward with this upcoming change.

I look forward to seeing how the Cullens fight back against Oscar and his men.

loved the chapter 

Interesting begining. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store. ^_^

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm hope you enjoy the rest.

Oh, wow.  Poor Edward.  Hopefully, Oscar has no idea as to what's going on with Bella- which I imagine could counteract his efforts by producing an antidote and/or a child that can stand up to what he's been doing...  and I imagine that Edward will turn out all the stronger for it as well.

Neat chapter!  Thanks for writing!

Hi, I am very confused, not by this chapter but by the one before, that I re read to help my memory. It is the part in Italics (a dream of Bella or whatever). It seems to have to do with the characters of another story, not this onw. One where Bella, Edward and Charlie are humans and have to cope with an epidemic) What does it mean?

Author's Response:

It`s a dream which is caused by Bella trying to work out thngs in her head. In her dream, they are all human, but the flu is still killing people. She sees people who are infected like zombies (Embry`s comment in the previous chapter). In her dream, she seems immune to the disease and when she wakes up the doctor says that there is something strange about her blood, so it means that Bella and her doctor thinks that there is something different about her and Bella is beginning to think that it might mean that she is immune. 

I see that it is confusing now. I could have explained it better. But stick with me, things are going to be happening fast and furious from here on out. I hope this helps!