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Reviewer: Gabriella-Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
that is so sad.please continue its really good and you make sense just a few errors but on top of that this is awesome.seriously. i love this story. PLEASE CONTINUE.=]
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
PLEEEEASE let Bella have a new heart... oh and... Lemon, lemon, LEEEMMMOOONNN!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
That be hot at the end!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
Love this story. It's so nice to read how loving and protective that he is with her.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
oh this is so sweet but so darn sexy at the same time. i loved when she kicked mike i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
They are moving pretty quickly, but when you don't have much time, you have to make the most of it.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
GAH... no... you can't just leave it there!! Update soon, please? So did Bella really let Edward win the race??
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
Great story I love that she let him win ha
Reviewer: Cullenbabe86 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
I absolutely love your story! I really hope that they find a heart in time...
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
I hope she makes it. Nice writing
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 12 Racing Bella
Wow, that was a fast update. Lol. I'm reviewing!!!! See? Can we have the lemon now? Please?
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
I am glad that she isn't getting worse. Also, I think racing is like foreplay to them ;)
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
OHHHH... how exciting. Bella races Edward. Can't wait. Great chapter by the way. This is fastly becoming one of my favourite fan fics
Author's Response: Thank you that means a lot to me. Since there are so many great stories here. Check out my other ones. Thanks
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
I'm glad Jasper took things as well as he did and that he knows this isn't just some fling for Edward. I'm still a little curious as to why Bella wants to keep their real relationship from the crew. That doesn't make total sense to me especially since Jasper now knows. I like her doctor. He seems very nice and maybe just maybe Carlisle will be able to help her. I'm really hoping Bella doesn't die at the end of your story. I like happy endings. I somehow don't think Edward is too happy that Bella is going to be the one racing him after everything that just happened. Great Chapter. :)
Author's Response: I think keeping the romance a secret just adds to the fun and plus its less pressure on Bella with everything else is going on. Don't worry everyone will find out soon. Thanks.
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
This is such a great story, and I love that you update so quickly. Some take so long to update that I end up losing interest. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I have so far 26 chapters and I am submitting 2 to 3 chapters at a time. It takes time to validate. But it's worth it they help with my crappy grammar. But I'm getting better. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
Perfect. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you loved it.
Reviewer: Cullen-rated (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
cool i really like it poor bella/edward....
Author's Response: I'm glad. Updating soon.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
Thats gonna be good update soon
Author's Response: Thank you and it should be up soon.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
Oooh nice... I hope between Dr. Platt and Dr. Cullen, they'll figure something out to help Bella. Can't wait for their head-to-head race!
Author's Response: I had fun writing Racing Bella chapter. Hope you like it. Should be up soon.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 Race
Uh oh... their real feelings are out in the open now! Who caught them? :)
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 Doctor
They're gonna race each other! Oh-oh...is he gonna let her win? That bugs me when guys do that! Please don't let him. Oh, and I so thought that Alice caught them but hey, Jasper and Alcie practically are the samer person.:)
Author's Response: If Edward lets her win to 'protect' her she'll kick his ass. Just wait until you see how Alice finds out? Update should be up soon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Cullen-rated (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 Heart
its good,but sad,but still good,i like reading it,its ecapturing(if that is even a word but i think you know what im trying to say =)
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 10 Race
Really sweet story. I love the tenderness between Edward and Bella and I feel like you're doing a good just with their emotions and what not. Keep it up! Can't wait to see who caught them ^_^
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 10 Race
this is turning out to be a good story. Keep it up! :)
Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 10 Race
wow. Mike is really quite nasty in this story. I'm glad Edward beat him, but what he did to Bella... *shakes head* That was just...well I hope Emmett had fun "reminding him" to leave Bella alone.
Hopefully nothing is going wrong with Bella. I liked how Edward "declared" he was her boyfriend. That was sweet.
I was wondering when they were going to get caught and by who. I'm kind of hoping it's Jasper since he's been the one insisting Edward keep his hands off her.
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