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Reviewer: xx_bella_xx_cullen_xx (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
I enjoyed how she accepted the wedding proposal, even though Edward didn't propose, but telling Alice she had a wedding to plan for. It ended the chapter beautifully. I enjoyed the bar fight quite more than I should've xD Y'know, except for Bella starting to bleed. If I was her, and Jacob accidentally elbowed me while he was trying to throw a punch at Edward, as soon as I was conscious I'd try to er- hurt him. Badly. xD
Reviewer: perfectshadeofdarkblue (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
that was the perfect way for bella to accept the "proposal." can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
YAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!!
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Awww! He didn't ask and she didn't answer, but they're getting married! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
That was the best proposal I've ever seen! He didn't even really ask and she never really said yes.....amazing!
Reviewer: Half-vamp Kiki (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
I have just finished reading the entire story thus far and I must say, you have a talent for writing. :) I love the original and fresh ideas on which this story was written on. I mean, I knew that Edward liked speed but to make him a race car driver? I would have never thought of it. And even better is the idea of Bella as a genius. I've seen it done but not in mechanics, I like it. If making her a wicked genius wasn't enough, you also made her confident. Weak, needy Bella begins to get annoying after a while. So once again, I commend you. Please update soon. I have high hopes for the end of this story. :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Aww...they are getting married!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Yay they are getting married. Im so exited./Update soon
Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
yay!!!!!!!! wedding!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!! WEDDING WEDDING WEDDING WEDDING!!! Wow, I didn't see that one coming, I know you said shocks but, wow!
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Oh my gosh! I am in love with this story! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Oh a wedding that will be perfect!!! I love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
Awesome! I know that boys get in fights, but Newton should really get a clue, and I am glad that Jacob finally listened. And it was pretty funny to think about planning a wedding when neither of them actually asked the other yet. Great job. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
I love confident Bella. Such a nice change.
Reviewer: LeahKnox (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
I loved this part the ending was unbelievable....i can't wait for the next chapter....
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 19 Barfight
wait huh??? he didn't even ask her"officially". lol I guess there is bella taking controll again. lol this is great!
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
Hahahha Mike got what he deserved, his radiator going out like that. I think also that it would be really interesting to see Edward try to fight Jacob, only because Jacob is like twice Edward's size.
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
this Edward is so cute! Other Edwards aren't as sure about their feelings, but this one is! I love him! And how excited are you about the movie we've all been waiting for coming out in less than 2 weeks??? :)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 17 Secret and a Bluff
ooh i knew this was goign to be a heart breaking chapter... i cant wait to read the next one. i hope mike gets what he deserves. LOL
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
These kind of bets are always funny. I love watching them sweat. Lol. Still way excited for the Playboy shoot. :) It ought to be loads of fun. ; )
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
Love it!! Please keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: xx_bella_xx_cullen_xx (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
God. Love it. <3 Bella Bebe
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
Awesome! I love how confident and playful this Bella is. Like her much more than pathetic, moaning Bella.
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
Great story! I cant wait to see what happens next! I hope Bella Lives!
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 Testosterone
I love.love.love. it! Continue please!
Author's Response: Thank you. Updating in the next day or so. Thanks!
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