Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 27 A Message
Ok, ignore my previous review, Edward's stopped being a douche. Love this so much, it almost hurts!
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 A Message
Love your story. Just wanted to say that I think Bella is being pretty unfair here. Edward isn't being perfect, either, but it doesn't seem fair for her to keep making negative comments about her death and expecting Edward to be fine with it. It also doesn't seem fair that she is controlling everything in their relationship. She decided to leave and she will decide when to come back and Edward doesn't get a say. I hope she realizes that she's being unfair, too!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 26 Have a Heart BPOV
No! No! Edward, stop being such a douche! He said it himself that he loved Jamie, why's he being such an idiot? Does he not understand that Bella's just being Bella? Argh! Damn you Edward, can you get back to normal already?
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 26 Have a Heart BPOV
It's still so sad that she's leaving. *sniffles* it's harder the second time around *pouts* Their love is strong. I hope/know everything will work out. Great writing! Jace
Author's Response: Thank you Jace. *typing quickly* It's really kind of you to read my stories. *editing almost done* I think I can update really soon. *looks good, no more tears* Maybe in a day or two. *submitting now* LOL
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 23 Give me a Ring and M&Ms
You are so kind to update so frequently. I really love this story.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Oh my goodness! You are killing me with the cliffy! Your story is awesome. I have to admit that I think that Bella is going a little overboard with her decision. I truly expected Edward to act EXACTLY the way he did when she rejected the heart that was for her. I do understand her desire to give it to Jamie. Hard chapter to swallow but I am looking forward to the next!
Reviewer: iamcuterthanu (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
You made me cry! not that thats hard because Im a freaking baby but I swear if this story doesnt have a happy ending I might have to hunt you down and make you retype it.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
That was gut-wrenching, but good. I don't hate you.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Two weeks???
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 Tricks and Details
Glad for the truce. Yeah!
Reviewer: Enya (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
haha. I dont' see why we can hate you? You update so fast I can barely keep up with the reading. I love it. Anyway, this chapter was an emotional overload. It's kinda nice that their fairy tale relationship comes with rocks and bumps like any real relationship and that Bella is strong enough to resist Edward and go off on her own to decide her own fate. He'll just have to suffer through it. I'm sure they'll turn out even better in the end. Anyway, good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
wow! that was just well powerful. i dont know what else to say. i cant wait for the next update. i can see where you are going wtih this!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
They needed some drama. I love the lovey-dovey, but some drama was needed.
Reviewer: LizzieCullenx (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 What the ?
DUH! of course i thought she was a virgin hehe that was good though. Sorry I haven't commented before i've just been so entranced that I wanted to just read on which i'm about to do right about.....NOW! Thanks this is really good I LOVE JAZZ! ;P Cullenx.
Author's Response: If you like this story check out my other fan fic called Fame and Fate and anyone that read this story loved Subject: Edward Cullen AKA The Womanizer.
Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Wow! Well I do HATE that this happened, but I totally understand the way they both feel. It's so understandable that Edward would be totally overwhelmed with emotion. He's scared, angry, in pain. He's been holding back so many bad feelings. I also understand Bella's hurt and her fear for what will happen to her if he does die. You did an excellent job with this chapter. Although it's painful to read, it's not annoying (I get so annoyed with angst when it's caused by someone just being stupid). I hate thinking about them being apart for two weeks. Maybe they won't last that long? Poor Edward. Please update soon.
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Wow, I SO did not expect that Bella would give up a heart if it came her way. And I really did not expect Edward's harsh reaction. He kind of acted like a prick. I'm glad they're taking some time to think about things, but I do hope they still end up together :-) I hope you can update soon.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
she left him.. and i want to cry!! please update soon!! i love this story!
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Well yeah I am sort of angry she gave it up But she is still next up on the list so she could make it. Also leaving made me angry but maybe its for the beest. Update soon
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
ohhh, no hate mail for you! Idk about others but I could not be mad at you for doing that in the chapter. It needed to happen, they needed to really fight for real. Or else they would never really appreciate what they've got. It is imperative that things not always go smoothly. That never happens. You are great!
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Wow...that was pretty intense, but it was good.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
*lip trembles, eyes water. Sniffle* I is sad. *turns to you, tilts head questioningly* why? This is a great chapter, the dynamic of emotion is amazing. I can feel the love radiating out of Edward and Bella for that matter and it is very very sweet. Keep up the great writing, Jace
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
No hate mail, it was a sad chapter but I still loved it!!! I love that Bella is leaving for 2 weeks, I can't wait to see what is going to happen!!
Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
well, wow, what should i say... but i dooooo believe that everything will turn out just fine. am i right????? keep going, i love this story!!!! ;)
Reviewer: DeltaSwan90 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
Oh such good drama! No hate mail from me! I loved it! I hope they can work it out...
Reviewer: swtypie8705 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
wow i didn't see that coming! but i love it.. i hope everything works out between them!
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