Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
wow! edward is doing great in the races!
hot celebratory sex! hot!
and whoo hoo!! the wedding is coming up!! so exciting!!
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Nice chapter, I just knew he was going to win the Sprint Cup. Jacob is finally getting a girlfriend? Good, he needs to move on.
Can't wait for the wedding.
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
love the story. i hope there is more soon.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Oh my! You weren't joking about a horny Edward! LOL I can't wait to see what will come next. :)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I seriously am so thrilled that you updated this story, I kept checking, in the hopes that you would.
I'm sad that they're thinking of doing surrogacy, just because...well...I wanted them to have the chance to have a real baby together, for Bella to experience that. It's like Edward's accepting that she'll never be able to do that.
=[ I feel like everytime Bella gets hopeful she gets equal parts hopeless...if that makes sense.
I can't wait for your next update. No joke. Please make it soon!!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Yay, they won! Now its time to get married!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
I loved this chapter! That kind of sucks that Bella can't actually have kids, but it's nice to know that they have options. And Go Edward! It sounded like he had a great race :-) I'm also glad that Jacob now seems preoccupied with someone else...so he doesn't have to keep bugging Bella all the time LOL
Update soon! I can't wait for the wedding.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
so loving and so hot!! love this!!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Mm, Edward... he's a god in the bedroom. I want one.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 33 Sprint Cup
Liked the chapter--hard to figure out what part I liked best, so I'll just say I liked it. Nice job.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Just so you know, I'm totally printing this out so I can obsess about your story some more. I think you shoved "There are Worse Things I Could Do" and "My Sacrifice" out of the 'Agi's favorite stories' list.
I am so in love with this story!! You've done a fabulous and amazing job!!! Seriously. This is a truly creative concept (I mean keeping Bella frail with a heart condition? Genius?!) and I LOVE it.
For the third time I will say this, if you wrote this and it had nothing to do with Twilight, I'd totally buy it!!!!!! Even still, I'd buy it!!
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.
Can't wait can't wait can't wait for your next update =D (this story made me feel ever so much better about being stuck at home with the world's worst cold)!
Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
WHAT THE F*CK!?
Ahhhhhhhhhhh
Wait don't tell me he has AB Negative
PLease Please update really soon.
I love what Bella did to Tanya
I just loved it.
Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
**GAAAAAAASSSSPPPPP** eeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppp what happens now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????? aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Oh NO!! Derek!! This was a beautifully written chapter and so sweet. But the evil cliffie is just that...evil!! Not Derek!
Great writing!
Jace
yes I have a love affair with the exclaimation point tonight...*chuckles*
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
How fun! I want to go to Disneyland!!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
He had a heart attack? Oh no...geez, if something happens to him, then what happens to Bella and the team?
I just loved their day in Disneyland. Emmett sounded like quite the troublemaker--rifling through Bella's lingerie drawer, falling out of the boat on that ride, etc...love it! And of course, I loved Edward and Bella's naughty behavior on some of those rides. Hot damn, that's always a surefire way to spice things up :-)
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
what a fun chapter.. up until the end, of course..
loved all their adventures at the parks! i'd love to do all that stuff.. and the "other" stuff. ;)
oh derek.. i hope he's okay...
great chapter!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
WOW! Thanks for a great story. I read it all in one sitting. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Very good!! can't wait to see how Derek is, is he going to make it?
Reviewer: Twimoon (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
OMG .
bella and Edward ahha .
great chapter !
update soon!
i love your writing !
=]
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Love this story ...can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Oh noes! Poor Bella....
Cute chapter! I don't think I'll be able to ride those two rides ever again...atleast not with out my hubby..
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
ooh i was not expecting that. great chapter and i cant wait for the next update.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
The day was adorable, but that last part was sad. What a cliffie! Nice writing.
Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 32 Mickey and the Goofster
Oh.My.Gosh. I read Fame and Fate and the movie premiere of UP TO SPEED so I am kinda expecting this. But DEREK? :(
Please please update more. I dropped my cooking class today because I need to read this new update!
And I love GOOFSTER!
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