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Reviewer: byoko23 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
OH SHIT! WHAT?!?!?! Did the mom kill herself on purpose???? HOLY SHIT! that was kinda selfish of the mom to do to her daughter if she did.
Author's Response: No she didn't kill herself. Somewhere at the end of Edward's POV the doctors said that the donor was in her early twenties that died of an aneuyrsm.
Erica
Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
yea i kinda guessed when they couldnt get a hold of her.. omg i cried when edward did it was soo sad.. i cant wait to see how everything turns out with the babies and stuff ohh and i love your other story Fame and Fate
Reviewer: lilsourmony (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
HOLY SHIT i didnt expected it to be jamies mother i am so clueless.
i feel bad for jamie now so who looks over her now.
will it be B and E or other gaurdians.
Reviewer: mikimous729 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
omg i'm crying!
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! You gave me CHILLS at the end of the chapter! I was not expecting that!!! Oh my gosh! I love your story and I had tears in my eyes thru the whole chapter!
Update, please update sooooon :-) Awesome chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: greenwoodmama (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
OMG!!!! I haven't stopped crying at all during this chapter!!! I am beyond impressed. I will tell all my friends to read and review!!!!!!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
I had no clue it was going to be Jamie's mom... It was so sad. I cried twice... *sigh* at the same time i am thrilled that Bella finally is getting a heart but sad that it had to be Katie. We'll see what happens next chapter.
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
I love this story.
Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
That was great! Really, it was fantastic. I can't wait to read more! You're evil, leaving it like that. Well, just continue soon! Great great chapter!
Reviewer: hukomuyo (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 22 Amor
I love your fics, really I adore them, i just want to make an observation in the spanish sentences you made, what you said was in a very formal way, I´m mexican, so I should know, nobody speak like that, anless is very very formal and someome you have respect for, or you just met.
for example:
“Pedro esto parece bueno. Le llamaré mañana. Buenas noches.”
it would be better as:
"“Pedro esto suena bien. Te llamaré mañana. Buenas noches.”
and with
“Quiero que usted me haga amor esta noche,”
it sounds cold, like they don´t know each other, so I would recomend using:
“Quiero que me hagas el amor esta noche,”
the word usted it gives of formality,
well I hope it helps, keep up with the good work.
Adriana AKA hukomuyo
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
I'm seriously crying like someone I know died..I'm such a sap. I did love this chapter. I think that the best stories are ones that make you cry. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
I'm usually totally unobservative, but I had no clue at all it would be Katie. What clues did you leave? In this chapter Alice tried to call her and no one answered, but which were the clues in earlier chapters? Poor little Jamie, can Bella and Edward perhaps adopt her? They are the closest thing to family she has now.
The chapter was totally heart-breaking, I had tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. Amazing writing once again1
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
the poem you wrote is beautiful...do I have your permission to use it for my wedding? :)
Thank you!
Reviewer: twilighted4ever (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Loved this chapter! very emotional, i honestly never thought it could be jamies mother, very good though!
Reviewer: JennaLCullen (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
First off, your poem was amazing!!! I must have been completely oblivious throughout this story because I did not catch on that Katie would end up dying. I was a complete mess reading this chapter....so many tears!!!! But it was very good. My heart absolutely broke when Edward broke down. I love the scrapbooking idea and for family to all be apart of it. I was so afraid throughout this thinking she was going to pass before a heart was available. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
OMG!!!! I totally didn't know...I was crying like legit crying once I read the end =( I can't wait for the next chapter=) I love this story and Bella is so BadAss!!!!
Reviewer: wordsofkaos (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
And I cried and I never cry.This story is very well written.My dad gave me a kidney when I was six.Then passed away when I was eight b/c this other kidney shut down.I haven't cried in nearly eleven years and this chapter made me feel it all over again and thats what a brilliant story and writer can should do.Its excellent. I can't wait for more ~Channing
Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
This story is great :) I hope everything works out in surgery.
Update soon!
Love Ruby
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
I loved it. I am in tears. I am sobbing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: soccer clogging mom of 2 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
oh my word, what is going on? Now you must post soon, this is a fantastic story. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: live_love_learn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
grreat great grreat
Reviewer: Riidie (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Wha... you... *snif* more!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Wow, I'm not a crier, but there's tears in my eyes after that chapter. Maybe I'm human after all...or maybe you're awesome and have the ability to make robots feel emotions....
Either way, good work :)
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
oh my god!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
Lovely poem. :). And I did figure out it was Katie, but not til this chapter!
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