Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
Ooh! I'm so glad you're still working on this gem! You have so many stories going and I just LOVE anything you update! This was so cute! Hopefully we get some lemony outtakes too ;)
Love ya!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
Wow, what a treat! This outtake was really hilarious! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 2 Driver
Bella is BOSS! I like it ;]
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
This was really cute and funny! Loved it!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 40 Outtake 1
OMG that was so cute
Reviewer: AuroraJean (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
awwwww!!!!! this is such a cute ending!! I most def wouldn't have thought of a better ending if I tried, let alone write it:) nice job overall too. you kept me entertained and hooked throughout the story, and you be extra brownie points for originality:) haha . I'm looking forward to any more stories you write soon:)
Reviewer: pasha (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!1 U R INCRDIBLE!!!!!! I cryed alot in thi schapter. Im cryng as i write this. God bless U!!
Reviewer: sonya1985 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
Wow...I really loved this story. ;)
Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 36 Scrapbook
This story really got to me. I have been a fan of Twilighted for over 6 months and you are the only one that made me cry. Not just tearing, but actual tears dripping down my face. This is what did it:
"I dropped my knees and let it out. My father clung to me. My mother sobbed beside me. I sobbed and shook and prayed. I knelt beside Alice and touched her tummy and I cried. I cried because Bella should be carrying them. She should be the one creating their first baby album.
I cried because the love of my life was in her bed, her life hanging by a thread. I cried because her life was slipping away. I cried because there wasn’t I god damn thing I could do about it."
You are a great writer.
Reviewer: classylady (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
This story was great. I even cried. I love happen endings.
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 25 Have a Heart EPOV
this is exactly what this story needed...some drama. love it, love you, keep it up.
Reviewer: anki145 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
This is officially the best story that I have read on both Twilighted and Fan Fiction. You have really out done yourself, and I don't really have anything else to say. It combined the sweet moments, with the sad ones, the sexy moments, with the scary ones and made it into the most perfect mix ever. Congratulations on finishing this story, and I can not wait until the next few are finished as well. A faithful reader to a loved author... Anki145
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
wow this story was amazing. You created a vivid world for these characters to play in. great job !
Reviewer: beck943 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 5 Heart
Very interesting take on the characters... you need to watch your homonym spelling though :)
Reviewer: sugar mama (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
EXCELLENT story, lots of tear and happy ever after, thank you for writing and completing a great story.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
good story, I enjoyed it
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
That was wonderful!! Sometimes I'm left wanting at the end of a story, but you definitely covered all the bases and the story is complete. Wow! Good job!!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
That was wonderful!! Sometimes I'm left wanting at the end of a story, but you definitely covered all the bases and the story is complete. Wow! Good job!!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 38 Little Hands and Little Feet
Another tear-jerker :) You have really outdone yourself on this whole masterpiece! Make me want to date a race-car driver!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 37 So Much
That was SO EFFING GOOD!!! I HATE crying! It takes a LOT to make me cry. Congratulations on a few well-used kleenexes :)
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 28 Texas Sun Part One
Gah!!!!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 Alone
You keep skipping all the juciest parts!!! More details!!!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
loved it...u did a great job with this story
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
This was a great epilogue. I'm glad the future's looking clear for Bella and Edward with baby Carlie on the way.
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 39 Isla de Correndor - Epilogue
ahhhh perfect. wonderful. i want to re-read it over and over agian.
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