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Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 8
I loved it as usual. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: That means so much to me Ms. Monica!
Thank you :)
Reviewer: srogers108 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love this Edward, he takes such good care of Charlie and Bella! What's with the friends only thing though...come on Edward, take a chance! Keep up the good work ;)
Author's Response: I think the position he's in makes it a little more difficult to address his feelings. You'll be finding out more about Edward, and soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing. It may not happen right away, but Edward WILL take a chance.
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
Love!!! Right now the thing I love the most? Rose and Jake. Different and wonderful and ironic. Love it. Also I'm most definitely loving the relationship between Alice and Bella. Their friendship is amazing.
Been to the voting. Love me some Lost and Found. Damn that story made me cry.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved Rose and Jake! Stripping away their Wolfie/Vampire sides and making them human...I just see the two of them as fire! They would be a sexy, sexy couple, IMO.
I am also really grateful for your appreciation of the relationship between A & B. Having both come from small families, they are each other's soul mates, kindred spirits, etc.
Lost and Found made me cry too!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
OK...these two need to clarify this friends-only crap. My guess is Edward was scared!
Author's Response: There will be clarification, eventually. I beg of you to hang in there, it will be worth the wait!
Thanks for reading and taking the time out to review!
Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hehehe drunk Charlie and song lyrics, its nice that he's enjoying himself with his friends. Another great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: I wasn't sure how people would respond to drunk Charlie, but I'm so glad you liked it ;)
Thanks so very muh for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did!
Reviewer: wish0011 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Definitely can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yay! That's like Edward playing music to my ears :D
Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 7
A very moving story so far. I'm so glad Bella and Charlie have so much support around them. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. When you write something that has personal experience interwoven with fictional content, you never know how it will come across to others. I am very pleased that you find it moving. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
What a vulnerable and beautiful ending to the chapter :) Loving all of the interwoven relationships in this story - particularly seeing Edward & Bella broaden their friendship into something so deep and sincere.
Author's Response: I love you! Thank you so much. In order for us to understand Edward he can't just come in and be perfect all the time, right? It's nice to have begun the process of peeling back the layers that make him who he is. Thank you for recognizing that this is about multiple relationships and how they help get you through when all else seems senseless!
I appreciate your read and review as always!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
The Dving Bell and the Butterfly is such an inspirational book. I've taken care of someone who suffers from locked-in syndrome. A horrible disease. Anyways, this chapter was awesome, I' can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Wow, I thank you for your caregiving. Very horrible and frightening to be stuck inside yourself! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my goodness! What a lovely sentimental chapter with a tear-jerking ending.
Author's Response: I cried tears as I wrote it, even though I knew it was coming! I knew it before they met, before I started writing Edward.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, so much!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter!
This entire chapter was excellent! I especially loved that talk between Edward and Bella. I think it brought them closer. =)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!
I was waiting and waiting to write this part in order to give everyone a glimpse of why Edward is who he is in my story. I'm so happy that it seems to have translated in the way I wanted it to.
Thanks for reading, reviewing & the sparkly stars.
Reviewer: Alex81 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you, especially for the stars!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
What I'm thinking is that you made me cry in the bookstore cafe! That was incredibly moving. I'm so glad you didn't make Tanya into the witch with a capital B that she so often turns into. This is much more touching. I love watching the relationship between Bella and Edward unfold. I'm glad she noticed how beautiful he is - maybe we'll move into lemons soon? LOL
Author's Response: I hope and pray that you will hang in there with me when it comes to the lemons. I promise there will be loving, but there are some other things to navigate before it comes. I cried while writing this chapter; I'm right there with you with the emotion. I have often seen Tanya characterized as a "B" as well and I never saw her that way, not even in the books. I would have had a crush on Edward too, if I were her. But that, obviously, has nothing to do with my non-canon, AU story...I knew who she was before I even started writing Edward into the story. I knew she was the reason he turned into the man he is in my story.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Sorry I wasn't there to wipe your tears...
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Loved this chapter...and yeah, I'm waiting (not too patiently!) for these two to start getting together.
Author's Response: I am going to ask you to be patient *bites nails*
I promise there are wonderful things to come, but the immediate future holds some choppy waters that must be navigated before it's smooth sailing.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jbella (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very emotional, another moving chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Drawing from personal experience makes it easier to convey the emotion in the way I want to.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Bella. This is just the beginning. She's going to have a ot more to dea with before this is over with. Thankfuly she's strong, and has a good support system.
Author's Response: This is just the beginning, it's true. Thank you for reading and reviewing! It's so appreciated!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 6
Artfully written and touching chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Artfully written? You humble me...
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just found your story...I love Charlie....so so much. Your Bella is so strong....amazing.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you found it...thrilled. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm very pleased that you see Bella's strength in this story, in a way, it's convoluted. I hope you continue to read and take this journey with me!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, that's so sad :( I mean, I'm glad that Bella has the likes of Alice, Billy, Edward & Carlisle to support her but I can only imagine the distress she's feeling at seeing her father go through this.
Author's Response: She needs to learn to rely on others more, but she has such a hard time with it. It is good that she has a tight knit circle of support though!
I know this story is sad but that was my reality (not verbatim, of course) and I'm happy the emotion is translating to the page.
Thanks for sticking with my story!
Reviewer: miss_mandy (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 6
good chapter poor everyone.
Author's Response: I know...it's hard for everyone...as it was in my personal experience (and this is not an exact duplication of that by any means).
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hmmm...wonder when E&B are going to admit that they're becoming more than just client and nurse? And I'm betting Charlie would love the idea!
Author's Response: It won't be overnight but there are going to be some transformative moments coming up soon...promise. :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope you will stick around to find out.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
This was a great chapter....It was also very emotional, but very good. =)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so glad the emotion translated...there is more ahead. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing!
Thanks love!
Reviewer: jbella (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
You are writing a brilliantly sad story. I am so moved by your words.
Author's Response: As I am moved by yours. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 6
I know I've said this in a review before, but I wanted to say it again:
Since my mama has ALS, your story is really hard for me to read. At the same time, though, it is so helpful. It feels cathartic. Thank you.
Love,
Rachel
Author's Response: I struggled so much when I first started writing this...but in the end, it's very cathartic for me as well. When I was going through some of the experiences I had the hardest time because there were so few people to talk to...like I said before, if you ever want to talk, I'm here.
<3
Jules
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