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Reviewer: I hope you miss me (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2020 04:32 PM · On: one-shot
YESSSSSSSSSSS
Reviewer: ElenaGilbert (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:33 PM · On: one-shot
that was incredibly horrible ending! You say talk to you and I'll feel better? I don't!
You know what your problem is? You are too damn good of a writer, if you can make a person angry at you and cry over the words you have written then you truly have a gift. The imagry was amazing. The writing, every single last word you wrote was amazing. Forgive me, but i am upset for how you ended it. though i can say i have read this story numerous times it's probably my favoirte alogn with Counting on thre Rain by *shrugs* (i forgot) keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I really did try to end it differently. It was happy and rosy and it just felt completely wrong. I'm working on some much happier things these days, perhaps one of those, or maybe something by LadyRip (who writes good quality happy) - LJ Summers and Katmom give good happy too - would help cheer you up?
Thanks for making this a favorite. I really do appreciate it, sorry talking to me didn't work.
(please pardon the typos, this keyboard hates me)
Reviewer: sassystloda (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:27 AM · On: one-shot
ohmygod that was awsome!
Author's Response: :-)
Thank you!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:47 AM · On: one-shot
this was different i never read nething like this before i was hard to read i would of thought after edward told her the truth but i get why she died and wanted to be dead i am glad that they died together but this is still a sad story u r very detailed in your writing this was very creative never would of thought the outcome but i did sorta like it i just feel bad for the cullens that they had to lose them even if they couldn't change nething well until next time mbellaandedwardm
Author's Response: Thanks. I have more stuff over on ff, same penname. It just takes forever to get stories up over here. I'm slowly but surely moving it over.
Reviewer: The Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 11:11 AM · On: one-shot
I have never cried so much. As evil as you are, I have to say, well done; to evoke such emotion you must be a talented writer.
Author's Response: Sorry to make you cry, but it is Darkella...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 04:08 PM · On: one-shot
so sad this is but written very well
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Midnight Angel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:18 AM · On: one-shot
that's just wrong ok i'll give that it was a good edge of ur seat story but at torwards the end i kept thinking their not gonna kill each other they'll get back together so it kept me guessing till the end
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Unfortunately, they can't all be HEA.
Reviewer: sammydjones123 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:46 PM · On: one-shot
*silent tears streaming down my face* that was so sad. i loved it! im not sure how i felt about the death. i think i liked the fact that they died together and in each others arms but i dont like the fact that they died. i dont really know. im crying because its sad but also because its so touching. it was awesome. continue the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
It was really difficult to write. I actually tried to write an HEA but it didn't feel right. Bella just had too much anger built up over 20 years to go back to the Cullens.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: CrazyLovingLife (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:14 PM · On: one-shot
:O That was amazing! Depressing but utterly amazing. I liked the last part best, with the merged thoughts.
Author's Response: ;-)
Thank you!
That's actually the part that we had the most trouble with. Initially it was entirely mental.
Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:19 PM · On: one-shot
NO, that was completly evil. Very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! Evil is kind of my thing. ;-)
-Kat
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:37 PM · On: one-shot
wow, what to say? That was really raw an unexpected. It was well written but dang, I need to find my happy place now...
Author's Response: Sorry!
I did warn you that it was dark...
Thank you!
;-)
-Kat
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:01 AM · On: one-shot
Well that was intense. Really creative and well planned. Thank you.
Author's Response: No, Thank you!
This is actually my most flamed story over on FF. People don't like it when you kill E&B for some reason... *whistles and twiddles thumbs*
I really owe a lot to Knitmo on this one, she asked me 15 million questions after the first draft and forced me to think about the details more closely.
Thanks! ;-)
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 05:27 PM · On: one-shot
Wow, that was different. I enjoyed it very much, you write very well. The suspense at the end was great, The way you wrote from alternating points of view gave it an urgency that made my heart beat faster as I tired to guess how the whole situation was going to pan out ... is it going to work out for them, will she come back, can he rehabilitate her.? And then ... gone. So sad, yet somehow beautiful. Ultimately, they would never be apart.
Author's Response: ;-)
Thank You!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 03:17 PM · On: one-shot
You know this blows me away every time I read it. The ending is so intense, so rapid-fire, so almost-it's-gonna-work and then NO! And then... Yes. Because in this place, that really was the best ending.
And still, I sigh. And still I inhale it and blink a lot and sigh some more and think...
Wow. Kat is so brave!
:)
Author's Response: :-)
LJ as ever I love you! Thank you for always reviewing, babe. I see that you have new chaps! I did a little dance.
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