Reviewer: twideb (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
LOL This looks like it's going to be a good one. Hope it's not long between updates. It's nice to read a hockey story from a fellow Canadian!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Loved it! Laughed out loud in a couple of places, not what I was expecting based on CWAIA at all....
Reviewer: JRG1 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Are you male or female? Because your sex scenes are different, much hotter than many I've read on here and seem like maybe its the man's pov in your writing. Gawd, I was salivating on this chapter (3). BTW, I'm female. Not hitting on your or nuthin, lol, just wondering about ya and I didn't see a bio anywhere.
Jamie
Author's Response: I'm female. Married to a man, and I only have girl parts. I do however feel that I think more like a guy when it comes to sexin' and I am clearly a huge fucking perv, clearly. I'm very visual, so you know, I try to write descriptively, apparently I'm accomplishing that, which is nice to hear. And you can hit on me if you want, I won't be offended in the least.
When I wrote CW&IA I had someone ask if I got the male pov when writing the lemons. I don't, it's all from my very, very perved up mind :)--hh
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
This fic seems really different from Clipped Wings and Inked Armor.
It was really fun to read! I will keep up with it.
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I like Bella with attitude!! Adding a pervy Emmett and smart jock Edward and I think this could be a dream come true!!! :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I love potty mouth nerdy Bella. And I really love an Edward that doesn't give a shit what Em thinks.
That was an impressive first chapter. I love when first chapters have Bella and Edward already into each other. Screw the beating around the bush.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Holy Hale Honey this is going to be Fuckin AWESOME!
Reviewer: Carlisles angels (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I love this story! I can't believe you haven't got more reviews. It's funny as shit. Her thought process is so close to mine it's a bit disconcerting. I think alot of girls are like this Bella more so then the angst ridden Bella.
Love it and don't stop the insanity. I'm lovin the innocent Canadian Hockeyward. Beaver! LOL!
Reviewer: Stars05 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Hi Hunter - I'm glad you have this here. The brewhaha going on over at ff.net and fics getting pulled I definitely don't want to miss this story. Hockey players are hot and so is this story.
Reviewer: blondebella (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Damn I love your writing! This Bella is so hot! This was such a hilarious beginning - her internal dialog is so funny and wry and sarcastic - the whole thing about peeing in her pants - LOL! I love that she just fucks with everyone - her mom, Emmett, Edward. I really can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so glad that you decided to post another story - I won't miss my fix of Clipped Wings and Inked Armor so much.
Reviewer: reds-red (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Fucking Love It. So in need of a funny story - thank you
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
How much fun was that! I love this, bitchy Bella and who knows what kind of Edward yet! And Emmett is pissed off! This must almost be like therapy to you after CWAIA! (Though I love that too, for different reasons!) Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: open_arms (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Love it already and giggling like an idiot can't wait for more. Cheers
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Gah! I LOVE IT!!! Smart Hockeyward and Snarkella are gonna be AWESOME!!
Reviewer: Lorretine (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
As the older sister of a certified hockey man whore (trust me, the numbers are scary), having spent my formative yesrs on scraps of icy hell in every god-forsaken corner of New York state, having frozen my ass off every Saturday morning whilst drinking gallons of vending machine hot cocoa that could pass for dirty dishwater, I F**KING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
The ONLY redeeming quality to the lifestyle forced upon me by hockey parents from hell was watching the older boys come off the ice, sweating and spent, tousled hair looking like sex itself. Well, that and the wild parties on tourney weekends....
Reviewer: Jenny P (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Ohdearlord.
1. This Bella is sooo refreshing! I love her already, because she is me (and every other girl I associate with) when we're dragged to sporting events by our husbands.
2. Anyone who manages to incorporate the word "cooter" into any form of fiction deserves an effin' Pulitzer.
3. Creepy stepbrother Emmett intrigues me and skeeves me all at the same time.
Thank you for writing something so different... Your gift for words is extraordinary!
Author's Response: Bwahahaha, I was laughing this weird maniacal laugh when I read the cooter comment. I love the word 'cooter' because sometimes I am really immature. You'll see that channelled in this fic at times.
Emmett will be explained eventually. I have great plans for him.
Thanks so much for this review, I love it when they make me laugh.--hh
Reviewer: HoniaP (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
greeeeeeat story!
Reviewer: justtwilight (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
yum yum yum I love it!!!!!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I love it! Can't wait to read more, I hope you are able to update regularly. I'm going to favorite this so I don't miss any updates:) Loving Bella's characterization and the way you've set things up so far. Xoxo
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Yay! A new story. Love the first chap- can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I think I like this story. Bella is so funny. Looking forward to more....
Reviewer: Zippkitty (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
OMG, I'm literally writhing in my chair for more! I love Clipped Wings so I can't wait to see where you go with this. I'm already laughing out loud (at work!) and trying to control the snickers and snorts. That's quite a Bella you've got there! I hope she keeps him groveling for a long while - he likes his pain, eh?
Meanwhile, can I just grovel at your feet a bit longer? Or did you want to get out of here? <snicker snort>
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