Reviewer: jennietot (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Have never posted a review on here before...but here goes.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.
Makes me laugh out loud :D
I love your version of Bella. She is always described as the down, in need of rescuing girl but here she really stands up for herself and even fightens Eddie a little.
Can't wait to read more, I too read it all in one sitting.
:):):) <3
Reviewer: fargoner (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I see that some people have been able to read Ch 12 "over there" somewhere! That's so unfair *pouts*! Please post "over here" or tell the rest of us how to get "over there"! One of your faithful readers :-)
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I like it! Your story Clipped Wings and Inked Armor is one of my all time favorites. I'm glad I have something else of yours to read! Edward is hot, just like you always make him.!
Reviewer: dizzyguttergirl (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Just read chapter 12 over there.........
words fail me........... waiting patiently for April 21st!!!!!!!!
Love your stories !!!!
Reviewer: puddinbug (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Such a fun (and hottt) story - great job in making these characters funny and believable. Anxiously awaiting your update today :)
Reviewer: Lumedog7 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
My dear-all I'm going to say this time around is simply this: thank you.
Reviewer: marybetherrrrs (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
AMAZING! Already loving Hockeyward.
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Alright, I've succumbed to the crack that is this fic. I have to say, I can already feel it in my bloodstream. Fuuuuuck me. I know I'm like many of the other readers, in that I don't watch too much hockey. I am a Detroit Redwings fan living in Oregon, so I don't get much. I am in fucking LURV w your Bella. She's so....ME. Snarky, educated, and not afraid to say shit. Onward!
Reviewer: 82thumbtacks (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Wow- this is a nice start!
Reviewer: fargoner (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Bella's rambling is just hillarious! I so look forward to reading the next chapter. I wonder if it's possible to top the hot sex they had the first time... Mmmm... Can't wait to see what you have for us next ;-)
Reviewer: marita17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Oh man, I am so glad 1) that I stumbled upon this fic and 2) thats its not already 30 chapters long, because lately I've only been finding long fic and I get really obessive and read them all in two nights without doing much else and I feel crappy afterwards because I really should be doing something more productive.
Anywho LOVE this fic, and loving the Canadian/Ontarioness of Edward. Huzzah for my province!
Reviewer: robscougar (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Wow that nearly killed me waiting nearly 2 weeks for an update this story totally owns me you have created the perfect mixture of humour and hottness and Hockeyward is my alltime favourite EdwardjI really hope we get another update this week to make up for last weeks - I know I'm being greedy but I'm addicted and need another fix.I almost wish I hadnt discovered this story yet so I could read it all in one go like I did with CW & IA which I also loved. Thank you so much for taking the time to write these wonderful stories, very much appreciated.
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
<p>Great chapter! I'm so glad those crazy kids made up. The saddest part about reading a wonderful update like this is knowing that you're the longest possible time away from your next one. Sigh. -skn xxx</p>
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Looking forward to chap 10...check back everyday just hoping you have updated and nadda :-( Hope you will be inspired to do so soon...the wait is killimg...toooo lonnnnngg! This is a great story, you are very clever def one of my fav's (((huuuggss)))
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I was told I should read your story asap, by a very good source and friend, so I did. I'm glad, it's funny, snarky, I love Bella's mind and answers. I love she doesn't care and brings her book to the game, okay, that wasn't the smartest move, but it was her decision to try at least.
As much as Bella and Emmett bicker, they care for each other, in their fighting ways of course. Will he really try to kill Edward now? What will Phil say?
Loved the broccoli eyes!!!!
Reviewer: fargoner (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I just love this story and can't wait to read about their conversation over coffee. Is it Wednesday yet? Hope you're going to post the next chapter soon! Thanks!
Reviewer: becsmith79 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Reviewer: LoveStoned4RPattz (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
I'm a huge fan of yours, but was never a hockey fan. Well, not until the gold medal game between the US & Canada at the winter Olympics. Now that was a great game! And this story appears to be another winner for you.
Congratulations to both you and Canada
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Woot! I really like feisty Bella! Smart but with a raging temper and a dirty mouth! WIN. And Edward really seems lika an interesting guy, hockeyplayers are niiiicce! ;) Looking forward to reading this! <3
Reviewer: dizzydame (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
This makes me want to see a hockey game. I totally agree, “When did I begin enjoying physical violence?”…reminds me of my lovely experience of watching RM on the big screen and a little saddened when a certain scene didn’t last long enough… there’s something primal about watching guys fight. Thanks for the laughs and dreamy hockeyward.
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
Hilariously entertaining first chapter! Wow!
Was recommended this story by Belindella, who's the author of 'Forgettable' and 'Poor Little Rich Girl'. So glad she did! I'm hooked already!
Love her fiesty character, and the family dynamic - great origniality!
Can't wait to see Bella and Edward's 'relationship' grow! :D
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
This was the most hilarious part: ""They're pretty nice for real ones, huh?" I ask and give them a little squeeze.
He blinks at me, obviously stunned and a little unsure of what he's supposed to say, as he tries to figure out whether this is a trick question or not. I do this embarrassing snicker-snort thing because I think this has to be one of the funniest interactions I have ever had with a member of the opposite sex, and look away."
God, I haven't read a story this funny since the begining of No Place Like Home. Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
OMG you made me snort! I actually snorted and when bella tells edward she's a secret sister cause her "brother" wants to do her i literally spewed wine all over my laptop!
lol your chapter should come with a warning "Do not drink while reading, its a choking hazard"
Your Bella is so witty and funny and not afraid to kiss random hot guys who like to fight in alleys, i like this Bella!!
I loved CW&IA and this story is so hillarious you just own my ass! Well technically half my ass the other half is my husbands!
;P
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot
That was such an excellent start.
But what more can I expect from the fuckawesome author of "Clipped Wings..."
I believe I have a new favorite story...
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