Hot Hot hot.  Loving it. More please.

I like how your Rosalie has a bit more depth than canon. I find her to be an interesting character who is often given a bad role to play in the fic world but I really enjoy how you write her in your stories.

UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!! <3 I loved your story!! I must say that the perv in me enjoyed reading it :)

Hi sweetie!

I read this from the beginnin' again today, and all I can say is WOW! It is hot and sexy and sad and disturbin'...the Royce part...all at once! And it definitely has the promise of an HEA...which I am partial to, by the way.

I feel so damned sorry for Rosalie and am glad that Edward and Bella are givin' her the comfort, love, and support she needs. The love that Edward and Bella share is a tangible thing to Rose, and helpin' her to see that not all men are sadistic bastards. They can be lovin' and carin' and kind. She needs to see and feel that, too.

And now enters my favorite Cullen...Emmett...whom I believe to be Edward's brother, and the sender of the roses. Right? It should really be interestin' to see how it plays out. Hmmm...could there be a foursome in the future? Although it could be kind of creepy with two brothers...or not. Whatever you have in store, I know will be brilliant!

So, that bein' said, I am anxious for MORE PLEASE, ASAP!

Hugs,

Ellen xoxo

looking forward to the next chapter 

I hope she ends up with Emmet. Nice chapter.

Yes Rosalie needed to let them in fully. They all needed to be able to start out fresh with no secrets. Edward as usual is too much I want him for myself...LOL!! I love this R/B. Bella loves Edward more than words but she is attracted to Rosalie and Edward is on board with a threesome...DuH!!! I would be on board if Edward was there...Hehe!!! Can't wait to see where things go from here, thanks for the update...

Author's Response:

Yes. It was important for her to open up and tell them about her past. It's one of the only ways she can truly heal.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!!

 

 

As the movie played on, Bella’s hand trailed up and down my arm, making it hard for me to focus on what was happening on the screen. Each stroke over my skin would send tingles through my body, and soon I found myself lulled into a state of contentment, not too far from sleep, actually. Eventually, my own hand lifted the hem of her shirt, and I started absent-mindedly tickling the smooth flesh of her lower belly. The first few passes my fingers made caused her abdomen to flutter away from the ticklish sensation. It made me smile every time it happened, but soon enough she’d grown used to it and the humour was lost. 

 

Not that the movie was all too interesting, but the three of us were silent for about the first half of it. If I had to hazard a guess, it was probably because we were all just happy to be in each other’s company after a long, gruelling day at work. Soon, I could feel fingers stroking the length of my hair. I knew immediately they weren’t Bella’s because she was still tickling my arm. When I looked up toward Edward, I noticed that Bella was staring at me with her dark eyes hooded in desire.

 

Feeling the atmosphere in the room suddenly shift, I glanced up and met Edward’s heated gaze before letting my eyes settle back on Bella. Her cheeks were flushed and her eyelids heavy. It suddenly occurred to me that maybe Edward picked a stinker of a movie on purpose. My theory was only proven correct when he smirked and gently threaded his fingers into my hair and urged me toward his wife.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

looking forward to the next chapter 

Author's Response:

And I am looking forward to seeing what everyone thinks of it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!!

 

 

As the movie played on, Bella’s hand trailed up and down my arm, making it hard for me to focus on what was happening on the screen. Each stroke over my skin would send tingles through my body, and soon I found myself lulled into a state of contentment, not too far from sleep, actually. Eventually, my own hand lifted the hem of her shirt, and I started absent-mindedly tickling the smooth flesh of her lower belly. The first few passes my fingers made caused her abdomen to flutter away from the ticklish sensation. It made me smile every time it happened, but soon enough she’d grown used to it and the humour was lost. 

 

Not that the movie was all too interesting, but the three of us were silent for about the first half of it. If I had to hazard a guess, it was probably because we were all just happy to be in each other’s company after a long, gruelling day at work. Soon, I could feel fingers stroking the length of my hair. I knew immediately they weren’t Bella’s because she was still tickling my arm. When I looked up toward Edward, I noticed that Bella was staring at me with her dark eyes hooded in desire.

 

Feeling the atmosphere in the room suddenly shift, I glanced up and met Edward’s heated gaze before letting my eyes settle back on Bella. Her cheeks were flushed and her eyelids heavy. It suddenly occurred to me that maybe Edward picked a stinker of a movie on purpose. My theory was only proven correct when he smirked and gently threaded his fingers into my hair and urged me toward his wife.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

Well it appears that Rosalie is more than interested in continuing the relationship with Edward and Bella, and maybe in some way it is because she lacked any of those emotions with Royce. I don't know if Rosalie is as interested in Bella as in Edward, but I could be wrong. Edward likes seeing his wife happy, Rosalie likes seeing Bella and Edward together and craves that, and Bella seems interested in Rosalie. My head is spinning, especially after Edward gave Rosalie her goodbye kiss. Have to say one of the hottest stories I've read to date. Hmmm, may need to reread chapter one, lol. write again soon.

Hi,

within a short week filled with lots of christmas preparations (cookiebaking, making decorations etc.) i've read "making memories of us" and "a second chance" and I'm know moving on to this story.

 

And let me just tell you how much I love your stories, they are detailed without getting boring, but are giving really great insight on the characters feelings, I love your dialogues. I simply just love and adore and really appreciate your writing.

 

I truly believe you are gifted with the ideas you bring to, what we all know so well. Especially "making memories of us". I know it's a tuff story, but man I love it!

 

And this story is again something completely unexpected (at least to me), here you take a love story to a new high, where themes likes this one could become so cheesy, but you make it about love, instead of some "itch that needs to be scratched" ;)

 

Please update soon, I'm waiting impatiently :)

Ready for more

looking forwaard to the next chapter 

I LIKED IT!