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Reviewer: wrtsnw (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2011 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Introductions

Please finish! I love this!

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: Introductions

Awesome chapter...this Dexter rubbing me the wrong way.... what does he have up his sleeve... update soon

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Home

Great chapter....I was kinda hoping that Bella would just tell Jake that she would like to move back to La Push.. and I can't wait for the pending conversation about the new baby....update soon

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 9: Haunted

Awesome chapter... just awesome!!!!!!

Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Home

Loved chapter 9 and this one too. Thanks for updating :)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 8: Surprises

great chap - i am very confused

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelation

Great chapter - Im liking this Dexter at all

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

MMMMmmmm! I like curling up together to sleep.  Nice start--- I'm predicting a cullen in her writing class?  We will see.  Anxious to see who Eddie's new human is.

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 8: Surprises

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!! I knew she was pregnant...and I'm thinking this baby has alot to do with Alices vision.... oh man I can not wait for the next chapter... and see how everything unfolds....and I'm curious to find out about Nancy as well... uh oh Charlie... what have you been up too... lol

Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Surprises

Yay! I had a feeling. I like the addition of Charlie's gf and the baby. I can't wait to see what will happen.

Reviewer: Wondabug (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

I have nuetral feelings about Allison and Edward...I must say its really annoying that he likes a blonde since I liked the idea of him preferring brunettes but still...whatev. I think it funny though that Edward goes on all his first dates at Italian type places :)

Duly not dually, by the way

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelation

Oh my goodness, the plot thickens.  Whats Bella thinking Jake isn't a wolf anymore so how can he protect her.  Why would she think Jake wouldn't move back to Le Push to keep her safe.  Good lord I hope she tells him whats going on and not keep it from him!

Update soon, Please!


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

Ahhhhh......What is going on?  You are such a good story teller!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Poison

Jacobs dark reaction to Bella when he found out she didn't tell him about his dad is that beacuse he has been smelling vampire on her and his wolf is being reborn?

I can't believe Bella didn't tell Jake about Billie not doing so well!


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Charlie's Visit

I have no idea why Bella didn't tell Jake from the start....I have no idea how jake will react, I don't think he will like it much.  I am put out about the fact that Jake is spending so much time at work, that just doesn't seem like him at all....


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

What in the world?  Bella is with Jake how can she become a vampire?  hmmmm?  Very interesting.......


Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelation

what is really going on... and what is this Dexter character planning... update soon..

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Five Years Later

IArden sounds adorable. Wow I can't believe Jake left Le Push. I can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone. It's sounds very interesting!

Update soon!


Author's Response:

Glad you're interested!!! Update coming soon!

Reviewer: Jehavin (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

Just got started on reading this and I love it! I'm not too keen on the whole Allison storyline b/c even as a Team Jacob person I'd love to see Edward and Bella back together, (and Alice's vision come true!) without having a horrible impact on Jacob and Arden.

Really creative plot twist and I can't wait to see what's next!

Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

You are the cliffhanger queen and I love it!

Author's Response:

I really am!!! Haha.. Not many people find that endearing. LOL. Thanks.

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

I started reading this on fan fiction and am now continuing on twillighted.  I am so happy that you have updated and I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, update coming soon.

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

Awesome chapter..I am curious to know what Alice has to say also...and yes that was some apology.... wouldn't mind those kinds of apologies all the time...LOL.... I keep getting the thought that Bella is pregnant....can't wait to find out why Alice still sees her as a vampire also... update soon....

Author's Response:

There is so much coming, just hang on. And Bella may have a small secret ;)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

Cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Can't wait to write more ;)

Reviewer: bluebaby3296 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6: Forgiveness

so this is a jacob/bella fic right??

Author's Response:

Yes it really is, but the Cullen's are central to the story. The pairing though is definitely Jacob/Bella.

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 5: Poison

Awesome chapter...I was almost ready to yell at Jacob myself..for the way he yelled at Bella...but I really can't blame him.. Bella has been so wrapped up in trying to figure out how the Cullens will fit into her life she got side tracked... Why is Alice being less then honest with Bella?? Update soon...

Author's Response:

I didn't realize that I hadn't responded, so sorry. It's a little with Bella/Jake right now... we'll get through it. Thanks for reviewing.

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