Reviewer: cher(Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 4
when I read the first chapter I wasnt sure if I could get into this plot and now I've read all the chapters and I'm looking forward to reading the next. So glad Bella isnt bitter and jaded over jake. Cant wait for her to see edward again. hint hint lol
Author's Response:
I am so glad to hear that, even though the first chapter didn't grab you, you went on to read what's been posted so far. I really appreciate you letting me know that you're looking forward to what's coming - it means so much to me!
I'm a bit of an Edward girl myself, so you can count on seeing him again very soon :)
Thanks so much for reading - I hope that you'll enjoy the future chapters as well!
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Reviewer: inked-mom(Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 4
So glad Bella went out......a girl needs to let loose after dealing with such a snotty self centered little bitch of a daughter who needs an attitude adjustment.....just sayin LOL
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Sarah's not going to be that way forever... but I'm not promising it's going to change right away, either! :)
Thanks for reading, and for letting me know what you think. I really appreciate your feedback!!
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Reviewer: kaybrans(Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
Update soon!!!! PLEASE.........
Author's Response:
I'm going to be updating every weekend, so make sure you've got an alert set. I'm glad to hear you're anxious for more - it means so much to me!
Thanks for reading and letting me know your thoughts!
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Reviewer: Andi(Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
i seriously almost cried for bella, i could almost feel the hurt from her daughter being such a jerk to her. I love will though he seems awesome!!! and of course i love the edward/bella thing goin on. cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading & letting me know what you think. I'm glad to hear that it's coming across as "real" - I want to do justice to these characters and story.
Thanks for your review - it means a lot to me.
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Reviewer: lain16(Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
i'm actually excited to think that bella will open a bookstore (secret dream of mine) she needs to gain her independence back and not just be someones mother or ex-wife
great chapter and story
Author's Response:
A bookstore is a secret dream of mine as well - I can't imagine anything better than being surrounded by books!
Thanks for your kind words - I love that you are enjoying the story :) Thanks so much for letting me know!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really liked Edward and Bella meeting and getting to know the other. Loved Bella's idea for the bookstore. I enjoyed how much detail she has given to this project.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading & letting me know your thoughts. It makes me happy to know that you're enjoying my story:) Please stick around - I've got a lot planned for these guys!!
Thanks again for your kind words!
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Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm loving your story. Bella opening a book store is perfect! How lucky for her that Edward is part of CWC. Her interaction with Edward had me grinning like I was in her shoes!
Update soon!
Dixie
Author's Response:
Dixie:
Thanks so much for your kind words. Edward certain puts a big smile on my face as well. I'm on a weekly update schedule, so make sure to have the story on alert!
Thanks again for reading!
~ Andrea
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well loved the chapter... And I've all so have pimp you're story out to all I know in fanfic world....can't wait for the next chapter.. You so should have it add to fictionators that's how I find all my stories...so I hope I that halps. ;) kym
Author's Response:
Kym:
Thanks for your kind words. I'll have to check out fictionaters - I haven't been very good about pimping out my story, I've been busy writing :) And I would totally appreciate you sending readers my way :)
Thanks so much for reading & letting me know your thoughts - it means so much!
~ Andrea
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Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm getting excited now!!!! I want Bella to be happy again. Great chapter, please update soon!
Dixie
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you think! I really appreciate your feedback!
I'm on a once-a-week update schedule, so watch for an update soon! Thanks so much for reading!
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Reviewer: axd3258(Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
loving this story. ive been looking for something new to read, and im hooked.
cant wait to find out more about bella and whats going on with her marriage and kids. and now who i can only assume is edward...yay!
cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - it means the world to me!! I'm flattered to hear that you're hooked - I've got lots planned for these guys, so I hope you'll stick around!
Thanks again!! :)
Reviewer: kaybrans(Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
good start & I can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading & reviewing - I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. There's lots in store for these guys - I hope you'll stick around!
Thanks again!!! :)
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Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
So glad that Bella went out with Rose and her friends. She needed a night out.
I always have a soft spot for a guitar playing Edward. He makes me happy.
Can't wait to see what happens next!! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, guitar playing Edward/Rob puts me in my happy place as well. Not to mention Bella's a little fond of him herself :)
I've got lots planned for these guys - I hope that you'll enjoy it.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - it means the world to me!!
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Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 3
I so enjoyed this chapter..I wanted to say sorry for last chapter on 2 review my poor blackberry has lost its mind so sorry for two review.. Reviewing is just as addictive I'm looking for AA for my review junkie.. So yes I loved the chapter and I'm a review junkie..... Kym:)
Author's Response:
Kym:
thanks so much for this review and your previous (2 - lol!!!) Glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter - I've got lots in store for these guys, so I hope you'll stick around.
Thanks for your comments - they mean the world to me! :)
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Reviewer: Tweetiebird86(Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love the story, i just hope that Bella finds her backbone. Shoot, if i said half the things that Sarah did to my mother i would be dead. Please send the brat to live with her father if she hates it there that much. I would have already tossed her out on her butt. Tell her if she doesnt like it here, if living with her mother is so bad then leave. See what happens when she has to fend for hereself, because i bet you money that Jake wants time with his new girlfriend and not have to deal with kids. Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Bella's got a lot to learn about being a single mom, and getting a backbone is one of those things she's going to have to acquire, with a newly bratty teenage daughter. All the changes are tough for everyone.
I've got a lot planned for these guys - I hope you'll stick around and let me know what you think of how things develop.
Thanks so much for your comments - it means the world to me!
Reviewer: inked-mom(Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
Sarah's being quite the little bitch, aye........ Glad I didn't have that problem with my daughter after my divorce...LOL Can't wait to see what Rose has in store for Bella.....
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be up soon - hope it holds your interest! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate it!!
Reviewer: inked-mom(Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Who in the world says "Hot Damn" any more???? Hahaha!!!
Author's Response:
Believe it or not, I heard that when out with friends a couple of weeks ago, and it was indeed a middle-aged guy who was checking out a couple of younger girls. Otherwise, I think my age might be showing - lol!! :)
Thanks for reading and commenting!!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
Why is sarah so angry with bella for and not mad at jake. Jake was the ome that moved on. Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words, and for taking the time to read and review my little story - it means so much to me!
Sarah's got some issues, and we're definitely going to get into those in the coming chapters. She's not a brat all the time, but she definitely is going to have some teenage moments! Hopefully all will make sense in time.
Thanks again for your review!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Why is sarah so angry with bella for. Jake was the ome that moved on. Great chapter
Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Interesting start. Bella is really having a tough time with her daughter. You are doing a great good making this look and feel real.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for your kind words, and for taking the time to read and review my little story - it means so much to me! I'm happy to hear that it comes across as real - that's my hope for this story!
New chapter coming soon - I hope you'll enjoy that one as well! Thanks again for your review!!
Reviewer: KristenCullen(Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Awww i feel so sorry for Bella... Sarah is so nasty.
l cant wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words, and for taking the time to read and review my little story - it means so much to me!
Sarah's got some issues, and we're definitely going to get into those in the coming chapters. She's not a brat all the time, but she definitely is going to have some teenage moments! Hopefully all will make sense in time.
Thanks again for your review!
Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad Bella and Nessie are nice to each other, I'm glad Nessie isn't the reason for the divorce. Sarah is acting like a little bitch, what does she blame Bella for the divorce? Will sounds like a sweetheart!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my little story - it means so much to me!
Sarah's got some issues, and we're definitely going to get into those in the coming chapters. She's not a brat all the time, but she definitely is going to have some teenage moments! Hopefully all will make sense in time. And Will is a sweetheart... but the again, we only see him through Bella's eyes right now, too... :)
Thanks again for your review! I hope you'll stick around to read more!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! Can not wait 2 read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I've got a lot planned, so I hope you'll stick around!
Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting idea. I'm glad Bella and Jake are still friends. Lets see what happens. This is a great start!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment, and for taking the time to read and review. I've got a lot planned, so please stick around! Thanks again!
Reviewer: FonziesGirl(Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Hot Damn" lol. Very great start. I look foward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read and review. I hope you'll stick around for more!
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