Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
Love it! I am Curious though, What's with Edward and Heidi?? Is there Possibly a child?? Hmmmm. Just some thoughts. Wonderful Chapter. Love it!
Author's Response:
Love your screen name :)
Can I just say thank you so, so much for taking the time to read and comment on the chapters as you have gone along?I love this type of feedback, which helps keep me focused on the story as a whole, rather than simply the most recent update.Your words and comments mean the world to me.I find myself anxious now to see what you think of the chapters you haven't yet seen!!
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
I Love this story, the Kiss was awesome, even with the interuption. Better to have been ALice and not Sarah. Wonderful!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
I just love this story, it's very grown up and well thought. I love it!! I'm not a Sarah Hater, but having a daughter of my own, I can definatly understand the feelings. I cried so much on this chapter, LOVED IT!!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ohhhh, it was getting SOOO good, Damn Cell Phones!!! I like the last line " How bad could a day with ALice REALLY be? Oh, she will soon find out.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love the Inner Voice, that is just so awesome!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very good, I LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very good!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
Very good, Loving it!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
Very good!!
Reviewer: MrsCullen30(Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
This story gives me all kinds of warm fuzzies! :) Love it! :) I'm very interested to see how Bella's kids will react to her dating Edward
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much for your kind words. I love warm fuzzies, and being the cause of them makes me very happy. I'm glad you're enjoying Never Enough, and I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Bella's kids are up in the next chappie, which will hopefully post this weekend. I hope you'll let me know what you think of how things go :)
Thanks again for reading!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 2
Very good.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
I have to confess that I read each chapter more than one time. Actually, it is embarrassing how many times I read the chapters.
I am so loving this story. I love that they are grown ups with grown up lives and problems. I love that Bella isn't perfect with the perfect body. And that they both have baggage that they are bringing into this relationship.
So relieved that Bella found out more about Edward's past with Heidi. I am still wondering what they could possibly have to discuss.
Great job --- I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Best compliment EVER, hearing that you reread the chapters :) Seriously, because I do that to my favorite stories, and it makes me absolutely giddy to think that you are doing that with my story. Thank you so, so much!!
And of course I'm thrilled that you're liking the story progression. It's been a challenge to keep it real when all I've wanted is to throw these kids together, but knowing that it's the "realness" of the characters that keeps you reading helps keep me in focus.
Thank you again sooo much for your continued support. I always look forward to your comments!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 13
Such an amazing and lovely evening. I just adored how attentive Edward was to Bella. He was clearly watching her to know when she needed more food/drink. Very, very swoonable!!
And what an incredibly hot kiss! Hell it had me panting too!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your continued support - I love to hear what you think when the chapters go up!
New Year's Eve was so much fun to write. I think we all need a swoonable Edward, don't we? :)
Thanks again for your feedback!
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Reviewer: Jenny Cullen(Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 14
LOL Great aftermath to the NYE kiss! And great first date, even with the appearance of Jacob & Ness. lol
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment! Glad you enjoyed NYE part II and the first date. What would an outing for Bella & Edward be without SOME kind of interruption? LOL!
Thanks again for your feedback - it means a lot to me!
Reviewer: HockeyChick(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a cute date! Seriously, why does Jacob have to ruin everything? That big jerk! lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & taking the time to comment - I really appreciate your feedback.
Yeah, Jake's awfully clueless...which just illustrates how perfectly WRONG he and Bella were for each other. Good thing she's got Edward now, huh? lol!
Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Your story just keeps getting better and better! So now we know more about Edwards past heart break, it makes perfect sense that he would be suspicious of Jake and his comments. (Boy, Jake can sure be a dimwit) I'm glad he opened up to Bella.
God this story just makes me smile, I love how you are keeping Jake and Bella friends, thats so important for the kids sake! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the Edward out-takes:)
Dixie
Author's Response:
Dixie:
As always, when I read your comments I smile - you GET this story & where I'm going with it, and I love that! Yeah, Jake's a bit of a dimwit... one would think after 17 years with Bella he'd know her better, but it also illustrates that they just weren't right for each other. And now that she's got Edward, who appears to be just right for her :)
Thanks again for reading & for your continued support. I really, really appreciate it!
~ Andrea
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love the reality of the story--Bella's fears, and Edward's too--and I absolutely ADORE the humor. I'm the only one I know who would run into an ex (boyfriend, no ex-husband thank goodness) on a first date.
More people should discover your story. It rocks!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for continuing to read and offer your feedback - I always look forward to your comments!
I'm glad that the humor reads funny in the "real world" - I never know if it's just funny to me, or if other people will think so as well. And thank you so much for your kind words - I really, really appreciate your support.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Andi(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
jacob frustrates me so much...thats all i can say about that!!
really excited about the kiss and the date we finally got to see. I loved rosalie giving them a hard time!! excited to learn more about edward and his past. Nervous for bella having to tell the kids that shes seeing someone, and probably being the bad guy again. Ready for will to meet edward to see if hes going to be over protective or not. hoping for the best
really excited to read the next chp!!!!!
I would love to see the outtakes in edwards pov....cant ever have to much :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - your feedback means a lot to me!
I'm glad that you enjoyed the end of NYE and their first date... even if Jacob is clueless. But it's proof positive that he and Bella were a horrible match. They'll both be much happier apart.
Next chapter... the kids are up! I hope you'll let me know what you think once you've read their reactions :) 15 should post this weekend, hopefully!
And EPOV outttakes are definitely planned!
Thanks again for reading!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
Well another great chapter!! Yeah!!!! They had their 1st date yeah!!! I so forgot to tell you last review yeeaahhh they had their first real kiss awww that was hot... I so wish I could get along with my ex and his old lady as well as Bella does with jake and ness. I've tried but she's just a pain in my ass as well as my daughter I guess calling her old bat does not help me right ... . Well I hate to say this but I laugh when Edward called him a dog!!! That was so classic!!! You don't have to ask me twice I would love to read the outtakes in Edwards pov.... Well thanks for the fast updates... I was so shock to see it updated 2 chapters I did a happy dance... Then my blackberry died.... So rl has been nice to me not ...well I need to go make dinner for my kidz they are so mad at me.... Untill next chapter have a nice weekend and cee you next chapter.....yes we would love to here his pov....kym
Author's Response:
Kym:
Thanks so much for reading & reviewing - I always look forward to your comments :) Glad you enjoyed NYE and their first date - those were pretty fun to write. And I also enjoyed Edward calling Jacob dog... gotta keep it close to Twilight, after all :)
And EPOV outtakes are definintely in the works now - a lot of people seem to want to hear what's going on in his head. They'll probably post after the story is complete to keep it spoiler free.
Thanks again for reading & commenting. I look forward to hearing from you when the next chapter posts (hopefully this weekend!)
~ Andrea
Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
This was a great chapter. You did it well...I so loved the texting to find each other..loved the kiss but Rose was my favorite part of this chapter....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the feedback. New Year's Eve was so much fun to write, it makes me happy to know that you enjoyed it as well.
Rose was your favorite? Hmmmm.... tell me why?? Just curious :)
Thanks again for your comments - they mean the world to me!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Jacob uh I don't know what to say about him. He and Ness have NOT won me over.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & taking the time to comment - I really appreciate it.
Luckily, Jacob encounters are few & far between, but everyone had to meet. Why not make it as awkward for poor Bella as possible? ;)
Thanks again for your feedback!
Reviewer: inked-mom(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 14
LOL...Rose is so crude sometimes!! Guess Bella's not used to comments like hers. I certainly hope Jake doesn't act like a possessive ass with B.... Of course then E would have the chance to give him a needed beat down!!! :) E needs to fill in B with his past or it's gonna cause trouble.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments - your reviews always make me smile :)
Hmmm, an Edward/Jacob smackdown.... *contemplates*
Rose is a blast to write - glad she makes you laugh!
Your other comments...will have to wait for another day :)
Thanks again for your feedback!!
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Reviewer: anniem40(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Very good chapter, they are moving on with baby steps which is good. I can't wait until they are actually together, together. I'm am sure they are going to be issues with the kids.
Waiting for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - your kind words make me smile :)
The kids are actually going to be up in the next chapter, which will hopefully post this weekend. I'd love it if you let me know what you think of their reactions!
Thanks again for your feedback - it means the world to me!
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Reviewer: kaybrans(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
I was hoping Jake would catch them in a kiss or more! Now that would have been funny!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for always taking the time to comment - I always look forward to your reviews :)
Jake cataching them at something? *no comment* :)
Thanks again for your continued support.
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Reviewer: oplok71(Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aww...so sweet...maybe you can post EPOV after the scene...so two chapters back to back... :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting - I really appreciate your feedback.
No EPOVs yet - too much that goes on in his head is spoiler material, so his POV will be more like outtakes of specific scenes. If you have a favorite scene/chapter that you'd like to hear from Edward's POV, let me know and I'll see if he's willing to cough up the deets for us to post later :)
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