Reviewer: VictoriaCullen(Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
The pillow picture was a little cheesy, but I'm okay with cheese. I'd love it if my husband would remember to be cheesy like that.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you appreciate the schmaltz factor. Given their history of electronic communication, I couldn't have him send flowers or chocolates!
Thanks so much for reading & commenting!
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Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo(Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 18
What a morning after. She is one lucky bitch. I'm thinking once she gets over her insecurities she is going to wear him out. I hope Jake doesn't make things too difficult for Sarah. She used to wear my last nerve but I kind of like her now.
Author's Response:
*gasp!* A Sarah convert? Woo hoo! Jake's reaction will be in the next chapter....
Glad you enjoyed the morning after... and you're probably right about her wearing Edward out. She's stronger than I am, I wouldn't have been able to leave :)
Thanks so much for continuing to read & comment - I always look forward to hearing what you've got to say!
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Reviewer: oplok71(Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
FINALLY!!!! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward and Bella were feeling the same way. You are WELCOME! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
Reviewer: Teaste(Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow, that was quite intense.
Author's Response:
I hope it was intense in a good way??? :)
Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
haha..thanks for responding to ALL of my reviews!..lol..looking forward to it next week..;D
Reviewer: lobsters4ever(Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 17
I think I say the same thing in every review. I loved it. I reread this chapter an insane amount of times. I love her. I really love him. SEE - the same thing! ;)
I must admit -- I do love smut! This was an incredible lemon. One of the things that I loved most was that this stayed true to these characters. These are two adults who care for and desire each other and this lemon reflected that perfectly. I loved it!
Great job and as always, I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
*whispers* I love smut, too :) A lot. But writing it terrifies me, so I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the lemon in this chapter. I tried very, very hard *snicker* to keep these two in character. Even when Bella's thinking dirty thoughts, they are the kind of thoughts she would think, not like some 21 year old porn star.
Yeah, I'm like seriously in love with this Edward, so I know what you mean. And if I ever find him in the real world, I'm probably going to chain him up and do.... how does Bella phrase it?...unspeakably dirty things to him.
Thank you so much for your unfailing support week after week. I truly look forward to hearing from you every time I post :)
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Reviewer: Teaste(Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you for making Bella realistic in the looks department for this story. Don't get me wrong, I love the knock out Bella in most stories, but once in a while it is nice to have a realistic looking Bella that has some superficial flaws.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment - I appreciate your feedback!
I hope you'll stick around and read some more, and let me know what you think!
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Reviewer: Emsy(Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 17
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next update keep up the good work :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the update, because it was very fun to write :)
Next chapter should post soon - I hope you'll let me know what you think when it does.
Thanks again for reading
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Reviewer: EdwardsObsession(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
LoveLove Love!!! Thank you for writing this!!
Author's Response:
Thank YOU, so very much, for taking the time to read and comment. I am flattered beyond belief that you enjoyed the update - thank you so much for letting me know!
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Reviewer: amwine(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 17
These two deserve the happiness they have found together! This connection they have found! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope the kids won't have a problem wiht them. Great job....thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for continuing to take the time to read and comment - I always love getting your feedback!
Your sweet words really touch my heart - I'm glad that you are enjoying their little story
Thanks again for reading!!
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Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 17
i looooooove this story!!..i don't understand why it doesn't have more reviews!..!!!..:D
First of all, I can't thank you ENOUGH for taking the time to read through and comment on so many chapters! I love receiving these kind of “in the moment” reviews. They always help me to focus on the story as a whole, rather than whatever chapter posted last. Thank you for that.
I do try to make a point of responding to every review, but just so you don't have a million notifications in your inbox, I'll see if I can combine them all here!
Chapter 2 - the daughter's EVIL!..goshhh!..
No, not evil. Confused, angry and upset, and taking it out on someone she shouldn't be.
Chapter 6 - is it all BPOV?..lol..i love Bella!..i hope she picks up with Edward soon!..i'm pretty late the the story, so i'm sure by the time i'm caught up they will have!..:D
Yes, I'm planning on the story staying in BPOV – it's as much about her journey as it is the love story. I do have some outtakes in the works for when it's done, because Edward's mind just fascinates me.
Chapter 7 - :D
:D right back at ya!!
Chapter 8 - gasp!..what happened with Edward's past relationship?
All in due time, as you know since you've read ahead ;) But you'll notice we haven't found out everything yet....
Chapter 11 - awww..i love the HIPPO song!.this was such a cute chapter!.
This was one of my favorites to write as far as the kids go. The interrupted kiss.... well, that was fun until the interruption!
Chapter 12 (Anne) - aww...i hope edward isn't thinking of giving heidi another chance!..:O
Most definitely NOT! But there may still be issues that need to be addressed...
Chapter 13 - :D...finally!...haha..hopefully his Heidi issues are almost resolved..:D
Ummmmmmm...... no comment ;) But at least they got their kiss on NYE, right?
Chapter 14 - yay!...i can live without EPOV as long as they end up together!..and Jake is a DORK..haha..i hope it goes well with Sarah!
Awwwww, Jake's just clueless. And this illustrates how ill suited he and Bella were.
Chapter 15 - haha...so relieved they finally know!...i love Bella!..:D
I'm so glad you like Bella. Only a little while ago she never would have stood up for what she wanted. She's learning...
Chapter 16 - i loved Bella telling off the waitress!!..and i loved that it took them LONGER than 10 chapters to hook up!...hahah..most stories rush the "connection" and use excuses for making them so fast!...i loved this chapter!..:D
Again, another sign of Bella growing – a few months ago she never would have stood up for herself or her man. And I'm glad you like the pacing – had to go with what would be natural for their ages and backgrounds.
Chapter 17 - looooooove this story!!..i don't understand why it doesn't have more reviews!..!!!..:D
Once again, I can't thank you enough for taking the time to read and comment on the chapters like you did. Your feedback means so much to me, and I am flattered that you like my story :)
Chapter 18 should go up within the next week, and I hope that you'll let me know what you think of the morning after... :)
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Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 16
i loved Bella telling off the waitress!!..and i loved that it took them LONGER than 10 chapters to hook up!...hahah..most stories rush the "connection" and use excuses for making them so fast!...i loved this chapter!..:D
Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
haha...so relieved they finally know!...i love Bella!..:D
Reviewer: pmm(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 17
Just discovered this story today, and have now read all of the chapters soo far despite having two young children at home(one of them, sick). I love this story,your characters are soo life like! I love Bella's mom body. Thankyou for writing her that way! Also, thankyou for writing a fantastic story so far!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my story. Your feedback makes my day, and I can't thank you enough for sharing it with me!!
I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. It's so much fun to write, it makes me happy to hear that you like it. I'm trying very hard to keep the story real and relatable - it thrills me to hear that you are able to relate to my Bella.
Chapter 18 should post soon, and I hope that you'll let me know your thougts when it does.
Thanks again, so much, for taking the time to read and comment.
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Reviewer: Bruiser(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 17
I know I've said this before, but I really relate to your Bella and I'm so elated to see her feeling fulfilled at last. She's such a nice lady and a great mother, and a friend to Jacob. And when she reached out her arms to take Edward as her lover, it sent shivers through me.
I hate for their weekend to end! Can't Jacob and Renesmee get full-time custody?
Thanks so much for writing this story about an "older" Bella (she's still not nearly as old as me, but at least she's not a teenager.) I love this story.
One of the things that I anticipate most in my week is hearing from you. I truly look forward to your feedback when I post, and I can't thank you enough for your continued support of Never Enough.
I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed the update! This arc of chapters has been the most fun – and the most nerve-wracking! – to write. Thank you so much for your kind words in response, because I truly cherish each one of them. To hear that my words have actually inspired a physical reaction - a shiver - humbles me. And it thrills me that you can relate to my Bella. I'm a "more mature" fan as well, and I wanted to write something that I could personally relate to.
And no, silly - Jake and Ness can't have custody. You want Bella happy, right? Although maybe a little more time with Dad could be arranged ;)
Chapter 18 should post soon, and I hope that you'll let me know your thoughts when it does.
Thanks again, soooo much, for taking the time to read and comment!!!
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Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
yay!...i can live without EPOV as long as they end up together!..and Jake is a DORK..haha..i hope it goes well with Sarah!
Reviewer: carog91(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 13
:D...finally!...haha..hopefully his Heidi issues are almost resolved..:D
Reviewer: Bruiser(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 16
Awww man! I hate when that tumescence gets all over my thigh.
<gleeful cackling>
Okay, that was hot. <fanning self with Bella's discarded bra> I'm so happy for Bella...that first jump into unfamiliar waters can be somewhat traumatic. Edward was sweet and sincere with her. We knew he was into her, what with the coffee incident before the bookstore opened. <whoop>
Let me at that Fran Drescher of a waitress, btw. I'm gonna tie her plastic boobs in a knot behind her back. Or maybe loop them around her thighs so she's all trussed-up. Then I'll let James at 'er.
Thank you for shutting Rose up and letting Bella tell her off, too. That was enough strength to grow some balls for the evening to come, eh? I hate that Edward is torturing himself like this, but I love the intent behind his actions. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
LMAO!! Frankly, I rather enjoy a good tumescence against my thigh...... ;)
You, my friend, need to write, because your reviews always crack me up!!
I'm glad you approved of Bella growing a pair - she needs to be the kind of girl who stands up for herself, otherwise she's never going to believe that Edward has feeling for her. It's always good to a friend like Rose who has your back, but it's even better to stand on your own two feet and fight for your man!
Thanks again for always making me smile and laugh - your feedback means the world to me!!
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Reviewer: 4321(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 17
One of the things that I anticipate most in my week is hearing from you. I truly look forward to your feedback when I post, and I can't thank you enough for your continued support of Never Enough.
Your kind words make me blush - I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed the update! This arc of chapters has been the most fun – and the most nerve-wracking! – to write.
Chapter 18 should post soon, and I hope that you'll let me know your thoughts when it does.
Thanks again, soooo much, for taking the time to read and comment!!!
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Reviewer: Jenny Cullen(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 17
Woah, mama! *panting here* lol
Author's Response:
Did you like it? ;)
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review - this made me laugh and smile.
Chapter 18 should post sometime within the week - hope to hear from you again when it does!
Thanks again for reading!
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Reviewer: Jenny Cullen(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
Whew! He was so fucking sweet! That was hot! :D And I loved Bella telling off the bitches in the bathroom! haha
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comments - you crack me up!
Isn't it nice that Bella's growing a backbone? Not too long ago she would have walked out without saying anything, or just let Rosalie fight her battle for her. Now she's standing up for her man and for herself. I'm so proud!
Thanks again for reading and reviewing - your feedback means the world to me.
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Reviewer: twilight_lamb(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 17
Well a very hot chapter for them..they came so far lol.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that you liked the update. They did progress a bit, didn't they?
Chapter 18 should post within the next week - you'll have to let me know what you think of the morning after... :)
Thanks so much for reading & reviewing - your feedback makes me smile!
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Reviewer: twilightdiheart(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
It's about time she was happy. How will she ever go back to sleeping without him. Weekends only...man!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that you liked the update. Even I wonder how she's gonna get by on weekends only after all of that!
Chapter 18 should post within the next week - you'll have to let me know what you think of the morning after... :)
Thanks so much for reading & reviewing - your feedback makes me so happy!>
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 17
Go Bella! Who knew she had it in her? After all those years of unsatisfying sex i'm thinking she is going to wear Edward out.
Author's Response:
Well Bella certainly didn't know she had it in her (LOL that sounds terribly dirty - I'm guessing she did know ;) Wonder how quickly Edward would wear out.....
I'm glad to hear that you liked the update. It was a heck of a lot of fun to write!
Chapter 18 should post within the next week - you'll have to let me know what you think of the morning after... :)
Thanks so much for reading & reviewing - your feedback always makes me smile!
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Reviewer: Indianwalker(Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 17
awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed the update :)
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