Reviewer: gilamonster(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 21
enjoyable story... thank you...
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like the story - thanks so much for letting me know!!
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Reviewer: MarieS(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 15
It's getting hot in here.
Author's Response:
Yes, our couple's starting to heat things up a bit :)
Reviewer: nsturms72(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 21
love this story! Great Job!
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying the story - thanks for letting me know!
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Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 21
Poor Edward, I hate it when people use their kids in their relationships. That’s one of the reason’s I love this story so much your Bella and Jake act the way divorced people should. So Heidi’s pretty much a total bitch and Felix is her lap dog! lol
I can’t wait to see what Edward’s not telling Bella!
Author's Response:
I think you've characterized Felix and Heidi perfectly.....unfortunately for Edward.
Bella's quite interested in getting the full story from Edward as well - she's not forgetting his promise to spill.
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule.
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - I always love hearing from you!
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Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: MarieS(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
Meeting the ex...never good.
Reviewer: AussieECfan(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 21
Yikes, Heidi is gutless and cruel; using both Edward & Chelsea like that to make Felix jealous. :(
I'm glad that Bella and Edward are going to be ok, but also that Sarah & Will are starting to warm to Edward. 'Mr Cullen' references do crack me up, because my mind goes to dark and naughty places when I hear that mentioned. *LOL*
Author's Response:
*grin* I like dark and naughty places, and Mr. Cullen certainly inspires them.
Yeah, Heidi sucks, and she and Felix are made for one another :(
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule.
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - I always love hearing from you!
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Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
FINALLY!!!!!!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 12
Well I wonder what Edward is doing in Portland. It has something to do with his Ex I am almost sure of that but I hope that he talks to Bella because she could help him.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 11
I wonder what the kids would have thought if they saw it? I mean their dad has moved on so why can't Bella be happy too?
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow I think that I would have lost it and started yelling at her for saying those things to me. I just hope that she can see that the last 2 years have been very hard on her mother and that she isn't making things easier.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ah and so the pesky brother emerges. I thought that Edward was going to get up and run away as soon as Seth starting talking.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Edward!! and Bella just has no idea what she has gotten herself into with a day with Alice...
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yea!!! I am happy that they are all going along with everything and things are starting to go well for Bella!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
And now begins them spending time together. I am glad that Bella is going to do this for herself she deserve to have something that is hers.
Reviewer: delilah69(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 21
i wonder if felix said something about edward never having a family, or maybe he knows about edward and bella and the fact that he might never have kids of his own? i hope that whatever edward is hiding it isn't too bad!
Author's Response:
Bella's not forgotten Edward's promise about full disclosure - you can be sure she wants to know what Felix said ad well!
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule.
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - I always love hearing from you!
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Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am glad that Bella actually got a response out of Sarah. I hope that she will forgive her mother because it isn't Bella's fault that Jake and Bella's marriage ended.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
I think that they are all doing a great job at trying to get Bella to realize her dreams!
Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20
I loved the day Bella spent with Will. It sounded like a lot of fun! I'm glad Edward and Bella are getting closer! What in the world happened to Edward? Did he get into a fight with Felix? How did he get into Bella's house? I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed Bella's "date" with Will. He's a good kid (and an awful lot of fun to write).
If you've read Chapter 21 you know the answers to your questions :)
Next update is on FFN only - EPOV. I'll be bringing it back to Twilighted next week with Chapter 22.
Thanks again for reading & commenting - I love to hear your thoughts!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
That is really sad that after a year her daughter still treats her like that.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
That is really sad that after everything is said and done that stuff is all you have after 15 years of a marriage.
Reviewer: amwine(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
I feel so bad for Edward. I don't know what I would do if I couldn't see my step-children anymore. Very sad situation that Heidi put Edward in.
I can't wait to see how dinner goes on Wednesday night. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor Edward just wants to see his step-daughter. Heidi and Felix even make me growl, and I write them!!
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule. Next up - dinner with the kids!
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - I always love hearing from you!
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Reviewer: MeyaRose(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 21
Given Edward's history, I wouldn't be surprised if he has reservations about dating Bella. He doesn't exactly have good experiences with recent divorcee's with kids...
Great chapter, though, I love this!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment - I really appreciate it! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story.
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule, which will include dinner with the kids!
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo(Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 21
I guess i'm just not trusting by nature, but Edward really has me worried about whatever it is he's hiding. I hope it's not anything major. It would be better if he fesses up without her having to ask. I was glad that the kids didn't make a stink about him showing up at the house. Who knew sporks could be used as a deadly weapon?
Author's Response:
Bella's not forgotten that he promised full disclosure, and she intends to make sure that happens, once they get him well again.
I have to share credit on the spork idea with my beta, Iadorepugs. She offered it as a solution in a different situation, and I thought it ws too funny not to add here :)
In lieu of my regular weekly posting I'll be posting the first EPOV on FFN by the end of the week. I hope you'll wander over there and let me know what you think :) After that, I'll be back to the regular posting schedule.
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - I always love hearing from you!
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Reviewer: sherrilovesedward(Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 20
I think that Bell had a great conversation with her son. As to Edward's confessions. No big deal. Everyone who has been married at least one or two times comes with baggage. Just as simple as that. Any way, I am really wondering what happend to Edward. He must have been in a fight. I guess that I will just have to wait and find out. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sherri
Author's Response:
Thanks for always taking the time to give me your feedback - I love hearing from you!! I'm glad you enjoyed Bella's "date" with Will - that was kinda fun to write :)
I promise answers as to what happened to Edward in 21, which will go to beta on Friday (to post Sunday or Monday). Have faith! I'd never do anything (too awful) to Edward :)
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