Reviewer: sherrilovesedward(Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 25
I really enjoy reading this fic. Everytime I get the alert message, a simile comes across my face. I think that it was great that Bella's son wanted to have a talk with him about his mother. She is his mother and has already seen her hurt by his father. Did they have their Valentine's dinner at the place where they met? I thought that it was especially nice that the owners gave them dinner on the house. I also wanted to let you know that I love all of your lemons between those two. They are both so loving with one another. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sherri
Author's Response:
Good catch on the restaurant choice - they met at the bar in Maria's and had their first official date there, and now Valentine's. Edward's a big believer in traditions :)
So glad you enjoyed the ILYs - Bella's kids are her world, and apparently she is their world as well. Of course, her world is expanding, and with a guy like Edward to love her, those lemons just get better and better.
Thank you so much for always taking the time to let me know what you think of a chapter - your feedback means the world to me!
Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 25
God help me... here is what I look and sound like when I read your story... first I do my happy dance, then I start reading which produces a huge smile, followed by lots of ahs and oh man's....big sighs followed by more smiles, then (especially in this chapter) happy tears form in my eyes followed by more ah's and OMG's, sniff's with more happy tears ending with a huge sigh and dreamy look in my eye's...what the hell have you done to me! ....your story is just making me into a fucking sappy..... girl!!!!!
This paragraph killed me......
I felt tears fill my eyes at the words as he repeated them over and over again. My marriage to Jacob had left me feeling as though I was never enough for any man to love. If Jacob, who had known me for half of my life, couldn't love me enough to want to stay with me, how could anyone else? But with each stroke of his body within mine, with each whispered declaration of love, Edward replaced the doubt with the certainty of his feelings. All of the fears and insecurities that I had harbored since my failed marriage fell away with his words and gentle lovemaking.
Your making me into a hopeless romantic...but...I'm finding....I kind of like it! lol
Take care, Dixie
P.S. Loved Will looking out for his mom! :)
Author's Response:
If my story is making you a fucking sappy girl, your reviews always make me a smiling, giggling fool! I had tears of laughter in my eyes as you described your reactions - hilarious!!!
Hopeless romantic...... I'm working toward hopeFUL romantic! And these characters, they certainly are full of hope. Of course, with kids like Will on your side, how can you help but be hopeful for the future.
Thanks for the smiles, giggles, and kind words - I appreciate them all more than you can possibly know!
Reviewer: rhiannon113(Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 25
Right, they love each other; her children are on board; they know about each other's past... So are we near the end or do you have some other evil that will befall them?!?!!
Love this story! =]
Author's Response:
"evil" is such a strong word.....
I do have to admit that the story has morphed past my original outline, and there is definitely more to come. But they definitely love each other :)
Thanks for your kind words - I love that you love the story!
Reviewer: delilah69(Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 25
they are so cute! im so happy that they actually had the courage to tell each other. what happens next?
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed the ILYs - I think we're ALL relieved that their feelings are finally out in the open!
Chapter 26 should post this week...... I look forward to hearing what you think of "what happens next"....
Reviewer: nsturms72(Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 25
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for letting me know :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan(Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 25
Oooh, hot hot HOT kinda-Valentines Day surprise for Edward there, courtesy of his lovely girl :)
Adored the declarations of love, ther relaying of the gorgeous conversations and interactions that Edward had with both Sarah & Will. If his utterance of his love wasn't enough, his actions should surely speak louder than words.
Author's Response:
Well, when you've got a guy like Edward telling you he loves you and showing you in all ways possible, it makes a girl want to reciprocate and show him just how much she loves and desires him.
So glad you enjoyed the ILYs - Bella's kids are her world, and it's only right that they had something to do with the declarations :)
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - it means everything to me!
Reviewer: Silm3ria(Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ok I've just started this story and I really love it. I would continue reading but its past midnight here and I've gotta be up before 4 in the am cause my sister in law is being induced tomorrow and I get to be in the room when my niece is born :) Sooo I'm gonna have to put the story on hold for the next couple of days LOL but I can't wait to get started back on it :) I don't really hate Sarah... I can kinda understand her feelings at this point. My parents divorced when I was 13... I wasn't really mad at my mom but I was furious with my dad... He left us and it's taken him 7 years to start acting like a real father again.... So yeah I can understand her feelings in a way... But I am hoping things will get better for Bella and Sarah soon :) I love the book store image and the fact that Bella and Edward have the same thoughts on it before even talking about it lol Ok now before this review become a stoy itself I will say good night LOL
Author's Response:
First of all, welcome to Never Enough! I'm so glad that you've found the story and that you're enjoying it!
Second of all, congrats on your new niece, and on being there when she was born! My best friend is pregnant and I am her labor coach, so I know how exciting that is!!
Sarah is a tough case right now. She's hurt, confused and angry about all the changes, and she's blaming the one person in her life that she knows is never going to leave her - her mom. Sucks for Bella, but they've got to learn how to handle these feelings together.
I'm glad you like the book store - I have to admit if I had unlimited funds and time, a bookstore would be my choice for a business to run! It's fun living vicariously through these two!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment - I truly appreciate it! And I hope that you'll continue to let me know your thoughts as you read!
Reviewer: Billi(Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 25
I read it again cuz I loved it so much the first time.
Still wanna marry your Edward, but, now that you're single I will defer to you. Clearly you have dibbies!
I look forward to more bb, I truly cannot wait to see where you take them, and us, in their adventure!
MWAH!!
Author's Response:
You are a goof, and I love you like a fat kid loves cake!!
Thanks for deferring E to me - I truly appreciate it. Now to make him real........
MWAH back atcha!
Reviewer: HockeyChick(Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 25
That was a sweet and sexy chapter all in one lol. I'm sorry that you were in the hospital but I'm glad to see you're back. I tried finding you on facebook awhile back but no luck :)
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed the chappie - the ILYs were fun for me to write.
Thanks for the well wishes - I am on the road to recovery and appreciate them!
My FB name is GrayMatters FanFiction - if you send a friend request, put a note with it saying who you are from Twilighted. I'd love to see you there!!!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
Welcome back, I hope that you are doing well after Real Life dealt you Alot to deal with. Loved this chapter, esp the talk edward had with Will, I like that he told Will that he would let Bella know how he felt about her first. Very Good. Love IT!!! I'm greedy and I can't wait for More!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the ILYs - Bella's kids mean everything to her, and I had to be sure that they were involved as well.
Thanks for the well wishes - they are needed and appreciated! I'm on the road to recovery and writing like a fiend, so there will be More to come!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen(Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 25
I love the way Edward told her he loved her. He realizes Bella's kids are her life, and making sure he respects that is tantamount to their relationship.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed their ILYs - you just know the kids had to have something to do with it. Funny that Will was talking to Edward in the living room at the same time Sarah was "asking" her mom if she loved Edward in the kitchen. Perceptive kids Bella's raising.....
Reviewer: poker face(Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 24
Enjoyed the ride so far. Sorry to hear that you were in a hospital, hope you are doing better now.
Update it soon ! :)
Author's Response:
Aww, I'm so glad that you've enjoyed Never Enough so far! I'll be updating in the next couple of days - hope you'll let me know what you think when it posts!
Reviewer: gray_matters(Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Test Review.
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward(Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
I am sorry to hear that you were in the hospital. That sucks. I hate the hospital and I mean HATE IT. I hope that you will get well soon and feel better. Your story is one of my favorites because I feel like I can relate to Bella. I got married at 38 and was always a "nice girl" and didn't sleep around. I am not suggesting that Bella slept around. It is just that Jacob didn't get the job done if you know what I mean. Cannot wait for more and hope you feel better soon.
Reviewer: edbellafan(Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 24
Holy smokes! What a great way to wake up!!! Sure beats an alarm clock!
Loved the meeting with Carlisle and Esme! I thought that went really well! So cute that Esme was dying to meet Bella.
Awwww...Sarah all dressed up and with her date! Glad Jake wasn't lurking in the background waiting to beat the mess out of the poor boy..hahaha....
Enjoy your vacay! Can't wait for the next chapter! :o)
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme, as well as Sarah's pre-dance surprise for Bella.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me! I hope to hear from you again when Chapter 25 posts in the next week or so!
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Reviewer: sherrilovesedward(Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 24
I just love reading this fic. Bella is so cute and so is Edward. Ahhh Meeting the parents. I have always been scared of meeting my boyfriend/husband's parents. You just want them to like you. Anyway, this was an enjoyable chapter to read. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sherri
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme, as well as Sarah's pre-dance surprise for Bella.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me! I hope to hear from you again when Chapter 25 posts in the next week or so!
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Reviewer: jaguarsolaris(Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 24
aww how sweet!! I enjoyed catching up to the newest chapter. can't wait to see what else edward has planned.
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme, as well as Sarah's pre-dance surprise for Bella. And Chapter 25 will have more of Valentine's Day with Edward - yum!!!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me! I hope to hear from you again when Chapter 25 posts in the next week or so!
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Reviewer: Lowana(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 24
Such a wonderful story. The love scenes are so sexy, romantic, beautiful and HOT! You've done a great job with this story. Love Edward....he is wonderful! I wish he really existed! Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story! It is always such a treat to hear it from a new reader. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - I hope to hear from you again as the story progresses!
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Reviewer: Trysh(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just happened upon your story this afternoon, and I read it all the way through!! lol. I am a bit worried about the innuendos made towards the end of the chapters about there being all the time in the world to talk over dinner, and her being by herself if she is working later hours...I am wondering what you have up your sleeve..hmmmmmmmm...
The kids coming around made me very happy. Going through this ordeal can be difficult, but as long asyou keep the lines of communication open for all parties involved...it CAN be a smooth transition :) I think you are a great writer! I like that i can relate to the characters`feelings and emotions :) Have fun on your vacay, and I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter...lol :)
Reviewer: nsturms72(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 24
This story is great! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you took the time to let me know you're enjoying the story - it means the world to me!! I hope to hear from you again as the story progresses!
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Reviewer: dkgors(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 24
I loved Edwards parents just showing up at the bookstore. That is such a mom thing to do! lol Sarah's first date! I had tears in my eye's (My daughter turns 16 later this year and that's the age I said she could start dating…God help me! Lol) I’m sure I will react the same way!
I hope you have a wonderful vacation! Take care. Dixie
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme, as well as Sarah's pre-dance surprise for Bella. Lots more fun stuff coming up in Chapter 25!!!
Thank you so much for always taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me!
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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 24
Very good!! Love It!! I have a feeling that Edward might be telling Bella that He Loves her!!! Can't wait for that! Love that Esme and Carlisle Dropped in. I would love to see edwards POV of that meeting and what was said when he walked his parents out to the car. Have a nice Vacation!
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme,and I'll have to add the EPOV to my list of chapters to write.
Thank you so much for always taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me!
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Reviewer: campcathryn(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 24
Love it
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed the update - thanks for letting me know!
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Reviewer: oopsadaysey(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 24
I'm still loving this gentle story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're still enjoying it - thanks so much for letting me know!
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Reviewer: AussieECfan(Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 24
First of all, enjoy your very much earned holiday! :)
Loved the chapter...though I felt sorry for poor Edward who clearly has some very loving things he wants Bella to understand, but the man keeps getting interrupted.
Looking forward to seeing what he has to say when they hopefully get to have an uninterrupted dinner together. Yes, I am indeed an optimist here! :P
Author's Response:
First of all, I must apologize for being so tardy in both my response and in posting an update. Within hours of returning from Washington, I was admitted to the hospital for emergency surgery. After a week in the hospital, I am finally physically capable of sitting at the computer for more than five minutes at a time, and mentally capable of concentrating for more than two minutes, and it's time to get back into the swing of things!
I am so glad that you enjoyed Chapter 24. It was great fun to write meeting the parents with Carlisle and Esme, as well as Sarah's pre-dance surprise for Bella. And I promise some uninterrupted time in Chapter 25 - and that Edward just might have the opportunity to speak his mind at last :)
Thank you so much for always taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me!
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