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Reviewer: wdmmom4 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 32
Say yes....say yes....say yes...please!!!!
Author's Response: Yes please!!!!
Oh, wait, you probably didn't mean me, did you?
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review - sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Better late than never, right?
Reviewer: lizmondaine (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 32
YAY!!! YES!! I seriously cheered outloud at the final line. My kids think I'm crazy, but I'm so excited! I thought when he took her out on the whale watching trip he was going to propse, and I'm not going to lie I had a tiny twinge of disappointment when he didn't. So I was holding out hope he would propose with all this fancy cooking he was doing. If she doesn't say yes I'm going to kick her butt and take him for myself, I'm sure my husband won't mind.
I think this was so perfect and worth a little extra wait, your updates always are. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will be so sad when this actually ends.
Author's Response: A lot of people thought when he took her whale watching he was going to propose, so you're in good company there. And most everyone has said if she says no, they're willing to take her place :)
Thank you for your sweet words - they mean so much to me. I apologize for taking so long to reply to your review - better late than never, right? I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment - it means so much to me!
Reviewer: poncaradeblythe (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 32
as allways I adore you!!
;)
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 32
The last paragraph--the proposal--left me sighing like a teenager. The whole evening was so sweet and tender.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed Edward's special evening for Bella. He wanted to make sure their last night on the Island was memorable.... and I don't think Bella's going to forget it any time soon! :)
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 32
very sweet! I loved E's admission that he hid out at the bar the first night. I rarely think of him as being vulnerable like that, it was a nice touch!
Author's Response: With the story being entirely from Bella's point of view, we forget that Edward had just as many obstacles to overcome as Bella did to get this relationship off the ground. Especially because he knew she'd be there - he had even more reason to hide.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - it means so much to me!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 32
Loved it!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it - thanks for letting me know!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 31
Tree sex with Edward covered in chocolate frosting.......YUMMY is all I can say. I think that Bella will really be missing her Edward when they return to the real world. Also, I loved that he took her whale watching. that must be really cool. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Author's Response: My most humble apologies for taking so long to respond to your review - I am so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right??
Mmmmm, chocolate.... mmmmmm, Edward...... mmmmm, tree sex with Edward AND chocolate all together! *sings* these are a few of my favorite things! Going home is definitely going to be a let down for these two.
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - it means so much to me!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 31
LMAO at the Cedric comment! That was awesome. I'll have cupcakes and sex with Edward, line starts where? I think the theme song for this chapter should have been Sex and Candy by Marcy's Playground lol
Author's Response: So sorry it's taken so long to respond to your review - I'm so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
C'mon, we all thought Cedric was hot - and way too young - when we saw Harry Potter & the Goblet of Fire, didn't we?
Cupcakes and sex with Edward - YES PLEASE!!!!!
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - it means o much to me :)
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 31
I gotta say bb, I love how Bella is getting more agressive with Edward, the way she is clearly becoming more comfortable in her own skin and therefore she is able to be more forward with him.
That said.... I want to be more aggressive with him too so sign me the fuck up!
PLEASE???
Love you hard Gray! <3
Author's Response: We could always tag team him bb - think he could handle both of us?
Love you back bb!!!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 31
Yummy
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lizmondaine (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 31
oooh...I love these two...They never fail to make me smile.
However, with Will's conversation and Edward getting a couple of things, I wasn't expecting Whale Watching to be the surprise. But I thought it was a really sweet moment.
And the meadow? Ahhh...You jut can't go wrong with the meadow or with trees... :)
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review. I've fallen so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
I'm so glad they make you smile. I wonder what kind of surprise you were thinking Edward had in store for Bella.... hmmmmm? ;) And meadows and trees are indeed very, VERY nice!
Thanks for taking the time to read and review - it means so much to me!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 31
I want a cupcake, especially when it's delivered like that.
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review - I've fallen so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
Cupcakes delivered by Edward - simply divine :)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 31
well i have a feeling they will be moving in with eachother pretty soon! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response: So sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review - I've gotten so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes* Better late than never, right?
Hmmm, Bella has some pretty strong feelings about cohabitating.... we'll have to see what happens!
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - I appreciate it so much!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 31
that was so great i love that they can be so good together! i wonder if bella and edward will have at least one kid?
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond - I've gotten so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
We always seem to end up back on the kid topic, but they talked it through and their decision stands - no babies at this point in their lives.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - it means so much to me!
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 31
The only thing I can say about this chapter is....AWWW SWOOON
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review - I've gotten so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
I'm so glad you enjoyed the update - thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 31
Your lemons are great, but I find that I'm getting to the point where my reaction to them is "yeah, yeah, they fuck. now get on with the story!!" This is a compliment to you, it means your writing has me spell-bound!! I love the story, and nice red-herring on the proposal thing!!! You really had me there.
I like it and I look forward to more. Yea, Edward is hot as hell, as always. =]
Author's Response: So sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your review - I have gotten so far behind it's embarrassing *blushes*. Better late than never, right?
Your comment had me LOL'ing - it's nice to hear that you're so caught up in the progression of the story that the lemons are secondary. It's a slow progression, just like it has been all along, so it'll get there, I promise!
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - it means the world to me!
Reviewer: poncaradeblythe (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 30
I disagree with this!!, I have 35 too, and I have always on the pill…
Is not rare and much less unusual or unhealthy.
Even more .... the weird is not be in the pill at all, especially at this age, when one no wants in hell "accidents" !!
Author's Response: My goodness, sorry it's taken me so long to respond - better late than never, right? *blushes*
Bella's not on the pill because she was on it for a very long time and had to stop. She hasn't been sexually active for over two years, and it didn't occur to her to go back on it once she got involved with Edward. They won't use condoms forever, though.
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 25
lol..i actually never found the hippo christmas song!
Author's Response: Well, it's not the best video ever, but it's got the song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7xjjlUbpJ4
I hope you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 30
Okay....the dinner went welll with the family.....but they had a very serious talk about children. She is not that old that she couldn't have a baby. I had mine on my 39th birthday. She loves kids and she REALLY loves Edward who REALLY wants a child with her. If you had Edward and he wanted to have baby with you, do you think you could resist that? I know that I couldn't.........I am hoping that maybe Bella will change her mind. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Author's Response: I know I wouldn't be able to resist a man like Edward, but Bella.... well, she's thought long and hard about this. And so has Edward - these two have had enough pain in their lives that they know they need to be 100% honest with each other. Edward has realized that "family" doesn't necessarily mean a biological child.
As far as hoping Bella changes her mind... you're in very good company, because that's the wish of a lot of readers :)
thanks for always taking hte time to read and comment - I love hearing from you :)
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 8
this is good, what is in Edwards past, is it TANYA!!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story. If you've read further, you know that it's NOT Tanya in his past :)
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 30
Bella needs to serioulsy change her mind....I mean it is a woman's perogative to do so...so change it already I need some green eyed babies>>>>
Author's Response: Mmmm, green-eyed Edward babies....
A lot of readers are hoping that Bella has a change of heart, so you're in good company :)
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
Reviewer: unicornmonetcullen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 30
i love it write more pls
Author's Response: So glad that you like the story :) Chapter 31 is with the beta, so as soon as she gets it done it will post!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 30
I'm 35 and my family is complete. But I have to say that if it were important to the man in my life, I'd want another child, though I know loads of women my age who would disagree. It's interesting that you've put Bella in that role. Very unique, I like it. Though, if your Edward told me to eat broken glass, I'd likely be willing to try. He is too yummy!! =]
Author's Response: So much has changed in Bella's life in the past two years that she just can't fathom any more change. It was a hard decision for her to come to, knowing as she did that it could change their entire relationship. But Edward made the decision with her too - it had a to be a joint choice.
Although I have to agree - no matter what Edward would want me to do, I'd be on board with that :)
Thanks for always taking the time to read and comment - you know I love it!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 30
Awsome!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the update! :)
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 30
"I giggled. “Death by orgasm, is there any better way to go? I told you the other night I was going to make you scream my name.”
I fucking wish this was me dammit!
LOVED THIS ONE!!! (again)
MWAH!!!!!
Author's Response: MWAH BACK!!!!! <---- extra exclamation points for you.
You can get in line and I'll turn Edward over when I'm done with him. Bring an encyclopedia library - Imma taking my time with that boy!
Love you bb!
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