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Reviews For Farewell
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:10 AM · On: Keeping the Blade

Wow! You sure took us on a wild emotional roller coaster ride and it eas excellent!

Author's Response: oh, i love rollercoasters! could you tell? hehe. i'm glad you enjoyed it! i will try to update soon. happy reading and thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: septentrion (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:08 AM · On: Keeping the Blade

well, it couldn't go well, now, could it? How will Edward convince Bella that he still loves her? I'm pretty sure Bella is the only one not to see it. *crosses fingers in the hope that Conner won't prevent their reunion, but only after Edward suffers for having left Bella*

Author's Response: no, i'm sorry, i just couldn't let their reunion be that easy. and as for how he will convince her? i don't know yet, but it's not going to be easy. and as for conner's role in all of this? i'll get back to you on that one...thanks for the review and happy reading! i'll try to update soon! :)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Keeping the Blade

MERCIFUL LORD! You might as well kill me! This is FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC! I soooo loved Bella telling Edward she was leaving him to his "distractions!" Delicious! I cannot wait for more! Please post more ASAP!

Author's Response:

i'm glad you felt it was delicious. i like that! thank you for your kind words and i shall give my best effort to get another chapter up soon! thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:18 AM · On: Doctor

Cliffhanger! She was so close!

Author's Response: yes, indeed she was, but read the next chapter, i think you may be pleased :) thanks muches for the review! happy reading! ;)

Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 12:55 AM · On: My Sweet Prince

i haven't read this all yet, but i have to say, it caught my attention when i saw jason behr on your banner!  (: (: (: (:  do you write roswell fanfics too??

 

off i go to read... sigh, robert pattinson AND jason behr in my mind?? i like it already!



Author's Response: i have tossed around an idea or two and started some roswell fanfics but none of them ever caught on for me past about two or three pages. this is the first fanfic i've actually continued writing beyond those first few pages and it is almost as addictive to write as i'm hoping it is to read. and yes, what a wonderful fantasy of edward and max. haha. oh, i miss roswell. thanks for reading and reviewing, by the way, i hope you enjoyed the story so far! check back for an update, it should be up today or tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Doctor

Typical Rosalie.

Whatever happens between Bella and Edward, I hope Bella tells Rose to keep her sparkly, greedy claws off the baby! It would be in character for Rose to expect to be Auntie Rose, but considering how nasty she is to Bella, she doesn't deserve it.



Author's Response: yes yes, i had to leave rosalie as the evil bitch. for now at least. i don't know if she will ever see the error of her ways and be auntie rose in this story, but i might decide to have a huge heart and make her change her tune so she can enjoy the baby. i don't know yet what will happen, but i thought it important to get views from all the characters in some way or another. i hope you are enjoying the story!! :) an update should be available later today or tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Sammygrl1120 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 09:28 PM · On: My Sweet Prince

I've been reading this story for a while now and I just recently got an account and I had to leave this story a review.  I can't wait for more updates.  I want to see what you are planning on happening between Conner and Bella or should I say Layla.(very clever name by the way I like it a lot.)When will Edward and Bell finally see each other face to face again? Wow I know sorry I can't rush a good story. I think it is great how your expressing Bella's attitude towards everything.  I like the strong confident Bella and how she has picked up her life throughout everything that has happened to her, but yet there are always people there, like Conner, who want to protect her.  I do hope that she trust Conner though soon.  I mean he is a doctor and I don't really see her logic in demanding to see the rest of the Denali coven if he looks like the only one who can really help her with the medical stuff.  That way she would only have to confide in one person, but I know the Cullens had to find out Bella was still alive soon so that Edward doesn't go all suicidal.  Anyways I just wanted you to know that your story is awesome and I'm looking forward to everything unfolding.  Keep it up. I'll be waiting... Oh and I also just wanted to ask if there was a certain pattern to your updates of like a new chapter every week of something or if it's just done when its done?  I'm sorry to ask, but not that I don't like the cliff hanger it is just killing me. lol Sorry again I know reviews should be encouraging so I'll leave you with that and pray that updates will come soon!!! Again great work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I am glad that you are enjoying the story and looking forward to updates. The reason why she wants to see the rest of the coven in Denali is because she wants as much information as she can possibly get about her baby and since Conner and his medical equipment aren't giving her much in the way of answers about her child, she is willing to risk letting the rest of the coven know about her condition in order to gain some knowledge about what might happen to her. and as for a schedule of updates, i, unfortunately do not have one. i typically try really hard to update at least once a week, but sometimes a chapter is really frustrating because I keep changing my mind or i'm distracted and it takes longer and then others the chapter just flows right out of my mind and its done sooner. A safe estimate would be about weekly, though, so please do check back every so often! I hope you enjoy the next chapter, which i will be submitting today. Happy reading! :)

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 05:47 PM · On: Doctor

Bella didn't think about the scents!! I hope Edward finds her and goes to her...Conner seems nice, but he's already in love with her and she is pregnant with another vampires baby...a little weird.

Author's Response: ah yes, but conner does not know that her baby is part vampire. i know, i know, still a little weird, but i'm going with it. hehe. anyway, yes a reunion between Bella and Edward is in the works...we'll just have to see how it turns out. thanks so much for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Doctor

Liking this so far.

Author's Response:

I am so glad to hear it! i hope you continue to like it! :) I shall be updating soon!

 

Reviewer: brandybunny (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 12:31 PM · On: Doctor

OMG I'm on the edge of my seat!! This is a wonderull story and this chapter was amazing!! Keep up the excellent writing and update imediately!!! 

Author's Response: I'm so glad I have you on the edge of your seat. i am glad you are enjoying the story and i hope you continue like it when I update! thanks very much for the review! :)

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 08:32 AM · On: Doctor

I knew that he would smell Bella, maybe Conner will be good enough to keep him out of his head. I am in hopes that Edward runs outside and can follow the scent to the car. See...I can hope for lots of things. BTW this Conner guys sounds all yummy and hot. Maybe....nah...Cant wait for more!

Author's Response:

yes yes, you can always hope, hope is good. and yes, dr. conner is very yummy and hot, in my opinion. but will he steal the heart of fair maiden Bella? hmmm. i don't know, we shall have to see. thanks for the review! :) hope you will enjoy what's coming up...

Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Doctor

She's in the car Edward go get her! great chapter this conner guy is interesting.... update soon please.

Author's Response: i will update as soon as possible, i promise! and a reunion is coming at some point in the future, i swear. it may not be all butterflies and sunshine, but it will be a reunion nonetheless. thank you so much for reading and reviewing! i hope you will enjoy the next installment! :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 06:52 AM · On: Doctor

Bella has to be ut of her mind I see why though but at the same time all she needed was 5 minutes away!!!  OMG can't wait for the next post I'm freaking wow well written...  Not another unrequited love interest LOL

Author's Response: haha...yeah. i'm glad you are eager for the next post and i hope you will be pleased with it. i hope i hope i hope. and the love interest...well...yeah, i couldn't help myself. thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 06:26 AM · On: Doctor

Uh oh, is the ruse up? Great chapter.

Author's Response: you shall see oh wonderful fabulous reader. i promise to post the next chapter soonish. maybe with the holiday i'll even be able to finish 2! thank you so much for your review! i appreciate it!! :)

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 03:17 AM · On: Doctor

oh please let bella and edward be reunited (it doesn't have to be a happy reunion, but just a reunion)...... and what was with the name change???? Connor to kieran to connor...??????

Author's Response: a reunion will come, i swear. and so sorry about the name change. I originally had chosen kieran but then i found out what the meaning of conner was and i just had to go with that. unfortunately, in my haste to submit the chapter, i left one kieran in there. please forgive...i promise it shan't happen again! thanks for the review!!! :)

Reviewer: septentrion (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 02:12 AM · On: Doctor

The E*B fan in me is worried: will Conner steal Bella's heart? I hope not, but it's your story to tell. Great chapter. Once more, you have me on the edge of my seat.

Author's Response: i am glad i can keep you on the edge of your seat. it makes me quite happy. and as for whether or not conner will steal bella's heart, well, i'll decide that later. i have my inklings on who will win out but you never know. one of the sexy men could piss me off...hehe...anywho...thank you oodles for the review...i greatly appreciate it!!! :)

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 12:45 AM · On: Doctor

I loved the chapter...but I have to admit...seeing question marks in the place of quotations was distracting.

Author's Response: so so so sorry about that horrible problem. this shall serve as a lesson to me: never again shall i attempt to edit something in a chapter from my blackberry. i solved one minor problem and replaced it with a major one. I hope you were able to enjoy the chapter anyway and thank your for reviewing despite the annoyance. i super appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: tigerlily3489 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 12:11 AM · On: Doctor

That was an amazing chapter! Dr McCarthy will definately make things interesting. How old was he when he was changed? Is he closer to Edward's age or Carlisle's? When Bella looked at the doctor after the baby kicked, you said his name was Keiran, not Connor, was that a typo or a different character? I am really loving the direction this story is going in. Have you decided if it will still be an Edward/Bella story or a Connor/Bella one? Nevermind, I want to find out when the rest iof us do! This really was a great chapter, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: You will find out more about Conner in the coming chapters and that little name thing was just me changing his name when i finished the chapter because i liked the meaning of conner for my character, and, unfortunately, in my haste to submit the chapter, i missed changing his name that time. the problem has since been resolved. i am glad you enjoyed the chapter and i hope you are looking forward to the next one! thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 12:05 AM · On: Doctor

 Ok so here's the thing, why is Conner suddenly in love with Bella? I mean, obviously he isn't really in love with her, he's in love with a memory of his wife, and Bella just reminds him of her. I really hope Edward and Bella have a reunion now, I really want to see them together, I mean, its been 8 parts already! And also, I don't think I like this Conner guy at all. He's kinda weird and obsessive. And on top of that I can't wait to see the reunion! Update again soon please because that was such a cliffhanger!


Author's Response:

Conner has fallen for Bella, and it isn't just because of his wife. Perhaps future installments will make that more clear. I know it is sudden and strange and illogical, but sometimes that is love and there is nothing that can be done about it. As for the reunion, it will be happening. I apologize if you feel like it has taken too long, and I will try to make it good. Thank you oodles for reading and reviewing and i hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 11:46 PM · On: Doctor

W-O-W.   I am a B&E fan, so I do hope they find each other soon!  I am really enjoying your story, keep it up!

 

 



Author's Response: the reunion is coming: brace yourself. I am glad you are enjoying the story and I hope that you continue to when you see where this all leads. thank you bunches for the review and encouragement! I'll try to post soon! :)

Reviewer: maggiemypet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 11:19 PM · On: Doctor

!!!!!

  



Author's Response: ummm...i'll take that as a good thing? i hope you enjoyed it and aren't like "grrr stupid writer what are you thinking". haha. thank you for the review and I hope you will enjoy the coming chapters. you are fabulous wonderful! :)

Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Doctor

Wow! that's  gonna be hard for Edward to let go. He'll clobber Conner. There is no way anyone will be able to convince him it isn't her scent. she's his singer afterall, plus all the other cullens will recognize it if they know to 'look'. great job!!!

Author's Response: yes, well, let's just say he and conner aren't going to be best buddies. i am glad you enjoyed the chapter and i hope you are looking forward to the next. i shall try to post it super soon!! thanks for the review!! :)

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Doctor

Ah good, I was worried that this was going to turn into a really long run around until Edward smelled Bella's scent. I guess I just to much of a E/B fan because Conner's emotions are really bugging me... but I'm interested to see where you are going with it.

Author's Response: i'm sorry conner's emotions are bothering you, and yet i am not because i expected that from most of the readers. i am glad you are interested in seeing where this story leads and thank you so much for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:53 PM · On: Doctor

Another great chapter, and an intriguing original character.  A bit more backstory, please.  (I'm usually not keen on original characters but I'm really liking this one.  What can I say? I'm a pushover for a gorgeous guy with an Irish brogue.)  Of  course with Edward's enhanced senses and mind-reading ability, it's only a matter of time before he realizes Bella is alive and in Denali.  What will handsome Dr. Conner do???? 

I am really really enjoying this story! 

And, although it's probably already understood given my review:  Please update soon.



Author's Response: I am so glad that you are liking it and that you like conner! don't worry, you will learn more about him in the coming chapters! and i will definitely try super hard to post again soon!! thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:20 PM · On: Doctor

You've really captured my attention with this story. Am really intrigued by it so far and couldn't stop reading all of the chapters straight through. I like the character of Conner, but obviously want Bella back with Edward again.  I am hoping he is able to connect with her again before it's too late. I really like your writing style, you have a way of pulling a reader into the story.  Hoping you will update soon.

Author's Response: thank you sooooo much for your kind words! i am so happy that you are enjoying the story and i will do my best to update soon! thanks for the review! :)

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