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Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Please be Carlisle! But I'm guessing Eleazer.
Author's Response: both good and common guesses...but i've got a few tricks up my sleeve for this one...hope you like them! :)
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 05:06 PM · On: How Do You Get That Lonely?
Whoa cliff hanger!
Author's Response: yuppers...i just hope you're glad that you didn't have to wait the week or so it took me to update after i posted that one...people were not pleased that they couldn't just click next to find out what happened back then...hehe...i like cliffhangers, so beware! :)
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:45 PM · On: A Modern Myth
I love this story already!
Author's Response: woohoo, i'm so glad you love it...i can only hope it stays that way! :)
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Not My Home
Oh, Emoward, what are we going to do with you? This was definitely a transitional chapter, so I'm not all HOLY SHIT THAT WAS AWESOME!!! but I can see why it was needed. Now I'm scared to read the OMG chapter that I know is coming next. *cringes in the corner* Okay, I'm ready for it. But if you kill Edward, so help me god... *shakes fist*
Author's Response: okay, cringing really isn't necessary, i promise you...i'm really thinking that i should have used a term besides OMG, but oh well; what is done is done. here are some things i can tell you about the next chapter: i do not kill anyone in it, it will be somewhat sad but the ending of it will be...not so sad...and there will be TWO new POVs because i had a suggestion in a review and i just couldn't get it out of my head so i wrote it and there it is...i'm hoping that i will have it done by monday (when my beta gets back from vacation) but i'm not sure if i will seeing as how there are 7 POV separations so far, and even for me, that is a lot...i am trying to hurry! thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Mad World
Oh no! Edward needs to find some powerful condoms. lol
Author's Response: hahahahhaha...i think it's a little too late for that. thanks for the review! happy reading! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 04:16 PM · On: I'm Jealous
Just when I thought you had a couple of happy moments "schizophrenic gnat" "Oh yes, that baby was sure gonna love Uncle Emmett. And daddy Edward was going to have a fit." "I cast all of my fears aside and accepted Isabella Swan as my newest sister." You go and combine evil bitch 1 with evil bitch 2 and kill off one of the Cullens. Is nothing sacrate? Why are Alice's visions not working oh I don't know maybe 10-15 minutes faster then they seem to be? And ok yes Conner did gain a little of my trust, but seriously if he makes one move to drive a wedge between Bella & Edward I say torch him.
Your just Evil...E-V-I-L afoot!
Author's Response: but but but...at least i gave you some happy moments, yes? it wasn't all doom and gloom and evil and bah, right? haha...yes, things are sacred...but you will not see precisely what all i feel is sacred until the final chapter. alice's visions are a little off because she is being affected by the baby for one and she's not really attuned to looking out for victoria's decisions, and because if they were faster, this story would take on a completely different way of being. i'm glad conner managed to gain some of your trust, and i think he will retain it. i really do. and yes...i have been called evil before, and i accept the title. sometimes it's fun to be evil...though i must say i enjoyed writing emmett and killing him off was difficult for me, too...can't wait to hear more from you! :) happy reading! :)
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:50 PM · On: My Sweet Prince
Excellent chapter. Onto chp 2.
Author's Response: glad you liked the beginning and are reading on! :) it confused some people so i'm planning to expand chapter one a bit before i post the final chapter, but since i haven't gotten there yet, i'm glad that it made sense to you! hehe...happy reading and thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Things Left Unsaid
Oh like this wasn't crazy..lets see you could have the baby heal Bella like tomorrow, or they decide to take the baby and the baby lives but Bella dies leaving Edward the choice to change her to save her. Tanya tries to kill Bella or the Baby or Edward or all three. Victoria finds out Bella & the baby lived and goes after them again. Or world peace could be established (no thats just nuts)
Author's Response: haha...world peace was the closest guess...hehe...just kidding...no...all good guesses, for certain, but not quite right. i hope you liked what happened instead (okay, maybe not liked it because it's still not super happy but didn't hate it at least) thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Revenge
I'm really begining to worry about what dark place your mind is living in. i have read A LOT of Twilight fan fiction and I have to say of all that I have read I do not recall a more ******...I'm not even sure what adjective to use hear. You are a good writer as I read I can picture exactly what your story is saying and actually Victoria is written very well. As we don't really have too much info to go off of from SM, but I can see her thinking and even doing the things you have her thinking and doing. How everyone else is acting is a little out there for me except Tanya (also who we don't have too much info to go off of from SM) ummmm I'm seeing a pattern maybe you are identifying with the evil characters more than the others ;-)
Author's Response: Oh, that's kind of sad because I was trying to identify with all of them. I guess I just perceive all of the characters a bit differently...and my mind really isn't living in a dark place, i swear. that just happens to be how the story is going...but the end will be not so dark. for real. i do like happy sappy love and fluff...but there's a lot of that in the fanfiction world and i wanted to go a little darker route...looking forward to your thoughts on the coming chapters...thanks for your review! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 02:31 PM · On: White Horse
Oh all the misery you weave!!! Thank God atleast Alice knows what they hell is going on...Boo that she has yet to form a plan to fix this glob of goo. I guess it was option b for Bella breaking her hand. Crap you have Tanya (yuck) plotting to keep them apart. I might actual feel sorry (ok I do) for Conner or like him (which i don't think I do) if he too was not plotting to keep them apart and wanting Bella for himself. Double crap that Bella wants him to cont calling her Layla. Let me guess Victoria tortures Bella, Edward finds her and his only recoarse is to bite her, and Conner walks in on it and thinks he did it just cause or Victoria attacks Bella and Conner finds her and bites her and Edward thinks he did it just cause.
Maybe its the sad music you listen too? cause I youtube it and listen when I read your chapters.
Author's Response: i can't tell you how happy i am that you are making predictions...surpisingly few people actually do and i love reading what you think is going to be happening in the next chapter :) now, here are my predictions...i think that your distate for tanya will grow even stronger (actually, i know it will) and i think you will grow to like Conner. you are partially right in your one prediction, but not exactly. you'll see.
and as for the music i listen to, i'm not always listening to depressing songs, I promise. i use the music so i can get depressed and in the mood to write the story...i'm actually usually a really happy person. shocking, right? hehe...i am quite glad that you listen to the songs, though, because i really try to choose music that captures how i expect the characters and/or readers to feel.
thanks bunches for the review and happy reading :) i'm biting my nails waiting for you to get to a certain part...
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:35 AM · On: History
Oh crap, this whole misunderstanding thing just keeps getting worse. Please let Bella accept his kiss as the truth (but somehow I think that would be too easy for you) she either completely breaks her hand, faints, or conner punches Edward out...right??? Good story from Kate
Author's Response: Oh, you are getting to know me so well. Hehe. And one of your guesses was right on the mark. Good job! :) and thanks for the review, though I hope that by now you know I appreciate every single one! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Keeping the Blade
Ok on my previous review I said I was confused, ( I thought Bella was dreaming they had slept together). But now I think I've got it. On this chapter you wrote Victoria well. I cried again when I realized that Bella & Edward were not going to have the reunion I had hoped. But thank you for atleast letting her get out of the car and not letting them keep on thinking she is dead. Still depressed by this story and if this was your goal you are very good at it. Just please don't have Tanya comforting Edward and Conner comforting Bella. *wince*
BTW I work for a psychatric hospital and I know for a fact there are medications we use to make this not so dark ;-)
You have me hooked I will continue...
Author's Response: I'm glad that I have you hooked, but you haven't quite gotten to the point of no return, so we shall have to see what you think when you get there. I hope you don't wince too badly in future; I tried not to keep bella and edward apart for too long...but their bumpy road is far from over. Thanks for the review, as always, and happy reading! :)
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:03 PM · On: My Sweet Prince
You give me too much credit. I'm sorry about your day. (I loved that book when I was a kid.) It's too bad that super talented, made of win awesomesauce people aren't automatically imune to craptastic times. If it were up to me... Well, nothing would ever go wrong in your life that might interfere with things like plot bunnies and muses and internet connections. But last time I checked I had not yet recieved my superpowers in the mail yet.
Still waiting.
Crickets...
Don't hold your breath.
~Mia
Author's Response: Hahahahaha...thanks. I needed that. I won't hold my breath but I'll hold on to some hope that your super powers just got re-routed, lost, found, and re-sent and will be arriving any day now complete with profound apologies for the delay. :)
Reviewer: EricCullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Lightning Crashes
ok so I'm on chapter 18 and i just need to know, does anything good ever happen in this story?
I can't remember the last time i was so depressed.
Although, its a great story thus far. I think i just need to see someone smile again =)
Author's Response: Yes, good things do happen. Eventually. I know it is quite the depressing tale and I thank you for sticking with it thus far. Please stay till the end because I think you will like it. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:26 PM · On: All Of This Past
Okay so this is so incredible sad; but im not going to stop reading....i am hooked.
Author's Response: Glad to see that your hooked. I can only hope the feeling lasts because, well, you'll see why. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Doctor
Oh come on another vampire in love with Bella! Edward, then James is obsessed with her, then Jasper is ready to rip her throat out now Conner is in love with her. Please bring Bella & Edward together soon.
Author's Response: The two lovers will be meeting soon. Conner will play an important role in Bella's life, but Edward will always be the one she loves. I hope you will continue to read. Thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Hide and Seek
Thank you for no Jacob and thank you for no Edward running off to off himself
Author's Response: You're welcome and you're welcome. Hmmm...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:32 PM · On: How Do You Get That Lonely?
You were right tissues were needed...lots& lots & lots & lots of tissues
Author's Response: Good thing you got the warning. There's another chapter later on that warrents such a warning...hope you keep on reading till then :) thanks for the review!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:24 PM · On: My Sweet Prince
Neither can I!
~Mia
Author's Response: Ok. You are deemed my most prized reviewer today because it wound up being the terrible, horrible, no good, very bad day from hell and the underworld and all other damned places but I forced myself to snap out of my funk and keep writing because I have awesome people like you waiting for this update. So...thanks for that :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 04:41 PM · On: A Modern Myth
Wow please tell me this is a dream (nightmare) or that Alice or EWdward saves her. I guess the sun never shines in your forks
Author's Response: you'll see, you'll see...keep reading! :) the sun does shine in my forks...just not really until the last chapter...which isn't written yet...just beware...it gets worse before it gets better...hope you keep reading and thank you for reviewing and sharing your thoughts with every chapter! i love it! :) happy reading! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Mad World
Ok...so I guess they did sleep together..I'm a little confused and somewhat depressed reading how depressed Bella is..I think you write her misery well, so your doing a good job with it.
Author's Response: thanks...just wondering what you are confused about regarding bella's depression...i want to try to clarify if i can, provided that future chapters do not do the job...you can always feel free to send me a message with questions if you like...i am a bit obsessive with this story and i'm usually quick about replies...thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: mar (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Something Wicked This Way Comes
well written, love the way you are taking the story .
Author's Response: thank you...i can only hope that you continue to feel that way :) thank you for the review! i'll try to update soon! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 02:37 PM · On: All Of This Past
Wow poor Bella & Charlie & Renee. Bella wasn't suffering from a broken heart, she was suffering from a broken soul ;'(
Author's Response: that is quite true...i'm glad i conveyed the right kind of feelings...thank you, once again for your review! :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:42 PM · On: My Sweet Prince
Ok So did they really sleep together and then he left after the party mishap? If so thats worse then sm version
Author's Response: yes yes...they did sleep together...i know that the first chapter is kind of confusing...i will actually be going back before i post the final chapter and making some additions to the first chapter so that things are less confusing...i was still new to the writing thing then and i didn't realize that things that i saw in my head were not adequately described in the chapter. A thousand apologies, kind reviewer! :)
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:58 AM · On: My Sweet Prince
Despite the angsty context, it always is happy reading when you update. It's always worth the wait too.
You made me blush. Now I wish I'd been more eloquent the first time around. You always amaze and captivate me. Thank you.
~Mia
Author's Response: awww...i didn't mean to make you blush, but i meant what i said. even when you threaten kidnapping and chaining to computers, your reviews make me smile. i'm glad that my updates make you happy and are worth the wait...i can't wait for you to get the next chapter! :)
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