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Reviewer: annlike (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2017 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

puissance de la montre mécanique, a toujours été un tabou plus critiqué la place, automatiquement sur la chaîne de montres est également un peu mieux, aussi longtemps que l'usure normale, la puissance est pas un problème, tant que l'attention le week-end 2 jours de temps de repos ne porte pas le cas, le besoin re-porter pour se réadapter, plus de problèmes. Replique Montblanc Montre en raison de l'absence de problèmes d'alimentation, si longtemps montre la puissance est née, alors pourquoi maintenant la majeure partie de la montre de l'énergie cinétique sont encore dans les 48 heures? Pourquoi pas tous se transformer en une longue montre de puissance? Qu'est-ce qu'une longue montre de puissance, replique montre pense personnellement que la chaîne peut être une précision continue à marcher 72 heures de la montre peut être appelée longue montre de puissance, qui est, 3 jours de réserve de marche, bien sûr, il y a des gens pense que le pouvoir doit être plus de 7 jours à compter de la longue montre de puissance, alors pourquoi maintenant beaucoup de montres de marque à faire toute la croissance de la montre de puissance pour améliorer la compétitivité? est-ce parce que le problème des coûts ou quelle raison? Nous savons tous que l'énergie cinétique de la montre dépend entièrement Le dispositif d'enroulement de la montre

Reviewer: scalett (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2016 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Awestruck (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ok, I'm intrigued. .

Reviewer: Dozey212 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was very strange .... and very original. I loved it. I wish you would write more!

Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice job with this! I thought the suspense and slow build of tension was handled especially well!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It was my first venture into original fiction and I was bummed that I had to have a word limit. I might revisit it at a later time. We'll see.

Reviewer: morrigan (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice.  I don't usually read the OS over here, but I'm glad I checked this one out.  Your characters are tangible and I really enjoyed the way you weaved this short story together.  Thanks for the read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. It's a short little story that's close to my heart...and I might expand it because there were so many things I didn't include due to length restrictions.

Again, thanks for reviewing.   

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

Agh. Don't stop!

I was scared but I knew Tom wouldn't hurt her.

I loved this story and the way you interwove Tom and Cissy's awareness of each other. Tom's lonliness and his feelings for his mother felt so real.

Best wishes in the contest. I hope you continue this story, I already care about the characters so much.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I left you a review as well. Yeah, I was kind of upset when I HAD to stop the story. I'll probably continue it and further develop their histories as well as their relationship. :)

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