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Reviews For I Would Have Saved Her If I Could

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 10:03 AM · On: One-Shot

So ... did he commit suicide and meet her in the afterlife ... ?

Or was her death a dream, and now he is waking up beside her? And if so, is it a straight line story, in which she doesn't die ... ? Or a circle story, in which he wakes up beside her on the morning in which she meets her fate ... ?

Delicious puzzle of a tale here.

Author's Response:
It's all left up to interpretation, isn't it? :)

Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:13 PM · On: One-Shot

that was just mean, im sitting here crying my eyes out and she's not even dead, but it was really good.

Reviewer: twilightgirl98 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:53 PM · On: One-Shot

Wait, so she isn't dead? I'm confused......... Awesome story cried like a baby!

Reviewer: moblair (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:06 PM · On: One-Shot

Oh my goodness. I bawled like a baby. I love the way you ended this and the heartfail was obviously fabulous since I cried. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:02 AM · On: One-Shot

I loved the way you wove past and present together like that. I especially appreciated how raw and vivid Edward's grief was; you didn't back off from that, and that takes some courage. But it gave a sense of how unrelenting Edward's grief was, how he couldn't get a break from it no matter what he did. Beautiful and poignant. Very good job.

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:36 AM · On: One-Shot

That was wonderful. So sad that I cried. Great work on this story.

Reviewer: Arizona Hale (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:21 PM · On: One-Shot

oooh, beautiful. well done.

Reviewer: Cergog (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:19 PM · On: One-Shot

that made me cry oh

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