I never thought it would come and here it is!  What a lovely chapter.  Thank you for the update and keep us posted on your original.

Author's Response:

My original is complete and I am in the editing process. It's a planned mini series of books, with four planned. I found that after ripping the first one out of me, I needed a break before the second one. I'm currently shopping it to agents, but no bites yet. I think I'm being too nice and only submitting to one at a time! I haven't gotten any rejections, per se, but no responses either. If I don't get a nibble by the time the editing is complete, I am planning to self publish via Amazon and see if I can drum up some readership there. So look for it in the Spring! I'll make some sort of an announcement on here when it goes up. I hope that you'll read it and enjoy it!

Wondering when you wrote this, and if there's ever going to be any more....

 

Loved it!

Needs more conflict--maybe leverage Leah for that?

I just finished reading the Twilight series for the first time, and found myself wanting more, so I came here. I'm particularly interested in the idea of "What if Bella wound up with Jacob instead?" so that drew me to your story.

I think you've done a great job of setting this up, and of staying true to the characters. The total absence of any mention of Edward seemed a little odd. Is she no longer in love with him? Also, "recalcitrant" probably isn't the word you want.

All in all, a great fix for the Twilight addict!

So far I'm pretty bummed that Jake is acting like such an ass...But I think he'll make up for it later, right? Its goood :)

I love this story!  I can't wait for your updates.  Thanks for writing!  -Christine

Sweet chapter! Loved the UST and the fact that Bella is announcing it to any and all. Poor Quil. Talk about being between a rock and a hard place. Hope you have time to update again soon. I really enjoy your story. :)

Finally ! And for the love of ....werewolves WHY does he have a hang-up for "perfect " ? But he would , wouldn´t he ?

I really like your Bella. She´s grown a lot.

Lovin' the story! Can't wait to see what happens next. ;-)

Yowsa!! Quil was smart, getting out while the getting was good. I can't wait to see what Bella has up her sleeve next for Jacob!

oooh! loving the story! can't wait for the next chapter -L

great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.

OMG!!!! U r sooo awesome! I love this story and i just love your writing style. This cliffie was definitely unexpected.  I kept thinking that Quil was gonna try to kiss her  or something, lol. But to have Victoria come out of nowhere and actually attack?!  U have a true gift and i hope u continue writing. I am reading your other story as well and i anxiously await updates!!