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Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Pack Mentality

What an action packed chapter that was!!! YIKES!!!!  I liked Bella not giving up and playing a coward roll!  She kicked some ass in this one :) 

Awe, and Alice showing up!!! Awe... Bella will like to see her... but this could complicate things btw Bella and Jacob, I do hope it doesn't though.

Thanks for updating!!! I <3 this story!!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Pack Mentality


Reviewer: bell-ed (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Pack Mentality

Wow! So glad I found this story, just love a mature Bella and Jacob.  Always had a sneaking feeling that Bella would have been better off with Jacob.  Looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Victoria

EEEeeee! Everybody's fave villainess! And just when things were starting to look hopeful for B's love life...Since I'm absolutely certain you've got about a jillion plot twists in store for us, I'll skip the doom-filled organ music just now! Isn't fic fun? <><3

Reviewer: FrenchNinny (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Victoria

Oh God I hate you now for leaving it like this!!!!! Damn it!!! Please make sure the next chapter gets posted ASAP!!! lol

Reviewer: ElaineEscalera (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Victoria


Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Victoria

OMG.....update...update... Awesome chapter.... I so love the fact that Bella is taken with Mackenzie....the pack needs to get to Bella NOW!!!!! Crap...

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Victoria


I have goosebumps ... I don't even know what to say ..... no rational thought comes to mind, .....I'm in shock...... I,,I... think ....I'm

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Victoria

I love how easy-going she is about it. "I think I'l kill you now." Like she hasn't been waiting for the chance for years.

Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Victoria

is jacob is going to get to bella in time

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Victoria

WTF?!  What happened to after Xmas!  That is totally not cool, at all!  Are you plugging us with the whole "vampire can become human" thing b/c you're going to change Bella anyway... hummm... I can't wait to see what you do?!  Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: highlight (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Victoria

...not cool.  I mean awesome chapter, but still, so not cool.  So my big question here is if I personally  leave 15 reviews, will it get me the next chapter by this evening?!?  Just curious.  I physically could not bear it if you don't update soon.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, nothing can make the validation process go faster. I've already submitted the next chapter for proofing and it should be up soon. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Victoria

This story is really intense!!  I love how Jacob and Bella are older and more mature.  Your writing is so smooth and the story really flows well.  I can see everything you are describing, and feel every emotion that Bella and Jacob feel.  I totally agree that there would be huge trust issues for the Pack when Bella returned.  I also admire how much she grew up and realizes how selfish she was when she was younger, and how she takes responsibility for her actions and feelings.  This is a lovely story and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for a thorough and well put together review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I, like most authors, pour a bit of myself into everything I write, and it's lovely when people really seem to enjoy it. The next chapter will be up soon, and I hope you enjoy it as much as you've enjoyed the rest of the story thus far.

Reviewer: madisynblack (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Trust Me

nice save on leah...

Reviewer: madisynblack (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Take a Flying Leap

im liking it so far... and he has a bebeH!!! time will only tell.. good job so far =)

Reviewer: madisynblack (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Back to Where It All Began

so far so good =) and im glad that Jake didnt welcome her with open arms... lol it just makes me lose interest when its like that... onward to the next chappie!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Victoria


Reviewer: cdn_maags (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Party

Great story - I'm enjoying this story much better than the "Breaking Dawn" storyline (I obviously cheer for Jacob).  Please keep updating - I'm loving where this could go....

Reviewer: terry_deanne (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Party

I'm very sorry to hear about your Grandmother, I lost my Nan to cancer a few years ago. On a lighter note I am wondering about your previous 15 reviews=new chapter comment, does it apply if I leave all 15?!?!?!


Reviewer: highlight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Party

Ok, so I'm not normally one for reviewing, but I really need you to update this lovely story to feed my this is me contributing one of the fifteen reviews that will get you to update.

Reviewer: jaceadiane (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Party

MOREE!! :)

Reviewer: jaceadiane (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Take a Flying Leap


Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Party

Had much experience with toddlers and crowds?? Cute! Nice description of an extended family, I was just a tad jealous of the cameradrie.

Good that Bella is aware of the generosity of the Pack & Jake taking her back, they would be well within rights to all have Leah's attitude... The way everyone has grown up and matured is nicely done & believable. <><3


Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Alice

OOOooooh! Love it! The letter was a nice touch - we all needed that, not just Bella. So many secrets... <><3

Author's Response:

I am so flattered that you have read and enjoyed my story. I have voraciously read those you have written, and your talent is almost mindboggling. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, and I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. The next chapter is already awaiting validation, so stay tuned.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Party

Jacob seems like such a great dad!  I'm so glad J/B worked out their problem.  Boy that kiss was quite steamy, I can't wait for more.  I find it funny that Bella doesn't know anything about kids.   I'm so glad i founfd this story!

My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.  I know what you're going through I lost my mom to cancer, it's never easy, take care.


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