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Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Victoria

great job!! can not wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Party

great job!!

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Alice

great job!!

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Volturi

great job!!

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Trust Me

great job!!

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Take a Flying Leap

great job!!

Reviewer: zaruka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Back to Where It All Began

great job!!

Reviewer: emmms14 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Sweet Surprise


Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Sweet Surprise


Reviewer: SkittlesBlack (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

Aw that was a cute chapter. I didn't expect a new chapter to be up but I checked anyway and Im glad I did. Cant wait for the rest.

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

I'm glad Edward was able to move on. Will he be making a guest appearance at any point? (I'm not thinking they should get back togegther at all, just thinking it'd be good for them to see one another again)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Sweet Surprise

Oh come on!!!!  What a rotten thing to do and place to stop!!!  Thats just mean! lol 

Pleeeeeease update soon!



I'm so glad Edward has found a mate and is happy!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

Awe... I wanted to see the date and get some more fluff out of these two... Stuff will hit the fan soon I bet :p

Thanks for the update!  I am really really enjoying this story.  You have done such a great job protraying characters too *love and kisses* :)  Happy Easter!

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

Oh you evil woman!!  You leave us wanting more all the time!!  I want to see the "date"!!  I know, I know, all good things, and all that.  I am glad Edward moved on too.  And while all the talking about how good Bella and Jacob are for each other, lets just let them BE together!! No more worrying about how it will affect everyone around them, just let them be selfish, for once.  (Well, lets let Jacob be selfish--Bella already has been).  I am enjoying this story so much.  I wish I could put the words down better, but if I could, then I would be a writer too!!

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

Great chapter.. much too short... I am totally loving this story... I felt bad for Sue..I guess she was a bit overwhelmed... I like Bella as a mom..update soon...

Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Sweet Surprise

Hopefully Bella can get mussed up later! LOL

Reviewer: SkittlesBlack (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Meeting

This was insanely adorable. I love Alice and love that she's back and the pack arent bashing her. Update soon. I love this story.

Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Meeting

i loved it update soon

Reviewer: everblue1037 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Meeting

love it can't wait for more

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Meeting

Loved it. I'm impressed at how easliy Alice is getting along with the pack and how accepting they are of her.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Meeting

i love it.

Reviewer: jul5857 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Meeting

Wow! I just read all 10 chapters and I'm addicted!

Please update soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Meeting

Love it!  I am so impressed by how mature Jacob and Bella are now.  Yes, they still have baggage, but they seem to be willing and able to work past it now.  Jacob trusting Alice is a really big deal, and it is a real leap of faith for him.  Bella does well to notice that.  I am a little suprised that the rest of the Pack is so accepting of Alice, but hey, like you said--it is your story!  I can't wait to see how Jacob and Bella's relationship unfolds and strengthens. Love it!!

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Meeting

Loved it... and I agree Alice and Jacob did end up closer then the rest of the Cullens so I don't see how its a stretch... Now lets get rid of the looming Volturi threat so that life can begin again for Jacob and Bellas.. Awesome chapter... update soon....

Reviewer: Yuri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Meeting

I just started reading your story today and it`s beautifull, I love it, and I would love to see that Cullens (at least the ones that are willing) become humans... Keep the chapters coming...

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