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Reviewer: CarliCriss1217 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 02:58 PM · On: A Farewell to Ninth Grade 2002-2003

Okay, I'm about to be extremly rude, but please note, I'm being driven by my passion for this story. I've been checking all the sites I know this thing is posted on for months, but there hasn't been a single update! Not one! And, I know, when writing a story some challenges show up--the agony of writer's block! But you're fans (ME) are relying on you to see this through! Trust me when I say, I'm not the kind of person who enjoys expressing their feelings. That's how much I love this story! I would embarrass myself and ignore all the voices in the back of my head telling me, "Be patient. People have lives, unlike you..."

 

...I think I made my point (or just really confused people). Anyway, just, please post the next chapter and put me out of my misery. THANKS!

Reviewer: Maria20116 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 01:31 AM · On: The First Time She Met Him

PLEASE continue writing this story. It is sooo funny! 

Reviewer: Maria20116 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 01:31 AM · On: The First Time She Met Him

PLEASE continue writing this story. It is sooo funny! 

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Outtake: An Unplanned Excursion into the Mind of Chief Swan

Your writing is so original. And I really like the Charlie Swan in this story.

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:35 AM · On: An Interlude: The Introduction of Swirl

I can't say this enough, your version of Edward is SO cute! I love!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:34 AM · On: The First Time He Kissed Her

Edward, Bella, and the bed. Ha ha!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:34 AM · On: The First Time He Kissed Her

Edward, Bella, and the bed. Ha ha!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:32 AM · On: Outtake: The Boy and His Business Card

You know, I read this whole story already from my Kindle, but I'm back here from my computer because I wanted to review. You have to know what an incredible writer you are.

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:32 AM · On: The First Time They Went On a Date

This kids are so cute, thank you for writing this.

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:31 AM · On: The First Time He Called Her His Best Friend

You're the best!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:30 AM · On: The First Time She Failed Him

Cutest story ever!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:30 AM · On: The First Time They Danced

Brilliant!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:30 AM · On: The First Time They Danced

Brilliant!

Reviewer: 13fatcats (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 10:29 AM · On: The First Time She Met Him

I love love love!

Reviewer: trecamp (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:38 PM · On: A Farewell to Ninth Grade 2002-2003

LOVE this story!  I've been reading fanfiction for over a year, but this is the first time I've ever left a review (and I read several a week.)  Please tell me you're going to continue this?!  I adore this Edward and Bella.  So sweet and funny.  I'll be so disappointed if this is over :(

Reviewer: Babe (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 07:06 PM · On: The First Time They Went On a Date

Well, clearly I am a huge dweeb because this fabulous fic has made me laugh more in 5 chapters than any other fic has made me laugh in entire stories.  Maybe all of them put together have not even quite made me giggle this much.  I LOVE this...though I have had it in a list of recs for what feels like forever and I am probably that very last person in the fandom to finally get around to reading it, I just had to let you know.

And the "Legolas and Frodo" image was a perfect example of something that is so bad that it is good, and goes back around to being bad so far that it is back to good again.  So, in short, it kicks much ass.

(And yeah, my husband writes comic books AND we have a giant professionally framed map of middle earth in our home.  So, clearly you are speaking my language.)

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:34 PM · On: The First Time He Kissed Her

Lotr was my passion before Twilight and this is just to cute

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 07:49 PM · On: The First Time She Said the A-word

OMFG..people have not really asked you what it rymes with...eh. 

oye...loves loves loves.

 

thank you for sharing your gift.:) 

-DMC

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 07:20 PM · On: The First Time She Told Him She Loved Him

well ok.. so i (would say. that six times over) i wanted this chapter to end... but eheheh....you ended on a HEA.  so yeah.

 

such hearteach.... that my was high schoolife, yeah know.. I am so happy i can start the next chappie...

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:01 PM · On: The First Time They Broke Up

no no no... please erase this chapter

 

ok. just kidding... on to the next,.... frowning face though...

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 05:11 PM · On: The First Time They Broke Up

I am crying.....sniff sniif..

as one who let my high school love go.... I am sooooooo ooooosoooo sooooosoooosooo  sad. I mean. so sad.

 

did i say so sad.and i have to see his happy life on fb, yes almost 20 yrs later.... I still love him.....  oh please .. i must read more....

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 04:05 PM · On: The First Time They Broke Up

OYE.. the title of the chapter and this.. :Aragorn had left Arwen over something as stupid as mortality. I couldn't help but think what Edward would do if we were in the same situation. I shook the thought away and tried to focus back on the movie, but in the back of my head the question remained – was Edward capable of leaving me.

 

I don't want to keep reading... .. but alas I must.  I read New Moon.... so I can perserver..sniff.. sniff... 

 

 

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:48 AM · On: The First Time She Noticed a Problem

bwhahahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.HAHAH..

 

HMM.. i wonder, which team you are on?  LMFAO --  I have (sarcastically) no idea who you are talking about.. hahahaha..

"I don't know if you've noticed, but ripped abs and big muscles don't impress me too much, nor does a guy who looks like his hair is a ridiculously cheap wig. Not to mention I hate that he walks around half-naked most of the time and has a habit of spouting out stupid lines like, 'The clouds I can handle, but I can't fight with an eclipse.' Who says stuff like that anyway?"

Must go back to reading.  - DMC

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Outtake: An Uncomfortable Conversation and the Assault of Mike Newton

Haha.. I love fanfiction..."I'm not a stalker. I mean, it's not like I sneak in her room to watch her sleep or anything."   haha.

 

I am so glad Charlie has his head on straight, and gave the olive branch to Edward.

Reviewer: Dazzle Me Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 05:31 AM · On: The First Time They Had "The Talk"

m --

 

How wonderful.. the awarkwardness ofany sex talks and then during teenage years, and your story describes it perfectly.

Our swirl Edward is such a romantic.. loves..

Congratulation on the award.. many great things to come i am sure.

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