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Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

I abso loved loved loved this fic. I couldn't stop reading and was upset that I to stop for sleep and work. The emotion and depth that you describe for the boys was beautiful and at time breathtaking.

tbh I was hoping that in the chap that J would let E take him. Kind of like the complete surrender. There is nothing wrong with the ending, I think I just wanted more.

I so enjoyed your writing style that I'm going off to find more of your works. I'm hopin you've posted more.

Thank you for sharing your brilliant fic

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and for your comments as you went through the story. It's been a very long time since I had a review from here, so it was fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was my first fic and it still holds a special place in my heart. I do have several other 1 shots for Twilight and I've written a few more stories in other fandoms. You can find them on Live Journal or AO3 (archiveofourown (dot) org), same username. Thank you again!!

xo

- Maggie

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Savage Blood's Obscenity

oh jasper, how wrong you are.

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: It Shall Be You

Holy crap the end of that chap was hard to read

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: Prince of the Apple Towns

I can't even tell you how much I'm enjoying this fic. oh and I LOVE the banner. those pics are perfect.

Reviewer: loving1 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Prologue

I just found this fic and after reading this 1st chap, I'm really annoyed with myself that it took me so long to find it.

Really liked this chap and now I'm excited for the rest.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

I loved your story it was awesome! Had a all nighter and day reading it. I can't believe it over.. it a awesome story and I felt like I was right there..

:) Leona. thank you..

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Savage Blood's Obscenity

That was to fucking sad............. awesine chapter. your story is been awesome so far.. heartwrenching but awesome.. :)Leona

Reviewer: HinderGoddess (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

Loved it so much.

Reviewer: Ahnjunae (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

thank you maggie for sharing such a wonderful story...perhaps we'll see more of them in the future, perhaps not...either way, i have thoroughly enjoyed your work and look forward to reading more of it!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

Oh Maggie, this has been such a wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us all. Ooooh such a big lemony love fest to end on, I think I'll need to lie down in a darkened room for a week to recover from that, *phew*

I've loved every last chapter and every moment of Edward and Jasper's journey, even the angsty bits, lol. I'm so glad that it worked out for them both and they will be together forever. Yes, I realise it's only a story and therefore not real, but hey, you know what I mean I get involved and lose myself, thats what reading is to me....what an amazing story will do for me and I lost myself in this. I will go back and read this again at some point in the future.

Thanks again for sharing Maggie and I'ill be looking out for your future work.

Jane x

Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

This has been a lovely story with poetry and prose presented in a calm, serene manner. There has been fun, horror, sadness and always love.

I look forward to renewing our association. Thank you for sharing your talent and time to write for us all.

Reviewer: MrsDuckyFuzzles (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

LOVED THIS STORY! LE SQUEE!

Reviewer: owenic (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

Great end to a great story!

Thank you so much for sharing these boys with us. You've truly done this story justice!

Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

wish there was more , hate to see it end !!!!!!!good luck and God bless !!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

I couldn't believe that not 2 minutes after I left my last review I went to my email and saw your reply sating you had just posted the last chapter. So glad I didn't have to wait.....sorry to see this story end, I loved it, and I don't usually read slash.....to be honest my daughter had to tell me what "slash" even meant. But wow, it was awesome. Thanks so much for all your hard work. I was a great "eye-opening" read.

Reviewer: readgreekeasy (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Permanent Tenderness

NO THE END!!! I loved this story it makes me so sad that its over ;(

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 23: The First Beheading of the Jasmine

Okay, I will patiently be waiting for the last chapter, just becuse I have read up till this point in the last day doesn't mean I can't wait patiently for the last chapter, I can do it.....yup, not a problem. this is me being patient. Okay, I now realize I suck at being patient.

Author's Response:
omg, the last chapter JUST posted. I swear! You have, like, awesome perfect timing!!!

Thank you for all your reviews! I loved watching your reactions as you went through the story! xo

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 06:37 PM · On: Prologue

Awesome

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 21: Turn to the Open Sea

Glad to see things starting to work out.....how about a few story rec's.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: A Heaven of Blackred Roses

What are you Jazz, aside from hot, sexy, brilliant........

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: Everything That Is

Poor Eddie

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: One Piece of Your Heart

Oh no, mommy and daddy are about to kick the bucket aren't they, and Eddie gets sick and Jasper's gonna change him?? I hope so.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Multiplying Universe

About frickin time Jazz, gesh

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 16: From the Rift

Pass the damn tissues already.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Savage Blood's Obscenity

Jazz, pull thy head out of thy ars and tell him the truth already...........

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