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Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Aces High

Thundercats!! I LOVE it!

Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Game On

ding ding!!

Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:38 AM · On: The Bet

LOVE the insults...*wipes tear from eye* reminds me of a time, long, long ago...

Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Dead Money

please finish this story........it sucks that people steal your lines but  people are assholes sometimes but it is your readers that have to suffer because we are the ones that miss out on your fucking awesome story and i  would love to be able to finish it i am dreaming of  shit that could happen and  cant sleep............please  finish  .................

Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Dead Money

I love this story it is fucking awesome I didnt reliaze it wasnt finished or i would not have started it............I sure as  fuck hope you finish it because this  could be one of  my all time favorites...........I love the bitch bella and bad boy cullen............

Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Gut Shot

Started reading this yesterday, and I gotta say:

You girls sure as fuck know what you're doing.. ;)

Love Em and Rose.

Worship Jasper and Alice.

And no one can haul me away from Edward and Bella, because there is no other way to put it: Fun- fucking- tastic personalities.

I could keep quoting all my favoriteparts (Epiphany, Captain Crunch hat, the honest to god music that sends chills down your spine), but I just need to move on to the next chapter, sending a little prayer to the big guy out there for not making me wait.. ;)

Reviewer: VvLadyDarkenvV (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Gut Shot

god i love this fic.

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Dead Money

wow, i just found this story and i love it.

cant wait to read more, please update soon

Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Dead Money

I am so glad you rock at telling this story because I have no idea what's coming next, but I can't wait!

How many days has it been so far? I don't think Edward is too mad at her because I am sure he is just frustrated like she is. I think someone's gotta slip up about the bet...then I think Bella should torture the living shit out of him for the remainder of days, and then it should be puppy dogs and motherfuckin kittens in the end when they can finally get it on and realize that they have never felt this way about anyone before and yada yada yada..hugs and kisses blah blah blah, because that's what every girl swoons over...right??

But I am so friggen excited to hear the next chapters, hopefully you get them up soon! 

Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Big Slick

......... so I couldn’t just jump the fuck out like a Masked Marauding Molester who gives women the best orgasms of their life and vanishes clean the fuck into the night.

Even though that would be awesome, because I would wear a fucking Zorro mask and have a little button-up flap over my cock for easy marauding

Fucking genius! Lovin Edwards random thoughts ;o) So happy something finally happened between them ...I was about to loose my shit ;o) Can't wait to see if on top of the clothes counts......Emmett's gonna be pissed!

Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Gut Shot

Ok so who are these people who are insulting and hounding you? This friggen story is funny and entertaining so don't listen to them.

Edward -Foul- Mouthed-But -Cooler-Than-the-Fucking-Fonze Cullen is making me piss myself! Love it!

You girls must be a blast to hang out with in real life ;o)

Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: jessarae (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Aces High

This is hillarious! I love foul mouthed Edward..he's a trip!

Reviewer: bellangel5 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Dead Money

Read the Smut Monday entry from this story and had to read more. Glad I did now too. Poor Bella's hand! Sounds like Biology and lunch are going to be chilly for a while.

Reviewer: Mercedes92 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:52 PM · On: The Bet

Oh my gosh I just found this story and am in LOVE with it pleas update soon!!!!! Much love to both the writers :)

Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Dead Money

I have just found this story and read it in one sitting. Love your characters. Poor Edward what will he do?

 

Update soon...

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Big Slick

I'm at the car dealership, having my car worked on...I need to go to the fucking bathroom and relieve some tension...holy shit!!!!!

Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:20 AM · On: The Bet

ok, now... waiting, ever so impatiently, for more!!!

I LOVE this story, it makes me laugh out loud-- really!!!

I really hope you haven't abandoned it.  Please update soon...

pretty please?

 

Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Gut Shot

this was a great chapter...at first I didn't like these 2 being so fucked up...but i like watching them soften....great writing!

Reviewer: Camba (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Dead Money

Shame you do not update.....

Reviewer: devina28 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Dead Money

AHH please update soon I can't wait anymore!!!!!!!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Dead Money

I would really like to know what is next.  When is the next chapter? 

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Dead Money

Omg, this story is great! It's the only oneI've read that I've *insisted* my husband read! Is anyone updating this? You can't leave it like this!!!!

Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Big Slick

I love the "I'm on a boat!" reference.  That little phrase gets me every time, lol.

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Aces High

Saturday morning Thundercats! Freaking awesome!! I LOVE it!

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Dead Money

Man I havew no idea I just wish he  would either end the bet or tell bella. something. Still it is a great story so far. So excited for more.

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