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Reviewer: addicted_2_twilight (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
Oooh great story!! I love Nessie and Jake!! Can't wait to read more (:
Author's Response: thanks so much! more to come, promise!
Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 3: Age
Poor Jake. This boy is perpetually clueless when it comes to women. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her
It looks like an interesting story so far.. how long are u planning on making it? One thing I DIDNT like however was the last few sentences of this chapter..."my only experience being Bella, all those years ago. And that wasn't even anything." He loved Bella and although it wasnt an imprint, if everyone was human and Edward didnt exist, they wouldve married and had a very happy life... all Im trying to say was that Bella/Jake WAS something, something BIG, before Jake's imprint, in which the romantic love was let go to leave room for the regular type of love...
Author's Response: I guess with that i was going more along the lines of relationship wise. Jakes never really been in a relationship. im not discrediting the fact that he loved bella. cause he totally did. but it is in NO way compared to the way he feels about Renesmee. If youre still team jacob, even after breaking dawn, I apologize! :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her
Good start!
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her
I love where this story is going. great writing.
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