Good. This chapter was longer. I knew that;s what emmets was gonna give him. lol. Awesome, but enough teasing! Lets get to the lemons already! Awesome  MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response:

haha! you're a horn dog just like me!

they're coming, I promise. eventually. still working on placement ;)

thanks again, for all your comments and help and feedback. you're great!

Jake did well.  That explanation went better than expected.  It's nice to see Ness able to take that an process it.  I get tired sometimes of reading all the drama that goes with Ness finding out about Jake and Bella. 

Yeah!

Author's Response:

That means a lot. I was nervous about what yall would think about her taking it pretty lightly. but, i mean, i think Ness would be very mature. i mean, her mother is Bella for crying out loud! Bella was always super mature. And Edward is, well, Edward. haha. anyway. thanks! that means a lot, seriously.

more to come soon!

thanks, as always, for the great reviews! you make my heart happy!

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!

it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

haha!

thanks! there coming ASAP!

Really great chapter...I know what you mean about feeling like you were living in Forks, I'm from PA and for the past couple weeks I've felt that way, its been rainy, cloudy, snowy, with only little snippets of sun...keep up the great writing, I look forward to another long chapter soon.

Author's Response:

yeah. VA weather is friggen ridiculous.

thanks for your review. i'm glad you're liking it. i'll try and get some longer ones soon.

Sooooooo cool and so addicting! You gotta continue with this and update it very soon! I love this fic! Y

Author's Response:

thank you thank you!

im glad you like it!

more chapters soon. just awaiting approval!

There is no such thing as fluff when I sometimes forget your are not SM. What you could do, is simply combine two chapters (Dived POV's with astericks, etc, etc)your writing si amazing, but your chapters are short. I have to purposely not look at the scrool bar so I don't know how much is left. You don't have to make them longer, but since only one will be put up at a time, you should attempt to lengthen by combining. (lengthening with fluff  wouldn't hurt either, though, as I said, I agree there is no such thing as "fluff")  You shouldn't of course over-fluff and the best way to say this is to put it this way--Write one chapter, but don't post it, write the "next" one and simply add it onto the end of the first chapter you wrote. Get it? This is just a suggestion, you should do whatever you, as the writer, feel is best. Of course I am an avid reader and reviewer. I am a big Jacob fan but I hate that people put him w/ bella who is Ed's soulmate. This is a freakin amazing Jacob flic that doesn't spit up Ed and Bell. I gotta love you for that. Props to you.

it is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

im so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well of course i love it. But next time combine two chapters into one so I will have a longer chapter to salivate over. Awesome awesome awesome. Keep going!

Author's Response:

i know i know. longer chapters longer chapters. i just feel like if i make things longer theres too much fluff.

you are a most loyal reader. i trust you with this question. is there such a thing as "fluff" in the world of Twilight? and can there be too much?

see, i could read all day about it. i wouldn't care if SM wrote about Bella brushing her teeth. i wouldn't care.

the other part is that i ususlly only get the chance to write late at night. i just get tired and end the chapter.

let me know what you think and i'll see what i can do. thanks!

p.s. i'm glad you still like it ;)!

love it so much!! i am always very excited to see what you write!! you have quite a gift and you are very amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response:

THANKS!

youre great. i've been on vacation for a few days, so im a bit behind.

but more chapters soon, i promise!

it is great!!!!!!!!!!

plz keep on writing

I loved JPOV!

You have me all nervous about how Ness is going to react to J/Bella's past! It keeps getting dodged!!! 

I love this story! :)

Author's Response:

yay! my cliff hanger is working! haha!

thanks so much. youre great!

This story is my obsession. Don't ever stop writing! Jacob has been my favourite throughout the series (*sigh* yes I know it wasn't Edward, but frankly I'd rather cuddle up with a wolf rather than cold marble... but that doesn't mean that Edward isn't on my list of wants ;)  )

But you do both Nessie and Jacob POV's so well. :) There aren't a lot of good Jacob fics out there, so I don't think I can stress how captivating and awesome this fic is.

~Dravenia~

 PS: Emmett is my hero

Author's Response:

gah! i love Emmett. breaking dawn was great, but it was better because of him!

Thank you so much. im so glad you like my story. im glad my jacob is cool by you. your review is so sweet, i think i may forgive you for being team Jacob.

i'll have to think about it!

LOVE IT TIME A MILLION. I am so excited to keep reading.. ahhh!! haha thank you so much for being so talented and amaing at writing. =] I feel like I am reading SM sometimes!! haha!! thank you so much

Author's Response:

I feel like I am reading SM sometimes!!

that is the best compliment i could get. i think you are delusional, because I am no Stephenie Meyer, but thanks none the less.

and THANK YOU for reviewing. im addicted to all things twilight, and that includes my reviews. haha!

keep reading. its gonna get A LOT better!