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Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
OK, so, tell me why did Ness have to tell Jacob about the dream, why didn't she just show him it? I mean, when is she going to wake up and realize that she cannot get out of this whole damn family traipsing in on her thoughts???? Why do ANY of them try to hide ANYTHING!?
Author's Response: when Renesmee was younger, her preffered way to communicate was with her power. I wanted my Renesmee to kinda have grown out of that. know what i mean. oh but trust and believe, she uses her powers. just you wait! :)
Reviewer: becca-bella-bee-thatsme (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
I adore this story! It is adorable, so cute! What a great peice!
Song that I think goes perfectly with this story;
You Found Me- The Fray
Keep it up<3
Author's Response: thanks!
i'll have to listen to it, see what i think!
keep reading, it gets better ;)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Oh Wow! Damn Aro and the rest of the Volturi! I'm surprised at how calm Jake remained, not really what I was expecting. Eh, lemons are nice, but I like the sexual tension the oranges are bringing to the story!
Author's Response: haha! i love the tension too. its just so "first relationship." you know what i mean? haha!
can i get a big DUN DUN DAH!!!! dreams are crazy!
thanks for reviewing! you're great!
Reviewer: forgetmenot (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
This makes me wander if lovely Nessie might have more er, powers then she thinks.. Not sure, but still.. Very nicely done!
Author's Response: hmmm...interesting theory!
keep reading and find out ;)
thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CauldronCakeBaker (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
I can’t tell you how much I look forward to getting those little update emails saying that there is a new “Gravity Moves” chapter. A little thrill goes through me when I see it. You are doing a fantastic job with this. I really love the way you write Jake. He is fun loving but not too childish. I really like that. And I like how he is trying to restrain himself when it comes to their intimate time together. I am eager for them to take the next step in their relationship, but I’m glad you are taking it slow with them. It feels right. Keep up the great job! I’ll keep my eyes open for the next update.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
i love when i get update emails. my day isnt comlete until i read a story on Twilighted.
im really glad you like my jacob. im team edward through and through, but i love jacob and renesmee together.
i've got a lot more in store for them. it's going to take me forever to finish this story! haha!
stick with me, things get really good, i think!
thanks again!
Reviewer: singersweet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
the story is great,truly a work of art.
Author's Response: oh my! thank you so much!
that ranks as one of my best reviews ever.
i hope you continue to read, and i hope the rest is as good as the first part. (i secretly think its better, but shhh!)
Reviewer: singersweet (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday
amazing.i am totaly hooked.
Author's Response: I got another one! yes!
haha! im glad you like it!
stick with it. more to come. A LOT MORE! :)
thanks!
Reviewer: Painfully_Addicted (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
Write more! I love this one!!
Author's Response: im so glad you like it.
more is on the way. holidays have ruined my twilighted time! haha!
stick with me!
Reviewer: maturetwilighter (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
that was nice. I like that Jasper came to check on her. very thoughtful and encouraging for her.
Author's Response: i think its nice to see Jasper in softer roles. You know he has it in him, he just doesn't show it.
keep on reading, I hope you like it!
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
write more, I'm loving it :)
Author's Response: more is written and posted. just waiting for these pesky holidays to be over so I can get them verrified!
thanks for reading, stick with me!
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
Just read all of this and it's pretty damn good so far! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: thanks!!!
im glad you like it. stick aroung. its going to get a lot better, and a lot more sour!
Reviewer: Nina Elizabeth Freeman (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
THEY NEED TO HAVE SEX. THIS IS GETTING CRAZY.
I AM LOSING MY MINDDDDD!!!!
She certainly gets her libido from her mum!!
:)
Author's Response: hahaha!
everyone keeps telling me that! i know, if i were her, i'd be shooting myself by now!
but hey, good things come to those who wait.
thanks, and stick with me!
Reviewer: Nina Elizabeth Freeman (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast
I saw it twice within one week =]
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Nina Elizabeth Freeman (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
I think you've done Emmett really well here!
He's hilarious in BD. :)
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast
Twilight's a great movie for fans! I don't think its anywhere near the quality of the book but then not everyone has the imagination to enjoy stories in books alone and I love to put faces to names especially when the cast looks unusually perfect as only the silver screen can do...
Your story is progressing nicely, I personally think Edward would have to deal if Jake proposed without asking him first, Edward forced the decision on Charlie too ;)
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2008 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
only thing I didn't like was 'Miss Sue' don't understand why Nellie would call her that instead of Sue or Mrs. Swan maybe or even Ms. Clearwater but still the story is great :)
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 11: Busted
I'm loving the story so much! Awesome job with the POV switches each chapter.
Reviewer: forgetmenot (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
Wow, you are a very talented writer! I just got into this whole world of FanFiction and I am loving every moment of it! I enjoy reading your story because to me it is more SM then some others. It has the sexualness but not all the swearing so its a classier to me. But I am dying for your next chapter! They way you interpet things is wonderful! Keep it going! So this is my first review, hope its okay! lol
Author's Response: for your first review, its great! any review is great! i love them!
im so glad you like my story. im trying to stay as close to the books as possible; with what they say, how they say it, what they do, everything! im glad you think it fits. classier is a great compliment!
stick with it, and keep reviewing! it gets better. I PROMISE!
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
awww cute!
Author's Response: awww thanks! haha!
keep on checking back!
Reviewer: Twilight_Luminescent (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
Update soon. Please!!!!!
Author's Response: chapter posted. just waiting approval. damn these holidays!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
Hurray! I finally caught up!!! Loved the longer chapter! Thank you!!!
I was pretty nervous that the whole Bella thing would end badly! I thought you handled it great- thanks for not breaking my heart! And I love the crazy sexual tension between Jake and Nessie! I can't wait for the next chapter as always.
(I'm so thankful the holidays are almost over. The whole month of December has cut in to my Twilight time!!!)
I hope you have a wonderful New Year!!!
Author's Response: i know right. not only has december not allowed me to post chapters, but its stopped me from reading too!
haha!
im glad you think the Bella situation went well. i thought people were going to be dissapointed by it. but ive got nothing but good reviews. and yours means a lot, friend. isn't the tension yummy. i live under a cloud cover of sexual tension, so i totally get where her and Bella was coming from!
more soon as possible!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Gioierilla
I totally did not see this coming! Holy! And it seems that Jake has dodged the Bella bullet again!
I love this story!!!!
Author's Response: im so glad you're still diggin it.
you've been with me for a while, which i thank you for, and you've always got something great to say!
many more, longer, better, more sour chapters in the New Year!
thanks again for stickin around!
Reviewer: delikizzz (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
I really like this story plz update asap :P
Im glad that renesmee was ok with Jacob and Bella's past relationship :D
as i said update soon!!!!!!!!! or i will send the vulturi on you (just kiddin :P)
Author's Response: i hope the wives don't come too, cause then they mean buisness. haha
im glad you like it. i'll get more up as soon as i can after the hollidays.
Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
I want MOOOOOOORE. :)
I'm really enjoying Jacob's sides of the story, and the play with having to keep it out of Edward's head. It's just so great to see Jake happy.
Author's Response: after he finally imprinted on Renesmee, I loved Jacob!
im glad you like it. more to come as soon as the hollidays are over!
thanks again!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2008 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
I don't even have anything to say or add that I haven't said before. I just lvoe getting these updates and then I get to sit and enjoy a good read for a bit. Huge smiles for that which is Jake and Nessie!
Author's Response: youre so great.
and i love your constant reviews. im so glad you like it, and it makes me smile that you actually look forward to getting my updates!
thanks for sticking with me!
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