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Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Nice chapter, looking forward to more sexy times and the big confrontation with the evil Volturi!
Author's Response: dun dun dah!
thanks you! im glad you like it.
keep reading, you like things, i [hope] promise!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 11: Busted
Rest & Relaxation? Lol. I think school is about to be over. One more chapter. I'll read the rest tomorrow. This is looking awesome. :)
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Author's Response: haha!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
oh snap.
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 6: Did I Miss the Memo or Something?
lol. I love this story. There isn't enough Renesmee/Jacob around. I'll have to keep an eye out for more.
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversatoins
*feeds addiction* I've been reading for like two minutes and I'm already on chapter 5. :) =]
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Oh pleaaase, update soon. I've been waiting forever to read new chapters (even if its just days between every update, its worst when you're actually waiting for it). I love that you thicken the plot so it wouldn't be just like the relationship with Jacob and Ness, but also with a new danger so things will get rather deep and very serious. You're doing great! Oh and please in next chapters try to add some love-scenes of Jake/Ness . Its been so long...hehe
Author's Response: i promise you. i update faster than my beta can blink! give her some time! haha
i'm super super glad you like the story. most Ness/Jacob stuff out there is just a lot of relatioship stuff, i know. so i wanted to do something different, something that i think could actually happen for them, you know! i really appreciate that you like it, i really do :)
oh, yes and love scenes. too many oranges, not enough lemons! yes i know. patience is a virtue, as i tell everyone. good things come to those who wait. [pun TOTALLY intended] just wait. remember. in story time, its only been a few days since they made things official!
thanks again!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either
I hope this is going to get longer. I'm flying through the chapters. :)
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Love that they are taking precautions. It worked well last time. I just wish Aero was so bored. :)
Author's Response: aint Aro just the peskiest damn vampire!
muahaha! keep reading friend, its gonna get a lot thicker in the Gravity Moves pot!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Age
Aww. :(
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Her
Uh oh. This is getting interesting. :)
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
That was short. I hope I get more next chapter! Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: thanks for all your reviews!
i'm glad you like it. i know they started out short, but they get longer. and much better i promise! stick with it!
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Good chapter. And wow a cullen tat. That's f*ckin' awesome! You should post a pic when it's healed!
Author's Response: dude. it hurt so ridiculously bad! i got it on my upper ribs. i have tattoos, and this one hurt the most. but its my favorite. :) i'll get a pick up as soon as i can.
its, about to get really good. i promise ;)
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
oooh i want the Cullen crest tattooed somewhere on me, but I can't figure out where. I also want to make changes to it because it's VERY similar to my family crest and I wanted to merge the two but I can't figure out how lol.
Anyways, great chapter, I'm excited to see how this all unfolds :)
Author's Response: oh my gosh, i got it done on my upper ribs, like right underneath my armpit. IT HURT SO BAD! i have three other tattoos. two in quite sensitive areas. but that hurt the worst!
tattoos are sort of a passion of mine. if youd like, email me a picture of your family crest and i'll see if i can help you kinda combind them.
anywho, thanks for you nice words! keep reading, its going to get really good.
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Loved it!! thanks for the update!!! :) I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: im super glad you liked it!
more ASAP i promise!
Reviewer: love-volvos (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
i absolutely love this story.
and the dream was really good :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!
i love the fact that Renesmee is a hybrid simply for the fact that she sleeps. that scene in BD where Bella pulls a baby Nessie's hand to her cheeck to watch her dreams was my inspiration. i thought that was so precious.
im glad you thought it was good. but (hint hint) remember, it cuts off. SO THERES MORE! :)
keep reading, and keep reviewing. [it makes me happy]
Reviewer: CrackedTemtation (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
ok, so i'm a newbie to the site and this is the first story i've seen that isn't all about Edward and Bella and their sex life. I LOVE this story because it has depth and i've already read through the whole thing twice. I'm completely hooked to this story and i can't wait for the next addition. :)
Author's Response: i love it when i draw newbies in![its my secret mission in life. ;)]
i will admit, i love the Bella and Edward sex stories. partly because im a horn dog, and partly because everyone secretly does.
but im super glad you like Gravity Moves. it took me a while to figure out this whole fanfic thing too. I'm pretty new at it myself, but i too wanted something more than lemon upon lemon of Bella and Edward doing it. i really hope you continue to stick with the story. i promise, its going to get really good ;) and please, keep reviewing. reviews like yours are really what keep me going. call me a glory hoard or what you will, but i wouldn't write if nobody liked it. its all of the reviewers with their kind words, their speculations, their helpful suggestions, and all their praise that keep me going!
thanks again, and stay tunned!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
I just started reading this story yesterday and it is awesome. I didn't think i'd be interested in reading about Renesmee and Jacob but this story really pulls me in.
Author's Response: GREAT!
im glad you like it. I was never a Jacob fan, I am Team Edward through and through. But Breaking Dawn brought me on to his side, for Nessie of course. I loved BD, and thought about what their life would be like. and tada...Gravity Moves.
Keep reading. it gets a lot better, I promise!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
hhmmm... the dream has me wondering....how is Aro going to play in to all this....also I hope Edward and the gang find out about this dream...
I love your story!!! :) Keep up the awesome work!!!
Author's Response: haha! yes!
confusion, thats what I was going for. :)
oh you must read on! read on muahaha!
Reviewer: tanana_with_me (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Awesome. Of course. And as always, MORE MORE MORE!!!lol Lemons will be great on day.
Author's Response: one day, yes. :) i'm such a tease, i know it!
you're great as always. just wait a bit and i'll get you your much longed for longer chapters!
Reviewer: IHeartJazz (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Just when it looked like it was wrapping up into a happy ending, in pops aro... you are awesome
Author's Response: them itialians are sneaky bastards, aint they!
haha! keep reading, it get better!
and keep reviewing, it keeps me motivated!
thanks!
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Another good chapter - but a bit short. It feels like it is on the edge and something is about to happen. Great job!
Author's Response: i know they're short, and im sorry.
the next few get a little longer. slowly but surely.
these last few i've written have been the longest yet so if you just hold out a few chapters!
thanks for the review. keep them coming!
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
i am obsessed with this story. I just read all of it today and I want MORE!
Author's Response: haha! im obsessed woth it too! haha
i'll get you more if you'll keep reviewing! :) let me know what you like, don't like, what you would've changed. it really helps i promise!
thanks for the review, keep them coming.
Reviewer: Twilight_Luminescent (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Hurry!!! Update. Need moooorrrreee. Love ya'! <3
Author's Response: i post them as fast as i can. when one gets validated, i put up another one.
i can only go as fast as my beta can get them up.
just stick around. its worth it, i promise!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
OK, so, tell me why did Ness have to tell Jacob about the dream, why didn't she just show him it? I mean, when is she going to wake up and realize that she cannot get out of this whole damn family traipsing in on her thoughts???? Why do ANY of them try to hide ANYTHING!?
Author's Response: when Renesmee was younger, her preffered way to communicate was with her power. I wanted my Renesmee to kinda have grown out of that. know what i mean. oh but trust and believe, she uses her powers. just you wait! :)
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