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Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
sigh, when Edward attacked Caius, I was like yelling in my head, "IT'S DADDY'S TURN TO GET A HIT IN!!!" Because, he hit Renesmee, and if you ask me, Jake should've torn something off of him, so should've Edward, I say, go for his mouth, it's always seemed so annoying to me.... LOL
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
Um, wow. I must admit I was NOT expecting that. So glad to see Caius put in his place for once. Good job with this chapter, Hannah!
I see you got your invite to be a part of the Jacob and Nessie Archives. They had asked me if I knew of any other stories that belonged in it, of course I suggested yours.
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Manda
Author's Response: i had a feeling you suggested me. thanks so much. you know how i love my Jake/Nessie fics, and now i only have to look in one place for them!
and im glad i could suprise you. this chapter was a lot of fun for me. coming to this conclusion was a lot of fun, and actually working it out how it did was the funnest thing ever!
more soon, my friend!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
Great chapter! Just a few misspellings. More soon? PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: Yuri (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
I love it...
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
Good Lord what did Edward hear in Caius thoughts that made him grab his throat? Jake is so funny, here he's surrounded by bad ass vamps and he's still a smart ass! God I love your Jake.
This was a fun chapter to read, Please update soon, let us know how Nessie is, what did Edward hear in Caius's head, what will happen to Caius? I'm thinking Aro will kill him?
I really love your story!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 44: Compulsion
oh i hope Nes is okay!
Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know more, please!!! please!! write more this is amazing... maybe you should write about how the cullens and jacob came to renesmee's side and how they lost there composure when they saw caius slap renesmee cold!? and jacob almost lost his rage and was about to kill caius but edward, jasper, and emmett is holding jacob back from exploting to his true form of a shape shifter?... just a thought, and maybe it should be from jacob's point of view since renesmee is out cold! =)
Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Glad to see you getting close to finishing this. Can't wait for the next part!
Reviewer: DelSig (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
I love this story. I think you have done a great job writing Nessie in this chapter and throughout the story. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
I love it! It was a wonderful chapter..But you should reread your work more often or get a new beta to reread it. There were alot of spelling errors and missing words in the sentences. Update soon :D
Reviewer: nicolleblack (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
i have been in love with this story from the beggining..please update soon!
Reviewer: pianoloverr7 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
oh.my.god. did they just kill nessie?! but she can be put back together again, right? right?! i truly love your story, and please please please keep wrinting!
Reviewer: Sitaray (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
omg....what a cliffy...you must update soon...and as much as I hate Aro...I'm glad he won the vote ;)
Reviewer: gypsymomma (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Ahhh you need to update soon! I just read the whole story in 2 days great writing! I need to know what happens!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
A cliffie! I hate those!LOL! But this was a fantastic chapter! Hurry so I can read about how Jacob saves the day!!! Go you! Great job!
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
thumbs up i just i wish you didn't end it there...
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
That is the most evil cliffhanger i think you have done all story!!!
As always, my dear, I loved this chapter. It was wonderfully done.
So, as a loyal reader and reviewer for Another Day Dawns I have to tell you about this. I am participating in the most recent Support Stacey Author Auction...I'm offering up a one shot (no less than 2500 words) that pertains to either ADD or my other current story. and the plus, you tell me what to write, so, if there is a part of ADD that you want written differently or another epilogue, or adifferent POV of a scene, Bid on me and I'll write it!!!! Auction runs Jan 15-18
I look forward to your next chapter!!!
Manda
Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Oh-no... what happened to Nessie?!? This story is amazing and I am excited to see what comes next! I too love A New School... guess great minds think alike! :) Anyway, this chapter was amazing... worried for Nessie... wonder about Jake and the Cullens... anxious for an update!
Reviewer: beadlelove (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Hi,
I just wanted to let you know that I am loving your story. It is great to see the volturi worked into the story in a different way (not the usual) it has left me pleasantly surprised at what happens as the story progress's.
keep up the great work!
Kind Regards, L.
Author's Response: thanks so much. i am very much intrigued by the Volturi, and just kinda wanted them to have a little more to do with everything.
im so pleased you like it. more's coming soon. i hope you stick with it!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Are you kidding me!!! That Cliffy is so mean!!!!!!! You are as evil as Aro LOL
This chapter was great, I almost passed out I was holding my breath while I read it, the suspense was....wow!
Please up-date soon!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i am SO glad you liked it.
that is an amazing compliment, i really mean it. thank you.
soon, my friend!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
hmmmm i wonder what will happen next!
Author's Response: you shall see soon!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Awesome chapter....full of twists and turns and quite an exciting ride. Thank God the calvary has arrived...so...what's Jake gonna do to Caius now? Can't wait to see!
Author's Response: more twists await my friend!
oh, the Cullen Calvary. is there any better? haha.
more soon!
Reviewer: jacole1987 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Lovely chapter, keep up the good work and update soon!!! And I don't own an Edward of my own either, although I'd like my own Jacob lol.
Reviewer: Girl_With_Curls001 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Wow this is reallly good! Write more soon|!
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 43: Hell Might Actually Have Frozen Over
Great action sequence!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
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