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Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
best chapter yet. I almost cried. I could read this all night!! SM would be so proud!
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Gioierilla
suspenseful and very well written in my opinion. I love it and I too, pictured the story somewhere around here. Great job
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: WOW
I love where I think this is going. You've really developed a great story. I'm not sure if I'm supposed to comment on every chapter but I'm still reading so that means something right?
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 19: Cryptic Messages
I think this story is my favorite Post BD. I got goosebumps reading this section and can't wait to find out what happens next!
10. for sure
Author's Response: youre great :)
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday
love it great chapter!
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast
YAH! Great chapter. I love the direction of the story.
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
i think you did well with emmett. i still feel its weird to even mention sex in front of edward, but i get it is too hard to keep secrets from him anyway. But I really like it.
Author's Response: i absoltely LOVE Emmett.
he is friggen hillarious. one of my favorite line in the whole series is from him. "It's about time somebody scored around here!"
love him!
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 11: Busted
great chapter. I wish Bella would of said more about decisions and maybe promoting marriage first..like edward did. but that's my story right? this was good!!
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
Goose bumps. Great story. I love it.
Author's Response: thanks!
hope ou stick with it!
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
great chapter. I love how you incorporate more of the main characters than just Nessie and Jake. Great Jasper chapter.
Reviewer: Jejomiky (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 6: Did I Miss the Memo or Something?
My favorite chapter so far. I'm a tough cookie to sell a story too, but you have me hooked...can't wait to keep reading
Author's Response: thanks!
im glad you like it. its great to hear i got someone whos hard hooked!
keep reading. its going to get really good!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 20: WOW
I'm feelin it. :) I can't wait for the presents.
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 19: Cryptic Messages
Lovin it, dearie. Gotta go to my class now. *tear*
Author's Response: yeah, class sucks!
but you can read more when you get back!
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
This is a great story. I didn't think i'd be interested in a story about Renesmee and Jacob but I really like it.
Author's Response: there arent too many out there, and there arent too many where Renesmee isnt portrayed as a brat!
im glad you like it and hope you'll stick with me!
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Wow, a Twilight fan to the xtreme! Thanks for the chapters they've all been great so far I'm still eagerly awaiting the next installment. When the Volturi come back I need there to be a good long mind readers and threats and intrigue section in there but I don't believe that Aro would want it to come down to a fight, he'd risk losing to much... Just my thoughts looking forward to what you have planned :)
Author's Response: muahahaha! oh the Volturi! Everyone is waiting for it, and everyone will be shocked. [i hope. if im good at this they will be!]
i am a fan to the extreme. im a fan on the brink of completely consumed by twilight. its ridiculous.
thanks! stay tuned
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Family Histories
tell me tell me tell me!
Author's Response: haha! im so glad you like it!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teaser
yaaaaaaay!
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
:) this is awesome. I love this story.
Reviewer: Twilighted Lady (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
I'm enjoying this alot, don't worry about the lenght of your chapters, as long as the material is good, they will be great...waiting for more!!!!
Author's Response: thanks. i'd really like them to be longer. cause i myself hate when i read good stories and the chapters are short.
oh well. eventually. stick around!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
Eih...not my favorite chapter. I guess I am not into the pack mentality, I just want to read about Jake and Renessme together and all happy.
Author's Response: understandable. wasnt my favorite chapter to write. isnt one of my favorite chapters to go back and read either. just thought i had to put it in there, you know. cause "I'm nothing if not thorough." [i love Edward<3]
upcoming chapters are better. i think personally.
quick thought though. what has been your favorite chapter so far? just curious. my favorite chapter to write was chapter six. so far. hehe
Reviewer: Narimna (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
I SO want to read more. Please hurry
Author's Response: im glad you like it!
stick with it. it gets really good. i [hope] promise!
Reviewer: Narimna (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
I don't want to take the time to review, I love it so much I just want to keep reading. Thank you
Author's Response: youre too funny.
i'm glad you did though. you feed my addiction. you enabler, you!
thanks again!
Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
I'm so glad that you told us about your tattoo...I used it as proof to my husband that i'm not completely crazy. I just read the fan fic, I don't write it and I don't have a cullen crest tattoo. (but, I do think it is totally cool!)
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: oh friend. but i think i may be crazy! haha! i'll get a picture up as soon as i can to show you guys! [take that maddaq'a husband!]
i'm si glad you like my story! stick with it, its gonna get good!
Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
i think it is a really good story! Please update soon!
Author's Response: thanks so much.
i'll update ASAP. PROMISE!
Reviewer: CrackedTemtation (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
ok, so i know i just submitted on last night, but you've done it again!!! I LOVE this story and the sub-plot you've created. you've truely inspired me so much, i think i may write my own fanfic. do you post a new chapter every day? cause if you did, it would make mine every day!!!
Author's Response: oh, youre great!
i post a new chapter as soon as my previous one gets posted. usually. like now, i've got a lot of reviews to respond to [because i make a habit to respond to every one i get. you guys take the time to read and feed my addiction, the least i can do is thank you!] so it may take a day or so to get another one up.
i started Gravity Moves because when i origionally joined Twilighted, i read a story and was totally inspired. i say go for it! its so much fun!
thanks again for your nice words. you've made my heart happy!
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