I LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP ON WRITTING! I SKIP MY HOMEWORK JUST TO READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORK. KEEP UP THE AWESOME JOB!

Author's Response:

oh hush. youre too nice.

i'll keep it coming, promise!

thanks so much!

I liked it. I had to double back and read the last chapter again.

 I know this story is about Ness and Jake but I love when Edward and Bella are around =) 

I like the relationship you're building with them, and I think I see a confrontation on the front and I'm really curious to see how your's will be different than the ever anticipated fight with the Volturi in BD. I'd love to see Aro, Marcus and Caius =dead. I dont' think I could deal with a member of the Cullens dieing.....good writing...i can wait to read the next chapter....

Author's Response:

like i told someone else something very unexpected happens to some one you wouldn't expect. maybe.

thats all im saying!

fine then, we all have to keep those creative juices flowing, great chapter :)

Author's Response:

haha :) thanks!

Yay for the flow of creative juices!!!!!

Author's Response:

are creative juices great! apple used to be my favorite, but now its creative!

Cool chapter... the only thing I didnt love about it was the way Jake ishaving trouble knowing if Nessie likes him in that way... I'm only saying this from my point of view(seriously I could be COMPLETLY wrong) but i allways thought that when someone imprinted, they were 100% devoted to that persons every need, and it was like they were joint at the hip, that way the one doing the impriiting would allways know what the other one needed and wanted. WOW, sorry that probably made no sense. Haha, I'm bad at typing up ideas, I get my point across better when I'm talking to someon in person. ANYWAYS, dont wanna waste anymore of your time than I allready have! Thanks for writing! K's g

I love it!! keep up the amazingly awsome work

Author's Response:

thank you thank you!

stick with it, its about to get a lot more fun!

I really cannot wait to see what is going to happen with Aro!

Nessie is adorable in this, and I enjoyed the talk between Esme and all the girls - no one ever writes maternal Esme as having a sexual side and that was fun to read

Author's Response:

i love Esme. she is amazing!

muahaha! the dreams! gotta love the Volturi!

more ASAP!

Damn this stuff is amazing, i swear as soon as i finish reading a new chapter of yours i go straight to my story and write at least 2 pages. As always, you've done it again a perfect 10. can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

your too good! a ten, pshh. you hush.

im glad my story gets you to write. im excited to see what you've got!

the writing is so addictive though. its amazing though!

more as soon as i can!

I just read all 25 chapters of Gravity Moves and love it!!!  So similar to SM!   I am a 30 year old male Twilighter living in Hollywood (I'm a film/tv editor) and I've become obsessed with the Cullens.   SM got me back into reading, I loved the movie but felt the second half of the story was so choppy and condensed that it made me get the book. I read the book in one long stretch and realized (sadly) the filmmakers had cut out so much from the second half of the book--so much great character development for Jasper and Alice gone!

The thing about the 4 novels is that the characters are so very captivating.   I loved Breaking Dawn, but was sad to see SM stop the story where she did.  I am just as happy to continue your versions story and call it canon...the characters are just as well written, great job.  

Hopes:   I do want a battle (though I would have a tough time losing any major character, I do wish most of the Volturi destroyed) and most of all I want Nessie to learn to control her power like her mother, and be able to influence people at will. Breaking Dawn to me is only the beginning of a much larger story, one the SM does not see to want to write...maybe someone ;) will take her place.   Good luck!! 

I love the way you write Nessie (seems so much a mixture of Edward and Bella)  I also love the fact that she is not swooning/ love-stuck every moment over Jacob, which to me is the one flaw in SM's "Bella" (Maybe this problem is my male's perspective taking over)

Author's Response:

oh my gosh. you are absolutely wonderful!

im really glad you like my story! haha! ive tried to keep everyone pretty similar to cannon, in character as much as possible. i loved Breaking Dawn, but wish she would have done an epilogue with Jake and Ness, sort of a la Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (which I about to finish and it is AMAZING!) so that is where Gravity Moves comes from! I loved the entire series, loved how we only get little tidbits of a lot of the characters, but still feel like i know them. i just think the entire series is amazing, and wish there was more. but, since there wasnt, i created my own.

the movie, im not going to lie. i loved it. ive seen it like five or six times, and cannot wait for the dvd. im ridiculously obsessed. i did think there was too much omission, some big scences i think were missing, and some big ones were not done very well. and Jasper's power isnt mentioned at all! but oh well. what can you expect from Hollywood, you know! I am quite looking forward to New Moon though. a little apprehensive, but im sure it will be good.

as for you hopes. im not going to give anything away. :) the only thing i will say is something very unexpected, to someone very unexpected, happens. that is all you're getting out of me!

when creating my version of Renesmee, i wanted her to be a combination of bother Bella and Edward. myself personally, i am very much both of my parents, so i found it very easy to incorporate both of them in to her personallity. i wanted to almost mirror her relationship with jake after theirs as well, because she is so much like her mother, and Edward is her father! :) a lot of fics with Renesmee that i read just have her as this big brat. all through BD, i never imagined her as being a brat; rotten to the core yes, but never a brat.

don't misunderstand, Renesmee is completely head over heels, idiculously in love with Jacob, and he with her. They just have Edward around watching their every move. and i am going to have to agree with you. i do believe it is the male's perspective that is keeping you from embracing Bella in the series. i think most females totally understand why she is all over him! i do at least!

thanks for you very very nice words. i hope you continue to read and like Gravity Moves. i look forward to hearing what you think about upcoming chapters!

I feel so bad about not reviewing for a couple of chapters, I've been reading updates at work and it gets hard to write reviews in between customers, haha.  I am loving the story more and more.  This chapter was just amazing.  I'm glad the tattoo feels better, I love the Cullen crest (i have Esme's bracelet which I wear occasionally, and the keychain so i can have it with me all the time).  Yeah I've heard the upper ribs hurt like a mo-fo, I'm too chicken to find out for myself though, I've been really lucky with my tattoos so far, they have all healed quickly and with no pain!  Hopefully you can get another chapter up soon!

Manda

Author's Response:

just that you review at all makes my heart happy! don't do it if its gonna get you in trouble at work though!

and the tatttoo is great. i'll get a picture up probably with the next chapter. maybe.

im glad you like the chapter. thing are about to get real juicy, so stick with me!

thanks again!

ok, i now understand what you mean. You truely inspired me so I wrote a story about seth imprinting and it said it had to validate it. but you must know the only reason i was going nuts is cause i'm so hooked by your story. lol. thank you so much for you inspiration and I can't wait until the next chapter comes through.

Author's Response:

youre too great.

its a long process, but its worth it in the end.

that is one of the best compliments ive gotten yet. i don't think ive ever inspired anyone before. haha.

definitely let me know when youre story is posted so i can take a look at it. and be careful, the writting gets addictive, just like the reading!

I love protective Jake!!! Great chapter!!! It is really creepy how the present just appeared!

Please update soon! And a teaser would be nice over at the thread! :)

Also, I want a tattoo so bad! I think I want a totem pole (Pacific Northwest!) down my side and a cullen crest inspired one... Two lions facing eachother with a shamrock in the middle! :) Probably on my lower back to the side! :) I need to lose weight first! :)

Author's Response:

oh hush! you can get whatever you want. im not the skinniest thing in the world and i got what i did cause i wanted it. you know what i say...screw the haters.

anywho. i update faster than my beta can validate. so you have to be patient with me.

i'll try to get something up on the thread ASAP!

youre great, as always! thanks!

Awesome of course. Can't wait to see where the Volturi lead takes us.

Author's Response:

they're sneaky little bastards arent they!