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Reviewer: love-volvos (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
I LOVED IT!
i loved it.. so much. like laot. GAH!
its so great, im so happy. :)
updates are grreat
im loving it so muhc.
sorry, i keep saying that. but omg! :)
Author's Response: oh no, keep saying it. it makes me smile!
im glad you're loving it. how mickey d's of you. badabupbabah!
i hope you continue to like it :)
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
LOVED IT SO SO SO SO MUCH!!! ahhh i thought he was gunna cave into having sex with her! haha great chapter!!
Author's Response: thats the only way it could have gotten better, i know. not yet though!
but hey, stay tuned [hint hint]
Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
Awww! I'm about to gag on the extreme cuteness...but in a good way! Hahaha! But seriously, I love it!
Author's Response: aw, im glad! it was a little mushy, but thats the way it came out!
im glad you liked it, and that i didnt send you in to diabetic shock!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
There's an Alice squealing with glee right now at the thought of a new wedding to plan haha. I really liked this chapter! Great job!!!
Author's Response: haha! you are absolutely correct!
im so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: ddldee (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
OMG.... I would have been dead if my dad had been able to hear my husband's thougts while we were dating. I give "your" Edward credit for not KILLING Jake! Hannah.....keep up the great work and keep the joy flowing through Jake and Nessie!
Author's Response: i know right. that would suck, my dad would not be a happy camper.
im glad you like it. now i cant promise anything [hint hint] about the "flow" [hint hint] of anything. :)
but it is gonna pick up and get eventful!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
OK, so I thought my favorite line was going to be "the all Powerful Daddy Vamp", because suddenly, all I could see in my head was Jafar from Disney's Aladdin asking to be "An All-Powerful Genie"... I was cracking up!!
Then, you smack me with the line "A thousand times, yes" and I fall Romeo and Juliet in love with them all over again!!
~Well Done~
Author's Response: oh youre great! i fall Romeo and Juliet over and over again with every chapter!
you know Jacob, he says the darndest things! :)
i love that you're sticking with me so long!
stay tunned, the chapters are gonna get longer and more eventful :)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
So amazing...that is probably one of the best proposals ever! You truely have a very creative mind and I love it! Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: honestly, it kinda wrote itself. it just happened before i knew it!
im glad youre digging it though. the chapters are about to get longer and more eventful!
so stay tuned!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
Squeal! Edward is gonna kill him didn't he onlt ask for a heads up and its not like Alice can see this LOL!!! Can't wait for the next chapter fun times!!
Author's Response: haha! exactly! but it think you may be surprised.
I just love making Jake squirm!
glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
That was wonderful! I love the dialogue in this one! Edward's first line had me in stitches.
Author's Response: you know Edward! :)
glad you liked it!
Reviewer: dane_e04 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
nice going with the proposal scene, now for the telling of Edward ;) serves him right to get told like Charlie...
Author's Response: haha! im glad you enjoyed it.
but you be nice to Edward! i think you may be surprised!
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
That was wonderfully written!!!!! Don't take so long to give us our fill for the next chapter!! Love the story!! :o}
Author's Response: i promise i dont try to keep you waiting. my beta says their queue is just so long now!
im glad you like it tough!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
AWWWEE...So cute! I really don't have anything else to say, insane fluffyness resumes the whole chapter! please update ASAP! pretty please!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
AWWWEE...So cute! I really don't have anything else to say, insane fluffyness resumes the whole chapter! please update ASAP! pretty please!
Author's Response: haha. gotta love the fluffiness!
Reviewer: Suzybear (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
This is my first post, and this is my absolute favorite fan fiction so far! I am addicted to Jacob & Renesmee. Keep the excellent work coming!
Author's Response: thank you thank you!
although im very glad you like mine, don't neglect the other greatness on this sight.
if you love the Jake and Renesmee, i recomend A Week in Purgatory by KowBonez. [if you don't mind a little something something if ya know what im saying.] its great! Misadventures by SpiderMonkey is good too, if you want something funny.
but i do hope you stick with Gravity. It's far from over, and will get a lot better in the coming chapters! stay tuned!
thanks again, and keep the reviews coming!
Reviewer: tanana_with_me (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
Well Hannah, sorry for taking so long to check back in, but, what is the porblem you speak of? I would be glad to help in any way I can. Hope you respond soon, and post more soon :),
-Jake
Author's Response: unless you have a cure for OTD: Obsessive Twilight Disorder, then i dont think you can help. and if you do, i dont want it anyway!
Reviewer: luvcullenboys (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Talk About Awkward Situations!
LOL "I- I don't need to know what my daughter was all for." - Edward - That is SO Edward!
Reviewer: luvcullenboys (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
How in the HECK would Jacob be able to stay with Nessie all night with Edward in the house??? Where's Daddy Edward??? I like the story so far though...
Author's Response: Edward and Bella stay at the main house when Jake sleeps over. cause youre right,Edward does not need or want to hear anything!
Reviewer: pinksoccersox (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
yay! yay! yay! I completely forgot to keep up while I was home for break. I'm sooo glad I remembered to check for updates! Can't wait for more chapters!
Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: WOW
YIKES! You messed up the time in the beginning of the chapter! It was supposed to be SIX 55, not SEVEN 55. Also, grammar on some chapters needs improving, you wrote 'no' instead of 'know' one time. Do you have a beta reader?
All in all your story is AMAZING, just work on grammar!
Reviewer: MeggieBeth (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
wow, I just started this story today and I love it! Also, I'm 21 and Twilight has completely taken over my life... BUT I have a phobia of needles so no tattoo for me... I will have to stick for rereading the books millions of times, watching the movie over and over again and looking for good stuff on Twilight.net... your story is by far one of my favorites! Thanks and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: im glad you like it!
im glad it makes your list of favorites. and you know, the best was to get over a phobia is to face it ;)
keep reading. it's gonna get better!
Reviewer: JillyReb (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
Great!
Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
Omg!
Post the next two chapters....
Author's Response: i post as fast as i can!
im hoping that means you like it!
Reviewer: gofergirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
I just found this yesterday and I love it. I think your style really works with the books. I love your Jacob and Nessie as much as I do Stephenie's Edward and Bella. Keep writing please!
Author's Response: oh thanks!
im glad you like it.
Gravity Moves is far far far from over, so you have a lot more to look forward to. dont you worry!
thanks again!
Reviewer: tanana_with_me (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
Well, if it's for more frequent posts...Lol good as usual love Bella in this chapter. You sooo remind of SM sometimes. Seriously Bella's quirky sense of humor. Awesome!
Author's Response: haha, i have to try. i post chapters as soon as one gets validated. my beta just cant get them up fast enough. it frustrates me as much as it does yall, i promise.
youre too great. that is the best thing i could ever hear, remindind you of SM. it means so much, you don't even know.
i guess im just that obsessed with it. its sad actually. but i dont care.
My name is Hannah, and I have a problem.
Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Wow, nothing like Aro scaring the crap of Nessie. Can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Author's Response: yes yes friend!
read on, read on. it only gets better!
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