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Reviewer: wishiwasacullen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I have to tell you, that waiting for the next chapter is the hardest part!! I just found your story yesterday and could not stop reading it.....it is WONDERFUL!!! You are fabulous and your writing of Nessie and Jacob is exactly what I was hoping for. You are amazing! Thank you so much for a wonderful story......I am totally captivated and longing for more!!!!

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Damn and I was hoping after 33 chaps if would have come to a close. lol. I hate waiting, lol. Damn good sorry though. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: dashamedeiros84 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

please add more to this story soon i loved it so far

Reviewer: dashamedeiros84 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

please add more to this story soon i loved it so far

Reviewer: CrackedTemtation (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

FABULOUS!

this is like the best story on this site.. suspenseful and secductive, i love it!

<3 E

Reviewer: NickyReilly (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

i love this story

im addicted to it lyke its a drug!

i cant wait for the next chapter, the way you portray Nessie and Jacob is amazing their connection is just drawing and i love it!

this is a great story i cant wait hurry and update please

Reviewer: Smile-J (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

The name of this chapter, waiting is the hardest part, is how I'm feeling about the rest of your story, I hate waiting, I want the rest of the story now! I have done nothing but read all this today - you have a lot to answer for!!

Loving the story! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams

Enjoying this very much! Your efforts are much appreciated!

Reviewer: whoaacxh37 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

awesome chapter, once again. i'm liking the subtle lemons.

can't wait to see what happens with the volturi!

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Wow. The next chapter is going to be awesome. I can't wait. Oh, and the part when Bella woke up Ness and Jacob was freaking hilarious.

Reviewer: SparkysFigment (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Love your story - but need to make a correction, in the following line from your story. "I know. Jacob does a better job of it than you do. And Jacob, the capital if New Mexico is Albuquerque, not Santa Fe,” he said knowingly. Jake blushed and touched his head with his index finger as if to mentally note the correction."

I am from New Mexico and Santa Fe is the Capital of New Mexico not Albuquerque. Albuquerque is the largest city however

Author's Response:
you know. i always freaking did that.

i always thought it was the other way around. and so does everyone else! so thats why i put it in there like that.

thanks so much! ill get in there and change that. i feel like an idiot now :)

Reviewer: apple (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 30: Interrogations

have been reading this for hours

i love it :)

Reviewer: Nicnax (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Great chapter, I'm still loving it and I want MORE!!!!!!!! This could be the 5th book in the Twilight series. Glad you're better, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

ome! cliffhanger much?!

Reviewer: ritz (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

theres another awesome chapter!!...i enjoyed myself readng it...i like how everything seems to slow down and then suddenly speeds up in your story..it adds this new thrill!...i like the part where edward had a chat with his daughter and put her to sleep..i guess thats somthing we missed in breaking dawn...ohh...how long dowe have to wait this time??...and yeah i am really happy you are well now..take care!

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I am so glad that you are feeling better! Updates are always nice!

VERY awesome chapter! I love how long your chapters are getting, too!

I hate cliffhangers, OMG! I can't wait to read what's going to happen next!

PLEASE update soon! Please please please! :D

Reviewer: nodoubt95123 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I am sitting here drunk on a friday night with a broken tv and only one update to my favs...I thank you for it :) I am still lonely...any chance for another tonight:) LOL J/K This was, as usual, WONDERFUL....I am just dying to know what is going to happen between Ness and the Volturi. I can't wait for the next update....I will be keeping my eyes peeled.

BTW...I am very happy that you are feeling better:) Stay away from those icky bugs for a while huh:)

Reviewer: imnotuniqueimmonique (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I love your story, but I feel like you need to proof read more. Just read it over, or have someone else do it. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Another great chapter. I especially enjoyed the bedtime moments between Nessie and Edward, so sweet! The rest of the chapter just had me laughing! Thanks again. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I'm sorry you were sick, and happy to hear you're well now. Not beause your able to write, but because I know what it's like. But it only seems to have had a positive effect on you. Oh...my...what a great chapter. a little of every emotion was trown in there. My favorite part is edward and renesmee in nessie's room. I can honestly say, you keep doing a better job as you write more chapters, thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: missycullen2010 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

OMG this is such torture waiting for a new chapter... I cant wait for the next one.... is is going to be as long as this one... I hope it is... It was awesome...

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

I'M SORRY, really and truley sorry. It should be no more than another week (i hope). I've added a co-author and she is helping write a nice long juicy lemon for the next chapter! Real life is just getting in my way! Plus, i don't believe I got a review from you for chapter 10....

AJ is killing me too. I WANT MORE EMMA. If she does read this and review, you can definitely tell her the waiting is killing both of us.

It is funny that we have mostly the same fav authors. Spider is another that needs to update!!!!

Please don't hold your story ransom...I don't want your other readers pissed at me, haha!

I loved this Chapter hun. It was wonderful like always. I like how Edward handled the discussion with Ness and Jake (reminded me alot of my Edward, not over reacting too much!) I hate the Volturi, especially Caius.

Glad you are feeling better. I look forward to your update, whenever it gets up!

Manda

Reviewer: Jaz (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

Get UPDATES SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOON please.

This is absolute torture not knowing what is going on with the Volturi and might I add a bit of advice: Tell us what the Volturi want and pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssse give Ness and Jacob a child you can say thats partly the reason why she has been so moody! ;)

Reviewer: minnesodagirl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part

this is great, really, if i could spell, i would write more words of phrase

and i love the tension, sexual, vouturi, etc, it's great

though i find it hard that your edward is so understanding, he doesnt seem to quite fit with the books, more protective maybe? and what happened to em, and his jokes? really he's needed for the jokes

write more, SOON, and my soon,i mean now, no thats not a joke

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 32: Promises

Fantastically, well written, tasteful job! Good work!! I love it! Much like SM's work, I couldn't stop once I started...really irritated my husband, but oh, well! :) Feel better soon!

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