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Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
So good. I love the stuff about Leah... she's a fav!
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: laurenaked (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
GREAT chapter :) lots of information. Excited to see what happens!
-Lauren
Reviewer: imnotuniqueimmonique (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
I love your story I think it's really well written but I want my lemony goodness! Maybe just a little lemon...pretty please?
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
Oh wow! OMG! OK, now I'm shaking in nervous anticipation to what's going to happen next. PLEASE, don't keep me, or anyone else for that matter, waiting! PLEASE! *knealing on the floor in front of you with hands clenched together in the air, begging*
I loved how you've put this chapter in Jacobs POV, everything he says and thinks is so Jacob and written so well, it's all very much believable. The conversations that he has with his pack members, espescially Seth and Leah, are so heartfelt and perfect! I love your writing! This chapter is the perfect length, I couldn't imagine it any shorter! I'm so glad that you decided to add more to it, to complete it! Thank you! :D
Update Update UPDATE!!!! PPLLEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEE!!!!! :D (thank you!)
Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
I absolutely love this story!! It's incredibly creative and original. And great job on keeping everyone pretty true to character. UPDATE SOON!! :)
Reviewer: ritz (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
great one!!!....yeah..jake's pov was pretty interesting...i like your style of writing! epecially the way you leave so much suspense at the end..everytime!!!...its evil!!...but aneways like i said its good and i am thoroghly enjoying the story..aww..i feel bad for leah...
Reviewer: bamc (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
I can't wiat until the next chapter!!! I am new to this site....your story is the first I've read- and I LOVE it! You are a great writer!
Reviewer: andrea13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
another awesome chapter!!! can't wait to see what happens with evil vamps.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
Brilliant story. I have loved reading it and can't wait for more. I think that you write Jake and Renesmee perfetly. Great work!
Reviewer: lala1271 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
i just started reading this i have gotten addicted. this is very good! thank you!
Reviewer: rachel_cullen21 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 30: Interrogations
hahaha good choice of last name[: if BIMO is samoan, its a good samoan last name. though the long first name wasnt as much-- bimo works tho[:
Author's Response: i remember Jacob telling Bella that Rebecca ran off with a Samoan surfer in Twilight.
i have two friends who are Samoan. one's last name is Tuulapuua and the other's in Miavia. so i just blended the two. and one of them has a brother who has like a million first names. so, i figured it's a Samoan thing. idk! Bimo is Samoan, according to my friend's parents. it's her brother's name. i'll have to ask her what it means again.
Reviewer: rachel_cullen21 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 29: Hawaii
ohhhhh my g0d, i l0ve you if not for all the previous amazing chapters, for inserting "samoan" [: lol im samoan so L0VED that little detail lol. is rebecca's husband samoan?! hahaha keep writing!!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
Hehe, it would just be so funny if Edward was in hearing distance right now...
Reviewer: samantha0078 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
im absolutly in love with this story i cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
another great chapter from you! i cant wait until the next chapter!! =]
Reviewer: andreavera (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
You know you are brilliant. Right?
I'm enjoying every word of every chapter and can't wait for more!!!
And you left us with such a great cliffhanger!!! Update soon!! PLEASE!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightluver02 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
omg wats gonna happen next?!?!?!?! review fast!!!!! really good cliffhanger i might add!!!
Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
That is so funny how renesmee and jacob got caught naked on the bed!!! lol. Im glad you feel better!!!! woohoo!! Keep writting an amazing story!!
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
Your writing is so beautiful. I was completely engulfed in your works for the past few hours. The way you write and describe the different characters, the scenery, everything, is so amazing. You have a real gift. Thank you so much for your stories, and get to work soon on another chapter! Thanks again. xoxo
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
Loved! Loved! Loved! This chapter!!!! I really liked all the family embarrassment and I love that the action is picking up! I did not expect Volturi to be here already!!!
Reviewer: sushichild (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
please write another chapter, i really liked it, it was gd and i think you got Nessie spot on which is hard to do as breaking dawn doesn't show a lot of Nessie's personality
Reviewer: sushichild (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
please write another chapter, i really liked it, it was gd and i think you got Nessie spot on which is hard to do as breaking dawn doesn't show a lot of Nessie's personality
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
OME! i need to know what happens!!!!
i hope you are feeling better, because i want more chapters. k thanks :] lol.
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Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
Good work! Can't wait to read the next part!
Reviewer: eyesinthenight (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 33: Waiting is the Hardest Part
Pretty good, liked how the storyline seems like something Stephenie would write. Great action and suprises. Keep writing!
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