Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

hey glad your back, hpe your finals went well. I'm in college to so I know exactly what you mean...Anyway great chapter, like mother like daughter. Update soon!!!

 

Reviewer: missycullen2010 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

OMG.... This is an awesome story... Cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

thanks you.

im glad you like it.

ill get the next one ASAP

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

oh man, i saw this coming.. dumb dumb girl.. she has everything and she's willing to throw it away over someone who apparently didn't care enough about his own life to get on the volturi's bad side. i hope all ends well.. thanx for writing, i love the story.. chasity

Author's Response:

yes, i know you all saw it coming, but what the hell else is she going to do!

but you gotta give her some credit, maybe next chapter you'll see. idk.

 

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm

You and me both Hannah, you and me both.  Cliffies have become my new favorite way of ending a chapter.  So I can't really get angry with you for ending your's that way too.  It wasn't hard to figure out she was still planning on leaving, but that doesn't mean I'm not upset by it.  I so look forward to the next chapter, especially now that your finals are over and you have the whole summer ahead of you.  It does stink that the story is almost at an end, but I guess they all have to end at somepoint right?

Next Chapter Soon Hannah (and I'll work my butt off to get my next chapter out soon too!)

FYI my chapter 14 is up!

Manda

Author's Response:

yes, i know you all saw it coming, but what the hell else is she going to do!

and i hope i'll be able to get a lot done this summer. maybe even start a new story!

and chapter fourteen is the first thing on my agenda tomorrow when i get home.

thanks, Amanda. for everything. youre great, really :)

Reviewer: sallyro (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

Nahuel bit Huilen and changed her, so why can't his brother change a human?  

Author's Response:

thats kinda like his power.

he's got this wicked venom that is super powerful. so powerful it can kill a vampire.

these hybrids are tricky. the rules change. Alice cant see them, Demetri can't track some of them.

add another chromosome and it messes everything up!

Reviewer: britknee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

ahhhhhh wait wait wait woa what happened woa thats not cool love ya and all but you sooopooo cant end like that ugh i cant wait

Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday

oh i love this story...and btw, i always use the switzerland thing when claiming nuetrality which is why i lmao when i read that...i was like "thats friggiin weird" haha keep writing

Reviewer: candigirl427 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

AMAZING!!

Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

WOW!!!!! im loving it.. Im new to the twilighted site, i just got into the fan fiction. I loved the twilight saga and was sad when i finished Breakind Dawn because that was the last book of the saga... but lucky me i found your story, seems like a continuation of the books, not like those other fan fiction that are soooo not like the real charachters.. keep up the good work.,,,, and please post some new chapters 

Reviewer: sexcii (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

this story was amazing to read..keep it up.ur truly an amazing writer:)

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species

i'm so waiting for the next chapter, it's great,

Reviewer: Bill Brasski (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either

So far I am into the story.  I feel yourself getting more comfortable with the writing and story is starting to flow better.  I would like to see Bella a little more upset that Jake is inlove with her 7 year old daughter.  I mean parents never want to see their kids develop a love life.  I'm sure Edward won't take it so well.

I am committed to the story now and will finish it.  From some reviews I've read it only continues to get better.

Reviewer: taylorelise101 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes

That was honestly really good for your first time! I would have liked to see a little bit more detail but other than that very good.