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Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Talk About Awkward Situations!
Big Daddy Edward is pretty intimidating. Well done.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 9: Begining of Forever
It was even better the second time. I like Nessie's voice, all of the thoughtfulness of Bella, but with less editing.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
Por supuesto. Lovely. Something DID finally work out right. I loved Jake making fun of clumsy Bella. It's funny to think that Nessie never knew her that way. Keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
Who doesn't love a Southern drawl? 'Uncle Jasper' was perfect, Ican't wait to hear Jacob talk his way out of this....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 6: Did I Miss the Memo or Something?
Jake can be so dense. You said it's fun to write Jake's POV, hr's fun to read, too. It totally shines through.
Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Wow! Surprisingly, I didn't see the end of this chapter coming! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: AH! im so glad i was able to surprise you!
you have no idea how happy that makes me!
i will work double time now to get you another chapter soon!
Reviewer: tanana_with_me (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Wow. Big shock at the end. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: that is exactly what i was going for.
A SHOCK! glad to know i got it.
i'll try and get you more as soon as i can! thanks for sticking around so long!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Gah! You are pure evil with these cliffhangers!
What in the world is Nahuel doing in Italy? That was a little too easy for Renesmee to find him, but I like it! It's a good thing she didn't go to Brazil instead! I just hope that Cauis isn't having anyone tracking her moves and followingher. Like she remembered, Caius was obviously hiding something, but what?
Nessie's dream was a little freaky, and very similar to the one's she had before Caius showed up n Forks. I hope she remembers that and doesn't do anythign even more stupid than leaving Jacob and her family behind.
PLEASE relieve us all from this nasty cliffy! UPDATE SOON!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: hehehe! [i dont know how to "spell" an evil laugh, so pretend thats what that is :)]
Nahuel is in Italy because....you'll just have to wait.
and trust me, nothing, as you should know, is easy when in the world of Twilight.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: Begining of Forever
NIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCE!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
GO JAKEY!! GO JAKEY!!! GO JAKEY!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Contemplation
CRAP! CRAP! CRAP! CRAP!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 6: Did I Miss the Memo or Something?
Werewolves are SO damn stubborn!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversatoins
Well i got faith in you,though why do i get the feeling Jacob has done something he shouldnt have?
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either
Well wait ya think happens when you DONT tell people youve imprinted on them!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Age
Stupid! Stupid! Jacob!!!!
Reviewer: YuriSeth (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
keep it coming !!
Author's Response: as fast as possible.
i promise
:)
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversatoins
Your Edward and Bella are perfect parents, not that I'd expect less. They better get it together, though and help her. Nessie's gonna be pissed when she finds out they already knew Jake imprinted on her! Hell hath no fury, I'd bet....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either
Yummy Jake chapter. He IS still thicker than boar's hide. What an idiot. I am in love with your story, can't wait till I catch up with everyone else!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Age
Perfect fight. She is a lot like Bella, all conniving and then watching it backfire. I am totally giggling like a thirteen-year-old! Heehee! Poor Jake, Nessie is going to drive him as crazy as Bella did!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her
Tension already! Fun, fun. I like your Jake voice, he's a great narrator.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
Okay. So I know I'm like months behind everyone else. So sorry for just noticing your story - I try to check the most recent stuff regularly, but I can't keep up! (Which totally feeds my addiction, so I won't complain) That having been said, I lost you in the shuffle and now I'm a little bummed, so I'll try to make it up to you.
I love your intro. Who doesn't want to know what happens to Jake & Nessie, right? Your storyline's probably already set, but let me plead for Nessie to get the opportunity to kick some butt. She missed all the good stuff in the first four books, she's more than due, ya know? Plus, she'll do an awesome job....
Can't wait to read your version! Thanks for all the hard work!
Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Very nicely done! I like where the story is going... can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: im pleased you like it!
ill keep them coming.
as quickly as i can put pen to paper
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
ok, question, when she gave the Vanessa Wolf ID but was called Mrs Black, was that an error? or was she so distracted she accidentally gave the wrong ID? another awesome chapter by the way!
Author's Response: ok, she gave Vanessa Wolfe when she was flying to Seattle from Port Angeles. Bella changed her name on Renesmee's new passport and i.d. when she called the airline the day before, when she left Jacob to go on a hunt by herself, she reserved the flight under Vanessa Wolfe, because that is what the i.d. she had said.
it wasnt until she left Jacob's and got the new documents from Jasper's study that she found out about the Vanessa Black. [Bella figured the next time theyd be leaving the country was on their honeymoon, so she changed the name to Black, knowinf Renesmee would like that.] Since her passport said Black, when she booked her flight to Florence, she had to use that name, which is why Lawrence called her Mrs. Black.
i hope that helped. i guess that was kinda confusing. i know how everything happens,so it makes sense in my brain.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Arg! I've never enjoyed a cliffhanger as much as I do your (nor been more impatient to have the next chapter!) :D
Just gets better and better! Can't wait to see where you're headed with this (got some guesses--wonder if I'm right!).
Author's Response: ooh, ooh! please!
tell me your guesses. i wanna know!!!
im glad you like it, they'll keep coming as soon as i put pen to paper.
Reviewer: apple (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
ah this story is amazing
im so glad nahuel was there :)
cant wait to see what happens :)
Author's Response: crazy little hybrids.
pop out of nowhere, dont they. hehe
ill try not to make you have to wait too long.
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