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Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Can't Wait
Woohoo, on to the awkward fun stuff! Great chapter, Ness and Jake are too sweet.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 26: Why Wait?
Jacob should have talked to Edward and Bella first. Just because you think it doesn't mean you have to say it out loud. That boy doesn't have an edit button. :)
I can't wait to see how the big announcement goes!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 25: Ball Busting
I was wondering whose balls were getting busted, I love that EVERYONE'S balls got busted. Funny!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: Re-Routing
You are a crazy girl, I'm sure your crest is wicked awesome!
The comment from Edward about getting his house back for the night was hilarious. A rarely seen but deadly Edward funny!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dreams
Your oranges are just fine. Don't make your story something it's not and bend to anyone's preference. Ness is young and they're relationship is pretty physical. I agree with you, they have forever. No rush.
Her dream was menacing, I can't wait for the showdown!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 22: Do Something You Idiot
Beautiful, Jake finally came clean. Edward trusts them more than I expected, but having him out of the house makes for some interesting plot twist possibilities.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Gioierilla
Business time, Cullen style. I am loving this. The presents were so sweet, exactly what her party should've looked like.
Now if only Jake can tell her about his infatuation with Bella....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: WOW
I am totally feeling this. This is exactly what a birthday party at the Cullens' would be like - lots of family and company manners, great presents and fabulous clothes.
Jake better come clean soon!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 19: Cryptic Messages
What an entrance. Perfect job!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: I Wasn't Going to Kidnap Her
Jacob IS an awesome uncle. He needs to come clean to Ness about his Bella history or it's going to bite him in the butt. Not that planning ahead is his specialty....
Fun chapter, I hope the birthday party lives up to the hype! ;)
Reviewer: Paige_Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
OMG very good PLZ update soon.
Author's Response: as soon as i can, promise!
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
uhmmmm......somethings up!
Author's Response: indeed!
muahaha!
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
OMGSH...im hooked!! what happens next? nessie and jake is so cute together..what does jake think about this..so looking forward to the next chapter! please write soon...thanks!
Author's Response: i love when i reel in newbies! im so glad you like it!
arent they just adorable. though i would pick Edward any day of the week, i would mind Jake so much. Renesmee is the luckiest girl in the world. she has both!
ill get more soon, promise!
Reviewer: miccy (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
love this ficcy. cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: thanks!
ill get you more as soon as i can!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: Happy Birthday
What a sweet family portrait. I can't wait for Nessie's party!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast
Wow. Their dynamic is perfect. How funny to watch Jake be the one to put the brakes on for once.
Amazing update, I loved this chapter!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15: Family Histories
Of course Nessie is part of history! Awesome chapter.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Crap! This Isn't Good
Kinda spooky, you got the mood totally right!
Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Wow, I can't even guess where this is going... I must admit that it totally irritated me that Ness would hurt Jacob like that... even if it was to help a friend. Great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Author's Response: i love that i've got you guessing. it gives me the warm fuzzies.
and i know, it pisses me off that she left him too. [i know that that is so weird to say considering i made her do it, but hey. she's kind of developed a life of her own.] reckless like her mother. i mean, when you feel like you owe someone, you've got to pay them back.
i'll get you a new chapter ASAP! thanks for diggin it!
Reviewer: Wants2BeACullen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
I could not review until I was finished with all of your chapters!!! You have dragged me into Nessie and Jacob's story just like SM dragged us in to Edward and Bella's :) Keep the chapters coming!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i love it when i get newbies! welcome to my inability to accept that the series was over!
and those are the best compliments i could ever get. and comparison to Stephanie Meyer is absolutely more than i deserve, but i will totally take it!
thanks so much. and i'll get more out soon!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
I LOVE IT! It is really good, I would like to have a jacob pov...and a edward point of view...or a Alice pov....that way we can see what is going on with the family. Very good so far, have to admit, I had to think about what the story was about at first, but you wrote the first few paragraphs good that I knew what had happened.
Alright- UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: i love you for loving it!
maybe i'll do a side shot from Edward's pov. i havent tried his pov, and i've been itching too. i think you've just made up my mind for me. i cant promise you when this will happen. its either delay of the next chapter while i write that. or wait a chapter or two before. i'll let you decide. if you want it after the next chapter, which will be up soon, [i'm going to post it when im done] or if you want the next Jacob POV then the next Renesmee POV then an Edward side shot. its up to you.
just shoot me an email or another review, and i'll get right on whichever once you want!
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
really, it is one of the best stories i've read here, and one of my favourites, keep up xx
Author's Response: you make me smile
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
Ooh my gosh, this story just keeps on getting better and better. You're a genius!! How do you come up with these things... I so love it, love it, love it. I know that story was false. But I really hope they told Nahuel something about Nessie and he's there to save her aswel and not that he's involved. Well, I'll just have to wait and see. So I'm so at the edge of my seat for the next update. Can't wait for more fun.
Author's Response: oh! youre just too awesome. im no genius, i asure you, but i try my best.
and i have no clue where the heck this comes from. after Breaking Dawn, i was just so happy Jacob got Nessie. team Edward through and through, but i was a little torn there in Eclipse between the two. i truly loved Jacob, just not Bella and Jacob. so, once Breaking Dawn was done, and everything was "safe," i had to know what Jake and Renesmee's life was like when she grew up. and tada! GRAVITY MOVES!
Nahuel has very interesting information. i'll get working on the next chapter so you can come back from the edge. DONT JUMP! it will be up shortly!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
Your Emmett was very funny - intimidating, goofy, just perfect. I love just getting to hear everybody haging out and teasing each other. This was one of my favorite chapters so far.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 11: Busted
I think Bella let Nessie off too easily. No gory details during the sex talk, no ultimatums. I can't wait to see how they do around the family.
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