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Reviewer: maryann 6 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
that is so good!
plz write more soon
Author's Response: thanks!
im writing as fast as i can!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
I've read your story all the way through and love it! Very interesting, I'm hooked! I can't wait for you to upate!!!!! Please do it soon :)
Author's Response: always great to hook a newbie.
ill have more ASAP
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Glad to hear you're putting pen to paper! This was awsome, so of course has left me panting for the next installment. Nice cliffie, just in the right spot considering the length of the chapter already, and makes it feel like the old serial shows! :D
Like that the receptionist was a lot like Gianna, but of course wouldn't be her. That was fun.
Ren's musings about Bella's journey throught the same place was well done and a great touch.
Can only imagine how out of his mind Jake is right now, if she's this bad. Felix was histerical.
In general,Bravo! Thanks for coming back to it! (Now I have to quit playing hookie and get back to writing my own fic, or else I'm gonna be producing the same kind of time lag! lol Some chaps are just harder than others, eh?) :D
Author's Response: aw thanks :)
yeah, look in the next chapter's ANs to see what exactly hapened to Gianna. it was one of those questions that came about and i had to answer. but it really didnt apply to any part of the story.
im glad you liked the Bella thing. i was scared people were going to think it was lame or boring, but it was fun to write.
oh and trust and believe, Jake is not a happy camper right now!
definitely get writting. it feels SO SO SO good :)
Reviewer: Arabella Montego (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: You Go Too Fast
I'm still loving this story. But I'm ready for the good part now. I'm sure you catch my drift.
Author's Response: i mean, things dont get too sour ;)
my best friend says she wants to write the lemon for the story, so once she catches up, she'll pop one out.
Reviewer: Arabella Montego (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
I think you did a good job capturing Emmett. He is a loveable character and you portrayed him well. Him and Rosalie are just as they are in the book... But where's my Alice Cullen?! She's my favorite.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
What is this? You don't update for, what was it, 3 months? And this is what you leave us all with .. a cliffhanger?!? Ugh! :P Lol!
As much as Edward doesn't like Jake, or at least is getting used to having him around for the past seven plus years with his daughter, I'm sure he would be more than happy to kill Felix right now for even thinking that Nessie and Nahuel are more than just friends. :P And the same would most likely go for Jake as well! Lol!
“No trouble in paradise, I hope.” Absolutely not, Felix. Don't even go there! :P
Really great chapter! I think you've captured Aro's voice rather well here; the calm, collected and powerful!
I can't wait to find out what Renesmee has up her sleeve with that charm! And how she plans to explain everything and point out Caius' behavior - I just hope it wasn't a group effort in the way he was acting, and what he was hiding.
Please update soon! :D Sooner than later! (hopefully without another nasty cliffy!) :P
Author's Response: hahahaha! im sorry im sorry!
i had to make sure everyone was still interested!
Renesmee is crafty, dont you worry, but she is also pretty scared. everthing is about to come out.
just hold on! and you KNOW there will be a cliffy :)
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
NOOOOO... i wanted more.. i hate hangin off a cliff.. please post more soon.. thanx for writing
chasity
Author's Response: muahaha! you know how i love my cliffhangers!
i'll be doing a lot of writing Saturday, so look for a new chapter on sunday-ish.
no promises though :)
Reviewer: Oli Duval (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
I'm LOVING your story!! It's been hard to concentrate on anything else the past few days! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I hope to see more VERY soon!
xoxo
-Rachell
Author's Response: oh! dont let me distract you from life! haha
i'm going to try to get something up by the end of the week. i foresee a lot of time for me to write on saturday. :)
thanks so much for reading. i'm so glad you like it. it makes me feel less crazy when someone appreciates the crazyness from my mind!
Reviewer: Arabella Montego (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
I really enjoy reading this story. I love how it's beginning to parallel Edward and Bella's relationship when she was human, what with Jacob spending the night innocently with Nessie. I'll keep reading for sure!
Reviewer: Arabella Montego (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: Finally, Something Works Out Right
I really enjoy reading this story. I love how it's beginning to parallel Edward and Bella's relationship when she was human, what with Jacob spending the night innocently with Nessie. I'll keep reading for sure!
Author's Response: haha most definitely what i was going for.
i'm glad you dig it! keep reading, youre not even at the good part yet :)
Reviewer: emzlovesmidi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
omg please update sonn !
Author's Response: i hoping i can get a new one up by the end of the week.
cross your fingers!
Reviewer: Mszblullen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
One word: MAGNIFICIENT you've got talent!!!
Author's Response: oh youre too great!
thanks! i hope you like the next chapter too!
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
i'm so happy you are back. Yours was the first store i read and i'm glad i can do it again. update soon please.
Author's Response: oh thanks. im so glad to be back.
i have to juggle school and work, along with writing. but i'll get a chapter up ASAP!
im thinking by the ende of the week. thanks for sticking around, and i hope you keep on sticking around!
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Ah, the plot thickens! Fantastic chapter!!!
Author's Response: oh its about to get real thick!
ahahah! haha!
glad you dig it! :)
Reviewer: Baby_twi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Things are about to hit the roof. I hope everything goes the way Nessie and Nahuel wants it to go. Can't wait for the next chapter, things are really getting hot now.
Author's Response: crap is getting deep. most definitely.
:)
Reviewer: OzNimbus (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Glad to see a new chapter. This has been a really good story. Welcome back & I hope to see more soon!
Author's Response: more as soon as i can. promise
Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Great update :)
Author's Response: :) thanks
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
What a cruel cliffhanger!!! They make such a great team, I wonder how Aro will react? Is he going to pretend they haven't told him anything incriminating until he can work out a plan? Where are Edward and Bella?
At least we won't have to wait three months to find out... :)
Author's Response: i know i am so sorry. :) FORGIVE, FORGIVE!
and if you've ready any of my other chapters, and i know you have, you know my cliffhangers can get pretty gnarly! :) just cause i've been away fro three months doesnt mean that is gonna change!
oh, the wheels are turning in thier minds, trust and believe. And Bella and Edward, along with Jake and the family are on their way. flying across the ocean takes time ;)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
HANNAH!!!! Oh how I've missed you, BB!!!! This was pure perfection, so glad you got inspired by reading that other story...I'll have to check it out. No need for me to say it but as always I loved the chapter. So glad you seem to be on a role right now.
I just wanted to let you know, my new story has started posting here on Twilighted if you are interested in reading it. It is AU-AH, so if you don't read it I'll understand, I know you like your post BD stories. The title is Burning Up...if you do read it, of course I want to know what you think.
Can't wait to find out what Aro thinks about what is going on. Hope that next chapter gets done soon!!!!
Manda
Author's Response: hello darling :)
i've missed you too. i was just thinking about how pissed i was going to be if i got on here and didnt have a review from you!
you know me and my cliffies. oh, how i love them! i've got a few pages of the next chapter written. i'm thinking by the end of the week it'll be ready to post.
i'm not going to promise anything, because you are right, i love my Post-BD storied. but i may check Burning Up out. just for you :)
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Glad to see you back!
Author's Response: i'm so glad to be back!
thanks :)
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 40: Play the Hero
Great chapter! I squealed when I saw the update.What a cliffie though. I'm a fan of New School as well, but from what I understand Lipsmacked isn't going to finish any of her stories, which is so sad because her writing is wonderful.
Author's Response: and why the hell isnt she finishing?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
she is going to kill me!!
i was quite excited myself to post a new chapter. i've finally gotten the writing bug back, so bear with me. between term papers and tests, i'll pop out another chapter asap!
Reviewer: pianoloverr7 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 34: Alpha
wow! i really want to read the next chapter, but im running on borrowed energy right now =[ so so soooooo good!
Reviewer: thelamb (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
My best friend wrote this and shes the shit and there is more to come and its great:)
Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 39: Explanations and Confrontations
i'm in love with this story, you are a genious!!!!! please write some more i've been dying to know what happens next!!! =D
Reviewer: Aimless_Pi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 39: Explanations and Confrontations
I hope you continue this storyline. It has such potential to be fantastic. I am really enjoying it, but you have n't posted any new chapters in a while.
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