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Reviewer: jessmakayla (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2014 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 28: Dead Man Walking
I loved this chapter and all the rest.
Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2013 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
Great story.
Reviewer: Isabella627 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species
Hi, maybe I misunderstood: but didn't Nahuel create Huilen directly after his birth? If he was able to change a Human why would Tuconu not be? And wouldn't be his mission be to create other hybrids, not vampires?
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 10: Talk About Awkward Situations!
must say that i find edward to be a teensy bit hypocritical here - he slept over all the time with bella, and he took her away from her dad after she'd only been there less than 2 years.
Reviewer: HattieGood (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 18: I Wasn't Going to Kidnap Her
Love this story. I like it the most when stories are told from Jacob or Renesmee's point of view and this is just that!
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
I looked for this on ffn but I couldent find it... guess I'll just have to read it here :) unless you tell me where to find it that is... I like it so far
Reviewer: socalaryangal (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
great story
Reviewer: socalaryangal (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
I thought you did a great job.I know this is finished and reviews are really not needed for you anymore but b4 i started reading your story I read the reviews first so i think they help other readers.thanks
Reviewer: eddie_lickmyas (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 19: Cryptic Messages
JUST SAYING, JACOBS A WEREWOLF AND HAS SHORT HAIR.
Reviewer: Houston vamp (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Muscles Loves Vampira
I think you did a great job capturing the essence of Emmett and every other character. I am so enjoying reading your story!
Reviewer: Houston vamp (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 11: Busted
I just found you and this wonderful story - so far so good - I like it!
Reviewer: lablab73 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
This was an awesome story! My favorite Jacob/Renesmee yet. I haven't been reviewing all along because its complete and I didn't see the point, but now that its over, I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. Thank you!
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
Thanks for a great story
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 37: Flight to Fight
I think its a trap
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 36: Calm Before the Storm
Damn it Ness
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 35: Hybrid Species
SHe is going to up and leave!
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Conversatoins
Enjoyed the chapter and you're right, in many peoples case the chpaters tend to get easier and easier
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Damn! Didn't See that One Coming at All! Either
Both of them seem to be messing things up
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Age
Wrong move on Nessie's part
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 2: Her
Now I'm curious as too what Ness wants to talk about
Reviewer: luv2beloved2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
Thought I have read this but doesn't seem familiar.
Reviewer: basaltone (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Changes
I saw your note that you have published an edited version of this on another website. I couldn't find it. Could you tell me more specific info on the website and the title of the story there? I would love to read this story again with your changes. This is my favorite fan fiction I have read so far.
Reviewer: basaltone (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
I was puzzled that Jacob gave her eggs for breakfast when she hasn't eaten anything voluntarily for the whole story except chocolate and strawberries. It would make it clearer if you added eggs to her list of acceptable foods back in the earlier chapters. Thanks for the story, some of the best stuff I have read in a long time.
Author's Response: great point. this is my first time writing, well, ANYTHING! so i'm glad you've caught that for me. im in the process of editing Gravity, so that is something i'll definitely go back and fix!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: basaltone (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
Wow, this is much better than many of the publishd books I have read. I hope you are pursuing your own novel ideas, the world needs more good writing and less of the terrible 'genre' novels that are out now. I am a little puzzled at the NC-17 rating, however. I thought it was done very tastefully and was a lot less graphic than most novels today. In fact, my sister, who has been published, was told that she had to add much more graphic sex to her novels if she wanted to get them in print. It is an unfortunate reality. I look forward to reading your first published novel someday.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
i rated it NC-17 because i origonally was going to add a lemon in there. But when the time came, i just couldnt write it.
Reviewer: lipstickatthemailbox (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 47: Unification
Thanks so much for the wonderful story! I wish I could adequately let you know what a tremendous source of stress relief your work has been. Many thanks.
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