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Reviewer: Secret (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 09:50 PM · On: His...At Long Last

Please continue this story, it's still one of my absolute favorites.

Reviewer: bolissa (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 09:20 PM · On: His...At Long Last

You've got to be kidding me. :|

Reviewer: bolissa (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 09:06 PM · On: His...At Long Last

I think this story should be renamed as "Pissed Off, In Pain, and Crying...At Long Last.

Reviewer: numiii (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:49 PM · On: His...At Long Last

Amazing :) I haven't stopped reading since this morning XD

You are a really good author. The vivid descriptions really help me visualize everything. Especially the lemoney parts >D

I love it!!!

Reviewer: Acm1978 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 04:25 AM · On: His...At Long Last

Loved it! 

Reviewer: motherofthree (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 03:01 AM · On: His...At Long Last

very different view on their first time..

Reviewer: Teao (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 03:00 AM · On: His...At Long Last

Well, i enjoyed that an awful lot more than I enjoyed New Moon. Very well done- I really look forweard to reading more!Well, i enjoyed that an awful lot more than I enjoyed New Moon. Very well done- I really look forweard to reading more!

Reviewer: leeses (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 01:27 PM · On: His...At Long Last

this qaa a great story do u intend to finish it hope so .

Reviewer: leeses (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 01:10 PM · On: His...At Long Last

my god you are good at this lol.all hot and bothered

Reviewer: leeses (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 11:59 AM · On: His...At Long Last

this is really good can not stand the suspence lol

Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 03:36 PM · On: His...At Long Last

Alyssa, I love your fic. Its so much better than the book, its a lot more realistic, I mean with the discussions, the situations and all. You show how a real relationship is when two people love each other so much that that same love gets in the way. Please write soon 'cause I'm digging this fic sooo much!! I need to know what happens, if Bella answers the phone or not and how is she's going to deal with her parents and her new state.

Take care,

Isabella.

 

PD: again.... IM LOVING IT!!!

Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 05:51 PM · On: His...At Long Last

"bella,love,were free. baby u set me free". awwww.... who wouldnt want their man to tell them that? thats my favorite line

Reviewer: MiZpamier (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 11:20 AM · On: His...At Long Last

PLEASE I"M BEGGING; CONTINUE!!!

 

 

I really really like this story!

 

Xx

Reviewer: nhperryman (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 12:05 PM · On: His...At Long Last

I just happened upon this story a few days ago and now I am finished.  It is GREAT!!  Are there more chapters to come, I truly hope so!!  I love the lemons, I can actually almost see what Edward is doing to Bella and how it is friving her over the edge, and I can see how she drives hom over the top too!  Makes wish I was Bella soooo bad!

PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING!!

Nicole

Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 02:01 PM · On: His...At Long Last

Brilliant story so far! But it needs a LOT better beta thers way too many errors and missing words :l Rating decreased for that reason ;)

Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 12:32 PM · On: His...At Long Last

domeward,I LOVE ME SOME DOMEWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 10:43 AM · On: His...At Long Last

if he wasnt being his normal self, an ass, i would think there was something wrong with him. sometimes i would love to kick his ever loving smoking hott ass. i really hope he redeems himself.

Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 09:29 AM · On: His...At Long Last

now thats a smexy love scene!! although i burst out laughing when she yelled emmetts name. i could quit laughing, i loved it!

Reviewer: carob (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 11:34 AM · On: His...At Long Last

My heart is in my mouth.

Reviewer: dangerouslove00 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 11:15 AM · On: His...At Long Last

"Well Bella honey do you think he's ... gay"

lol too funny, you gotta love Renee but I'm happy I dont have a mom like that.

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 05:39 PM · On: His...At Long Last

Ok so you don't realy need my review, but I have to tell you the story.  So I'm a Edward crazed fan, and that's what I come to the site to read, so I got a hook in your story.  I wanted to leave, I even skimmed a few pages trying to con myself into going, but I got so wrapped up, even though its so so so of canon that I just had to keep reading and now I'm at your end and I am sad I am done.  So while its not what I came to read cause its not really SM's Bella and Edward, I felt comfortable playing in their imaginiation because the writing was so well enthrawling.   Could have done without some of the details like the day after dirt and would have loved more in other places, but I gotta say I'm waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 01:11 AM · On: His...At Long Last

I think I reviewed this already, but I wanted to tell you again how much I loved it.

Just one little remark: "hot liquid"? Edward's a vampire, it's supposed to be cold :). I've noticed this in a lot of stories though, so it's probably just because we write what we have experienced ourselves in some way or another.

Reviewer: gemini907 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:35 PM · On: His...At Long Last

awwww I thought they were gonna christen the piano. lol :-) your story is really good 

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:49 AM · On: His...At Long Last

This was a most excellent story, and I really enjoyed it - especially the lemons. How unfortunate that you've abandoned it and your readers. Too bad. . . I hope you pick it up again soon.

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:23 PM · On: His...At Long Last

I'm not use sure what anybody else is thinking after reading this chapter. . .but I'M thinking I need me an Edward! Daaaamn!

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