Love this story!  Do you really want to know where there was a weakness in the story?  I knew they were going against the Volturi the minute they were in Italy!

Author's Response:

I wouldn't count that as a weakness :). I'd say it's more of a clever clue.

Have you finished this story?  Is it posted anywhere else?  It is too good to just leave us hanging.

Xanath

Author's Response:

Regretably I haven't finished the story yet, however I do intend to. I just have not had the time what with my novel and my classes. I promise not to leave you hanging for ages. You can look for updates on my facebook page. http://www.facebook.com/pages/Oceans-Muse-Creations/303302534205

            You’re wife’s days are numbered  los dias de tu esposa estan contados.  and soldier is Soldado but everything else is excelent

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for correcting me. If I can find time to fix it, I will. I think I accidentally left the "o" off soldado and got used to typing it that way :-P woops. 

i'm excited to read this story yippee hugs

Brilliant we need more! Keep going we want to know whats going to happen next!!!! :D

I really hope I don't have to wait till summer to read this...but if I do I will wait patiently..LOVE LOVE LOVE this story...you are an awesome writer and you rock!! Hope school is going well for you!!!

Author's Response:

I really hope you don't have to wait until summer to read it. Sadly, with the end of the school year drawing so quickly to a close and finals approaching, it's looking more and more like you'll have to :-/ . I don't want to rush the next chapter and not do it justice. Maybe I'll find a one shot to upload and wet your whistle until then :) .

Hope the next chapter comes soon!

really like your story, the way of writing and plotting keeps me hanging on every page.

but it has been a while since you posted, have a block?

keep going, this story is worth it!

 

OMG OMG OMG~!

We are getting there yes!!!!

I love the hope that he has, now I'm ready to see the plot unfold and how you put it together...or should I say put them together and what clever little story you create for Maria's plan and Jasper's liberation fro harm!

The bulk of it should be in then next chapter...(wining) I've been waiting so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm shooting for at least twenty chapters, so you may have to wait longer ;) .

We shall see. Thanks for reading (and especially for reviewing!)

~Arielle

Well, damnit....time is not running out! It's just about to bust mister!

So please tell me Alice gets to take down Maria and Bella gets to give Victoria her jsut commings! ( is she a vamp already I forgot)!

So is it Carlie and Bella that mention the whole seeing visions of my lover dealio?!?!? LOL Nice addition!

I can't help but feel that Maria and Voctoria kinda know the Jig is up on some level and have a sinister plan! And I'm all about it! but please don't draw out there BS to much. The hope in this chapter had really help you propel the stroy further and it sits well with me at least!

I thinks it's a sin that you don't have a ton of reviews to this great A/J story!**** Keep up the awsome work!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I have a lot of plans for this story. I think it will be longer than "Visions of You" by quite a bit.

On a side note: this story takes place between New Moon and Eclipse, so Bella is still a human. In the end, it will tie both books together.

I'm going to keep going with this series until I finish it, no matter how long it takes. I'm sorry if updates take so long at times. School takes presedence over writing fiction, but I will complete this as long as there are fans of it around to read. :)

Thanks for the review!

 

OoO... a sequel has begun! What's next? How long do you think this story is going to run? I'm interested :)

Author's Response:

With the way it plays out in my mind, there is a slight possibility there will be a third. I'm not positive as of yet.

Hmm... at the theater... Alice had been seeing it earlier, why didn't they go there first? I guess they just got Jasper back, so that makes some sense. What are the crazy wolves thinking???

Oh well.. let's see what craziness comes next :)

Author's Response:

(Sorry for the late response!)

Jasper and Alice were trying to prevent the vision from coming true. They knew Maria had something to do with the theater and they were trying to avoid it. Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the sequel!